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Old 02-17-2024, 09:33 PM   #3341
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Destructive to a culture, deconstruction
From the vultures in conjunction with the posers
They can't function without frontin for exposure
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Old 02-19-2024, 08:08 AM   #3342
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pussy this was over when you fucked up on your closer
you’re Just another poser tryna come at someone doper
since you looking for exposure, imma open up your ribs
smoke ‘em on the griddle if there’s a bone I wanna pick
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Impale them on a pole as it snows upon a bridge
Stealing souls as they appearing bold
My dear, the rarest troll
The mere sight of my strambol
Is putting mold upon your bitch
And my appearance is cold like the eyes of Gilgamesh
So, he sits still and rests, light the cigarette
Figures he figures out the filter's fresh
The stench left a dense taste
Stop escaping to nowhere
Time doesn't exist
When paying no attention to the mentions starts as they switch shapes.

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Your style? Battle rhymes & mixtapes.
Built like a chewed up twig a chimp ate
Chose to represent...then switched states.
Forgetting about how the script changed.
Skipped blame right to denial with quick pace.
Damn right I'll grief em, that's a fixed game.
So save all your big plays for the bleachers.
All you would, or did say is for the dreamers.
We could send strays from your head to your Adidas.
Or them brothers will terminate you midway midday on the 10th day.
If you lie...
The sensei will correct those misdemeanors
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The luxury of rhyme is when you get to twist it up.
Kick up dust with a flip, hit it with the precision plus.
Back to play Bret Hart on you sitting ducks.
Hallelujah it's a sharpshooter who hasn't given up.
If there's a hold up, then we gotta stick em up.
You see what position does, clutch up ya armor.
See what happens with those quick to judge ya honor.
My weed got enough kickback to cause blunt force trauma.
While you hugging walls I'm having lunch with your mama.
Tried to split the bill til' she told me she wanted the tip...
I said "oh...is that why you didn't touch your water?".
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I’m a clutch performer, you’re nothing more than just a warm-up
while you’re cutting corners, I’m pushing forward like Russian borders.
This an ugly war of attrition, the guns are drawn in an instant
with full support from the British if I’m looking for your position.
I’m what Dumbledore is to wizards, or Hubble’s Law is to physics,
This a tug of war that you’re in with the Juggernaut when I’m spittin’.
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Old 03-10-2024, 04:51 AM   #3347
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God spoke my name & angels wept
now pay respect cuz i had ya'll waiting w/ baited breath
a fuckin specimen touched down, crack sidewalks when I take a step
answer talks weapon bangers but I got hellish anger
fuck skeletons, I have aborted babies in my closet dead on hangers
headless saviors, no brains, hear the long screams
sinning whores wear a poison crown of thorns for prom queen
I'll keep writing snuff til the stars fade & bite the dust
cuz I'm cold as deep space.. I could speed-skate on the sun's surface & turn it to an icey husk
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Your time is up. What’s a text rapper to a neck snapper?
If you cold as deep space, I guess that a make me SU(N) matter.
You’re not cold enough fermion this subject. This the End Level Boss round
won’t just alter ya physical appearance, I break skeletons on down to molecular compounds.
You mentioned that God sounded your name? Better pray for his blessing
Since you failed to impress him be thankful Lars even paid you attention.
What’s a Saint to The Messenger? I wrote the book you devout
so pay respect or you’ll have baited breath with a hook to the mouth.
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Old 03-13-2024, 05:49 AM   #3349
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If pride was the medicine, then they took it with doubt.
I'm towering over lesser men, my smoke lookin' like clouds
Why shouldn't I clown? Didn't you see the gesturin'?
Don't you see the good in it now before being jettisoned.
This is in remembrance of, not the representation seen
Regardless of what your measurements was, my equations mean
Enclosed I'm your squares route...twice that I am the divide.
Ad supported linguistics minus the likes of how I am defined.
There ain't many equal, therefore I jump the scale, defend that standard.
Flow so strong, so if you bump that whale get sent ass backwards.
Catch these hands like a countdown that'll end mathematics
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Your time is up. What’s a text rapper to a neck snapper?
If you cold as deep space, I guess that a make me SU(N) matter.
You’re not cold enough fermion this subject. This the End Level Boss round
won’t just alter ya physical appearance, I break skeletons on down to molecular compounds.
You mentioned that God sounded your name? Better pray for his blessing
Since you failed to impress him be thankful Lars even paid you attention.
What’s a Saint to The Messenger? I wrote the book you devout
so pay respect or you’ll have baited breath with a hook to the mouth.
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You should know clownings stupidness, there’s no doubt you’re losing this
when I erupt, my mouths as ruthless as the one on Mount Vesuvius
You should have drowned in uterus pond, you’re out your depth.
Funny how this thread I’m the first responder, and it’s my job to pronounce you dead.
I’ll take an ounce of flesh from ANY punk dissing…
We’re both weight lifters, but my blade bigger. We cut different.
You put slits in your own wrist, that’s why your tag-team fell hard
since Cashius sell farms… while Tragic self harms.
This faggots health bar on red. We both hope you die in the end
Trying to step here guarantees the highest success of all your suicidal attempts.
My guy is depressing, but if this MMA fan wanna argue
The hand I’m a spark you with the same one that flatlined Francis Ngannou.
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Back at hitting it's the back splitting tactician
Everything your act isn't...mad exquisite.
You glass visioned, got half fooled...
Til I put the mass in it, now that's optimistic.
Pay attention to what, you hear? Oughta listen
Now catch static like you done lost transmission.
Land vicious like an aboriginal untouched by man
Tune out your presence and paper cut my hands
Flow mean enough to uppercut Van Damme
BMX tricks, handle bars by the cusp while I can can
Maaan, damn..if they can't land a trick...
That's a personal problem, I don't understand that shit.
Either skate, grind, or get your tamogachi plugged in.
I'll ride this board in any form, call it Rodney Mullen
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In the throes of dreamscapes and nightshade
I’m the reaper, sent to collect in these last days
Cascade of tears draped on her cheeks so heavily
Each whimper from those lips like a god given melody
God, I want to taste your suffer
Succumb to every ache and discomfort
Rode a death cab with my cutie, stomach tied into knots
Belly filled to the brim with the eggs the spider dropped
She laughed then kissed me
Math and history
Trying to fight the past and calculate the odds stacked against me
Actually impressive how I amassed this massive list of enemies
Despite being the most passive mf on this half the Mississippi
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It was a resident evil how I hit the mixed greens.
She drank the vodka, I sipped the whiskey
Mishmashed drama bottled within each 16.
Every ounce weaseled out by her lips, then it hit me.
The haze was harder to see through, I'm blinded
She threw on a Carter beat loop & started to rhyme shit
I was tripped out, wasn't bothered nor excited.
Just took in the moment with a bottle of wine...
Shit got real when she started talking seriously
Only Yakuza offer a finger so this weirder to me.
In my mind is shoot her but I might be hearing the beat.
Before I knew it that lifespan was clear as her teeth.
When she went to clean, my disappearance was neat.
Until she found me on the computer...living nearer to me
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Bearing the breaking barrier,
Buried with berries, shaking the sacred out of them,
Shedding burden, devil dancing amidst the fallen worshipers.
Your eyes are reflecting the hurt in most of them,
The appetite shares your phobia,
Disguise the voltage, overloading a broken carrier,
A photo image of the vulture, picking at the carrion.
Sentiments want control of ya sense's like a sensei,
Consequences, why some types are denied the best way.
Heavens handed over a false utopia,
Never show up, that's just how I went to school,
You'll still get schooled,
I'll be the first to appear when the angel of death is sent for you,
Infernal internal bonds, piranhas in a public pool of swans,
Eclipse your star and show you who you really are.
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Regrets at your reminiscence
The dead have no business livin
I wish there’d been another way
I tried to tell you that love was pain
I tear the pages from my brain
Novelized by a Sutter Kane
Wait…

Incorrigible, I lay engorged in your gorgeous words
It’s all poetry, I’m hanging on the torso of every verse
More so since you been around, I’m starting to see colors again
Suddenly end? I’m making my vow to always come back again
You possess the medicine I need, homemade and unique
I’m an aimless fiend waiting weeks for a hit…your taste is so sweet
My brain is so weak, watching men hound you got me dogging myself
But I’m taking my heart from the shelf, ready to show you what sets me apart from pack…it’s getting harder to tell
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This flow, water to a well, ponder as I tell.
Water to a whale, wading in a pond is a hell.
Ponder it while I offer the platter to a cell.
V for Vendetta's, G's offered if he'd tell.
Let the mind wander, waft in the sale...
Now if he spout, all would topple as well.
Thoughts in the air, as if the water expelled.
Relationships waiver at the thought of his tail.
Well. Once you reach a certain depth take care
Space titan sub..time to accept ya fate is here.



Took the quill to scroll and unfold life's essence.
It's my will, I owe whenever I hold the mic.
Lessons for wise, visions for the dumb, instant message.
It's a mess in my mind but I expose the hype.
Never question the rhyme or how I'm stepping.
Got a foot on ego and a thumb in its nostril.
Writers couldn't see me with Jesus & his apostles.
Villages & hostels, ministers, what have you.
Deliver the scripture of this uncut manual.
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Deliver this mixture to disrupt cannibals,
Freedom nature mutates DNA signatures,
Circumcising muddled plasma from your corrupt cancer cells.

New day apostles see prophecies in vapor trails,
With the camper tools, I got the trailer hitch outback duct taped next to mirror pools.
No matter where you run we laugh at you,
It's the last supper so grab your spoons.

Siphon the well water from the mind shaft,no time to bathe when I find ass
comets in the cosmos like little babys looking for a tit,
Man and animal got most but your top ghost is still inanimate.

Loud shockwaves kept the block, well you're not safe even the cops hate.
Top grade lyrical blockade more spiritual than blasé

Violent talk.
reminders that the man behind the eyes ain't pure, shed your skin,
Turn your shiners off, bind and torture, don't lose yourself inside the scurge.
Inside it rains, that's how I remind the poor,
In the end deceivers will try to make you believe you just die of course.

What's the cost try and design a force
You can make a fortune by Supporting my higher thoughts.
Find me Lord I think my mind is lost,
at your local burger king begging for change to buy the sauce.

I, in self, stay wise, it helps,
whose willing to work for another who never denys itself,
Even after death they're baffled by the final boss,
Shackled to the devil,
Hanged man whose empress divides and crossed
slave till the slime is off.

divine divorce.
No matter where you go both I's are lost,
Closed eyes are forced, are they mine or yours?
Both times I lost it's okay, I sighed it off,

In my crosshairs I contain strains of the lost man,
Conspiracy thoughts spam your network
Jam up your whole program.

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They call me the caretaker, wrap & foldin' grams up.
Handcuffed over misdemeanors, old LAN stuff...
Online stand up led these fuckers to bumrushin' the cave
Backyard yokels arguing over brush in's with fate.
Got all your socials just to purchase Russian estate.
Ammo so big, what's the point of tucking a gauge?
I got... Issues & magazines, thinking of what to display
That says "don't fuck with J", my role demands what?
Cycling through ol' planned runs to throw hands up
For those who don't know style, don't flow, can't jump.
Juxtaposed prose and some, localized shows and what?
Just fuel to the fire, burning bridges, few to admire.
The honest truth that's seduced by the liar...
I let loose then inspire you, the recluse & the choir.
Now they know the man plus won't be confused by deniers...
Claim to be legends but them plateau's don't add up.
Polish up on what you would do, those plans need a sand buff.
Maaan what ....
That pen body built weird it got that Elon Musk.
See the skies my star Trek's like a Klingon does?
Got you trying so hard now they bring y'all up...
Like...hey remember them
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It's the quasi gentlemen
Communicating through your frog eyed television.
Heard y'all want my presence again.
Like the bag had the witness cross-examine Santa.
Get what you want without asking, manners.
Say please, the Opera, The phantom.
Weaponry designed for bananas.
Slip up, 99 shots sent again.
For any Curious George who jettisoned.
Get Jetson sent, Popeye estrogen.
Olive Oil, nah I call em spoiled.
Channel surf, observe the pot, watch it boil.
This easy as mac and cheese.
Put your heart in, I just laugh at geeks.
Got a view they wish they'd trademark.
Acid jeans Bobby Flay'd then stain washed.
Charlie Chaplin raised in a seance...
They say 'focus man' while in plain view.
Shaken visionaries, erratic playthrough.
This mystery machine has more rhymes than your ascot..
It's the most heard of but never seen...
Mufucka I'm living like a Sasquatch.
Got every lil' gorilla tryna play smart.
Each little monkey that wanted to praise y'all.
Playing odd one out...
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Red face

Y'all cause some doubt.
Just another reason to cross em out.
Got gumby stretching the line.
Police feeling pokey, checking the ride.
Used to mash and roll green.
Sam Rothstein, Slash, Don Quixote.
Took a different party to know me.
Stereo like me, holding the same ol' D.
My quips alone make sidewalk shatter.
What's all that side talk matter?
Now I roll scripts, get high off grammar.
Hit each line & fly off stanzas.
See how high you'll find my standards.
I got scales and a pair of graphs.
Charts to educate & share a laugh
It was I atop that hill you staring at.
Thats your cue bone, evolve Marowak.
Stare long enough, start staring back.
Lil ol scaredy cat gone Schrodinger.
When I'm done she looking Goldfinger.
Cold zinger, a unwrapped hostess
Still water for the backstrokers.
Called back brokers, dial tone lingers.
No remorse to the coded fingers.
Telltale floors meet Hans Landa.
Foreign influence caused drama.
Some sort of misstep alarmed the watcher...

Now they drag on what the God's treasure.
Tried to recreate the feeling...
What an odd texture
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