itt i tell you why you suck as a writer

[Rawn MD]

I expected better

[Mael]

What would I be like if I lay my hand gripped with ink against the paper to compose of the poetic arts?

Probably as bad as I just made that sound, meh.

[Destroyer]

sup

[Fig]

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

You constantly no show. The only thing I've read from you is that one open mic I liked. But it had no rhymes. You're just like PancakeBrah except without the writing skills to back up his discussion prowess.

BUT I beat you

[Cashius]

Me.

[TYSON]

Go ahead

[Eŋg]

you haven't read me enough. go on.

[Zombie]

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

You are the retarded version of Neighbor when you do swag and flow, if the retarded version of Neighbor was on life support and could only type by eye movement on an XBox controller. Your open mic audience is 5 year olds who can't read. If there were an infinite amount of Rawns typing for an infinite amount of time they would not be able to reproduce the letter H.

loll

[Split]

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

You are the exact opposite of the saying 'brevity is the soul of wit'. You use weird and complex language well and there are jewels in your verses but you're not confident enough to simply say what you're saying without fancying it up with Webster.com research.

Thanks, understood

Though all my language is organic/ home grown. I guess it does seem really stilted

[Split]

Originally Posted by oXus

you haven't read me enough. go on.

Is that Akira?

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by Split Eight

Thanks, understood

Though all my language is organic/ home grown. I guess it does seem really stilted

I like your writing heaps bro. This topic is a maelstrom.

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by oXus

you haven't read me enough. go on.

You're English, right? You post like Vulgar, Black, and Pent in discussion. Acting above. When in all reality you're obviously a cut below the top-top tier you think you're in. Your wording is great and your rhyming is strong but your own self worth makes you the poor man's version of the elite topicalist/open mic'er. You'll disagree with this, which only reinforces the accuracy of it.

[Darth Yoda]

be meaner/archaic want 2 laff more

[Eŋg]

Originally Posted by Split Eight

Is that Akira?

Tetsuo Shima. from Akira, yea.

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

You're English, right? You post like Vulgar, Black, and Pent in discussion. Acting above. When in all reality you're obviously a cut below the top-top tier you think you're in. Your wording is great and wording is strong but your own self worth makes you the poor man's version of the elite topicalist/open mic'er. You'll disagree with this, which only reinforces the accuracy of it.

yezzir. lol @ categorizing my boarding habit. i half-agree. i'd given those you just mentioned, and others, their dues as writers and in so doing concede the superiority of their craft. i consider myself an elite open mic'er. i do not consider myself an elite topicalist. a semantic difference, perhaps.

apart from that, this was a solid psychoanalysis with what you were given. werd.

[Destroyer]

analyze me dammit!

[veritas]

Me too please

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by Darth Yoda

be meaner/archaic want 2 laff more

If the period didn't exist no one would think you are dope. Every one of your aliases is Cristian, and 99% of the board doesn't know what that means. Every one of your permutations writes with postcum on their hand from watching Eminem Vimeos. Boarding. Wise Ways literally jerks off to your verses, Orc likes them because liking them makes him feel smart, and everyone else follows because why not. You all write relatively the same way and emoji each other thinking it's ironic when in all reality people get it and just shrug. You guys are the Finn and Jake of textcees.

[Darth Yoda]

hahHAHAHAa. @BWHAHA @dull boy

cristian is commonly thrown around because he's (inaudible)

good !!!!! I analyze you later acting like you.

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by Darth Yoda

hahHAHAHAa. @BWHAHA @dull boy

cristian is commonly thrown around because he's (inaudible)

good !!!!! I analyze you later acting like you.

im sure you'll do a good job of it. as an admin, i will delete it if i feel offended.

the exclamation points !!!! are hilarious; we know you think you're smart.

which one is this? the model boxer who knows everyone in new york? or the depressed dad who writes great open mics? or the zany guy? or cristian!? i can't tell!

it's so interesting.

[Frank Metts]

Something about paragraph form without propose punctuation