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Old 04-30-2022, 11:38 PM   #121
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Can't see the genius? Anyone wanna inform these guys of my GWL run? I told interconnecting stories every week, each one continuing from the last. They were literally chapters forming an overarching narrative.

I'm so ahead you guys think I'm behind... ugh.
I don’t think you’re behind. Sorry if you took offense to anything I said. You’ve been nothing but a credit to the league and I’m just trying to find a solution that keeps you around while also advocating for what I think would make the league run better overall. GWL run sounds like exactly what I was describing - why not do that again?
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Old 04-30-2022, 11:43 PM   #122
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Universe nyc Dom Frank adverse Lars etc. This league hasn’t had that much depth on the roster in years…why not do what dom said and do the overarching story thing in 40 line segments
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Old 04-30-2022, 11:55 PM   #123
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I don’t think you’re behind. Sorry if you took offense to anything I said. You’ve been nothing but a credit to the league and I’m just trying to find a solution that keeps you around while also advocating for what I think would make the league run better overall. GWL run sounds like exactly what I was describing - why not do that again?
Not you, Dom. Shoulda quoted NYC, sorry.

And doing anything "again" doesn't interest me, man. I'm not here to build up wins or champ stuff, I'm here to challenge myself. Hence, Project X etc. . 100 lines I can do some crazy shit with and don't have to hold back too much. That interests me.

You guys have to understand that I shit out 60 lines for breakfast. I actually write about 200 per piece and edit DOWN to 100.

And, full disclosure, I write screenplays on the side and have one filming in Germany right now. This is what I do. I write stories. I just don't want to hear from tourists telling me this or telling me that. I LIVE here, and I know what challenges me and what I'm looking for.

That said, I certainly don't view myself as bigger than the league that is filled with talented writers like yourself, Dom. And Adverse. So I'm not looking for special treatment - I want everyone on board or I'll jump off and swim elsewhere. It's all the same to me.

I love just sitting back and voting too so maybe that's where I will benefit the league most.
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Old 05-01-2022, 12:27 AM   #124
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Line limit is so tricky, definitely something I’ve had trouble with in my few go’s at league running. Hard to find a balance, personally I find myself in both situations. Sometimes I’m good with 40 and sometimes I go out on a tangent and am 50 lines over the line limit before I even realize it. I think Universe is just on a whole other planet with this stuff, and he is definitely not the norm. I see the voting gripes with longer verses and such as well. At the end of the day this league is a democracy and I’ll post a poll to figure a good solution for the benefit of the majority
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Old 05-01-2022, 12:33 AM   #125
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@Frank sorry for deleting your vote man once battles hit 4-0 or 4-1 we kind of close and move on so we can keep the league on a decent pace. Everybody voting weekly isn’t a requirement at the moment because we’ve been blessed by having great voting this year, so as long as we’ve got that going, you don’t have to fret about a vote count or anything I just ask you participate and vote on what you can get to

Appreciate everyone let’s get this Dom/Eviction battle settled so we can get the next week going
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Old 05-01-2022, 12:41 AM   #126
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Line limit is so tricky, definitely something I’ve had trouble with in my few go’s at league running. Hard to find a balance, personally I find myself in both situations. Sometimes I’m good with 40 and sometimes I go out on a tangent and am 50 lines over the line limit before I even realize it. I think Universe is just on a whole other planet with this stuff, and he is definitely not the norm. I see the voting gripes with longer verses and such as well. At the end of the day this league is a democracy and I’ll post a poll to figure a good solution for the benefit of the majority
No need, Ad. I'm definitely the odd man out. I'll just sign out here but stay on as a voter.

Just make Dom vs Eviction a Champ match. It's good enough and both deserve it.
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Old 05-01-2022, 01:10 AM   #127
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Not you, Dom. Shoulda quoted NYC, sorry.

And doing anything "again" doesn't interest me, man. I'm not here to build up wins or champ stuff, I'm here to challenge myself. Hence, Project X etc. . 100 lines I can do some crazy shit with and don't have to hold back too much. That interests me.

You guys have to understand that I shit out 60 lines for breakfast. I actually write about 200 per piece and edit DOWN to 100.

And, full disclosure, I write screenplays on the side and have one filming in Germany right now. This is what I do. I write stories. I just don't want to hear from tourists telling me this or telling me that. I LIVE here, and I know what challenges me and what I'm looking for.

That said, I certainly don't view myself as bigger than the league that is filled with talented writers like yourself, Dom. And Adverse. So I'm not looking for special treatment - I want everyone on board or I'll jump off and swim elsewhere. It's all the same to me.

I love just sitting back and voting too so maybe that's where I will benefit the league most.
Alright man, fair enough. Maybe project X + votes is the best thing then after all.

Re: being a tourist. What kind of feedback are you looking for on what you post? Like, what aspects of your writing would you like me/others to critique? You feed/vote basically everything in here so I would want to try to pay it back, but I don't want to give you an opinion you're not interested in hearing.

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Just make Dom vs Eviction a Champ match. It's good enough and both deserve it.
I think Adverse deserves a spot in the champ match if you're not going ahead... Me vs Eviction looks like it's going to be a pain to wrap up this week. It's 3-3 now, how about call it a tie and let's have a 3 way champ match next week, capped at 40 lines each? @Adverse @Eviction?
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Old 05-01-2022, 01:27 AM   #128
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Old 05-01-2022, 01:29 AM   #129
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That’s fine with me as well , we just got to get this objective Hal0 battle settled then we’re in business for next week
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do you get an accomp for champing or just champing the season?
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Both I believe. At least that’s how it was in the NBL back in the day.
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Old 05-01-2022, 03:25 AM   #132
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is there a booby prize for loosing every battle :)
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@Frank sorry for deleting your vote man once battles hit 4-0 or 4-1 we kind of close and move on so we can keep the league on a decent pace. Everybody voting weekly isn’t a requirement at the moment because we’ve been blessed by having great voting this year, so as long as we’ve got that going, you don’t have to fret about a vote count or anything I just ask you participate and vote on what you can get to

Appreciate everyone let’s get this Dom/Eviction battle settled so we can get the next week going
IMO, Voting is the number 1 priority. Start deducting and applying penalties to non-voters, IMO? 5-0 is universal as far as shutting down battles, as far as I'm concerned, 4-0 and 4-1 are not.
As the mod, you should cast the final vote on those 2 battles now and set up next weeks matches (with new rules specifying voting rules and due dates.)
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I'm in the lead now but I'm still cool with the 3 way
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I don't know about boobies but loser has to go on a date with aj/sinacog
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check it this was promo for the last ppv we did at i was battling a disciple.. just wait til you hear who they think i am with.. you guessed it age/sinagoc that sexy lil beast hehe :)

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check it this was promo for the last ppv we did at i was battling a disciple.. just wait til you hear who they think i am with.. you guessed it age/sinagoc that sexy lil beast hehe :)

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so you saying that's not a punishment hehe.
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Technically @Eviction is up by a vote, do you guys want to still call it a tie @Dominate and do the three way champ match next week?
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Technically @Eviction is up by a vote, do you guys want to still call it a tie @Dominate and do the three way champ match next week?
WAY TO RUIN EVERYTHING @Objective LOL jk.
The other battle still needs votes right? So maybe leave ours open and hopefully we could get one more vote, which would either give Eviction the win via a 2 vote margin or else bring us back to a tie. If it stays at 4-3 then ??? I mean I have a vested interest to say so but I think that’s more of a tie than a win/loss. If Eviction’s cool with it then let’s still do the 3 way. I’m OK with whatever, just don’t let that battle prevent the league from moving on if the other one wraps up is what I’m saying.
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