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Old 12-24-2020, 04:00 PM   #3061
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Without looking I see what others couldn't achieve
Took em & seized heights that they wouldn't believe
Should ya compete or should ya hide shook in the sheets
Take cover now....you don't know the season it's looking to be.
I stay cooking up beef and serving it with veg
Twisting every line you thought was working in ya head
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Old 01-01-2021, 07:46 PM   #3062
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A sneak hums above an open source plant
Against a creature doing its instinctual pantheist
declines an existence of multiple receivers
I never attempt to apologize if i do then clearly its all a lie
the substantial threat don't speak about the dead
attacks and revenge getting cut like it's pizza bubbling wet
got played like a schmuck it happens im laughing at your vex
vulnerability that's abilify.

A pot flushes a baroque singer injustice and the middle finger
pay attention and hurry back for your brainwash like some egg yolk
elementary concerns beast and burden savage symptom
sneaky serpent rather sink then surface holding air defeats the purpose
but as long im breathing legends begin
The enlarged blurb possesses an aged scimitar with gold
A flag sways around the worker but that worker fainted when he sold his soul.

The motor is your heart 99 cent stores a cheap mechanism for brain lord
Why can't the hypothetical island fall below an atmosphere for the core
How will the vehicle handle the storm mandala form with alot of porn
kamala white with alot of sight stepping on it like your on a bike
pure like a dove offering its life cheerful suicide
your gonna die anyway loose the lies
the veil will open a clear blue sky
When will a newsletter advertise it third eye 10 times a whale sizes.

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Old 01-06-2021, 10:31 AM   #3063
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I’ve spent so much time
Jerking off to bitches who’ll never know that I existed
“Go with the flow” got used to the shots like ur photogenic
An unwillingness to change paired with absolutely no resistance
All these demons pursuing tear up my soul’s defenses
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Old 01-14-2021, 11:22 PM   #3064
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Control you're senses before I invoke the spirits
expose your empress no shame in sickness
mechanisms of deception displayed in sentence
stay embedded unbeknownst to a sacred message
deaths great apprentice exclaims his days have ended

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Old 01-16-2021, 06:06 PM   #3065
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They must have lost their senses at the cost of penance
Saying their prayers and then crossing their pendants
Thought I left it, thought I said what was needed...
They want him to represent it, but they the weakest.
They so boring.. they so thoughtless, how do I stop it
How do I stop from being toxic before I'm warring.
Exploring these assortments of ideas out of pocket
Why write on topic when I off top it the next morning
Some take days to a week what takes me hours to complete
Take a shower then sleep, wake up and overpower the sheets
Kick off...racing to the nearest cup of caffeine til they say....
They can't fuck with that fiend whose drunk off that sweet, sweet...
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Old 01-18-2021, 05:10 PM   #3066
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If they dealing weight, couldn't take the pressure
All that work sealed away couldn't make an effort
How they conceal the hate but fake the pleasure?
How they real then fake the way that it's measured
Now they twisting facts and won't admit to that
Now they gripping back onto what permits the act
Who administered that? Why the immature blast?
Who gives them a chance? Decides where the finish is at?
It's a goddamn shame they left the odd man playing
You think they got that play? Just watch that lame...
Quick to misguide, because inside is a bitch right?
On the flip side you got this guy who hits like a riptide
Others trying to get by by making sure their writ's right
Still getting pimped by another who saying their wrists tied.
It's the rules, now everyone else seems to get confused
What is the use if you knew you who you'd give it to.
No clear calls, no clear thoughts, no clear eyes wowwwwww
Excuse as I veer off onto the clear side now.
Got better things to do, more lines to write but less time to use
But I'm quick to pull the pen out until my time is through
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Old 01-19-2021, 12:58 PM   #3067
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Well
Most people got big dreams “I’m going to Tokyo then Dubai!”
I got big dreams too, to suffocate between Tokyo Lynn’s two thighs
Only pokin hoes in my mind, In Old Testament days they’d be hangin me up high
Ya boy staring at porno bitches all day then goes home angry at his wife
But that’s fine, but that’s life, at least I’ve accepted it as part of it
If i was convicted for my crimes I’d be on Donald Trump’s pardon list
Sorer than an artist’s wrist, my armor is chipped
I’m a vampire, is JERK and a damn liar yeah I know
Let’s just say The Boy’s not afraid of showing dick like that Amazon show
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Old 01-21-2021, 12:34 AM   #3068
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Im A person who has killed living beings here
you have the wrong view you shouldn't be here
On the dissolution of the body,after death,he reappears
in states of deprivation,you will see your fears
in an unhappy destination, I will eat your tears
Perhaps the evil will teach those to reap the still
producing your suffering only cause you believe you will
this that diesel hold the needle still
like a flesh eating beetle I need to kill
he had a wrong view, he will feel the result of that here and now,
or in his next rebirth drinking the milk of a spirit cow
in some subsequent existence kinda crazy how
consequences cover all that distance

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Old 01-22-2021, 08:44 AM   #3069
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they jumped them on a dead street
war was hot with violent heat
strike to the head, there's a scuffle
gunshot, the people are frightened by the sound from the muzzle
he fights back but his outnumbered, there's no one
now his looking inside the barrel of a gun
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Old 01-22-2021, 03:22 PM   #3070
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Barrel of a gun, the most terrible of sons
The embarrassing one that mama’s always sharin with her funds
Staring at the sun wishing I was blind to the world’s wicked plights
My veins all run cold clogged up by the frigid ice
Ripping mics like a crumbled up draft from an artist
Fitting because they all see me as trash that’s discarded
Fuck it...one day I’ll be the dopest they’ve yet seen
Nah I’m kidding screwed it up at a young age feelin like Epstein
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Old 02-01-2021, 11:13 PM   #3071
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"see the nightcrawlers & white walkers?"
she said that the city's changed, & i've faltered
she said that i'm in the way, like spiked collars
get my head up in the game, for my dogs, or
she said she might fade away. jump shotters

i have drinks @ Palm's
i fucked my homies mom
i'm so cold, i'm gone
i need gold & guns
i need rum & coke,
cuz that's what i run on
this shit is not a joke but i do it just for fun
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Old 02-02-2021, 02:43 AM   #3072
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Psychotic break led me to this chaotic state
Rubbed me the wrong way till I quaked like tectonic plates
Giving up on hip hop, the culture and all
Food for the vultures once I make my inevitable fall
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Old 02-04-2021, 05:47 PM   #3073
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Tell 'em to crawl before it ever gets resolved
I heard petulance call, they'll never be absolved
Better off fighting demons, heads into the wall
Catch wifey looser if her knees knelt to the floor
A heavenly fall to explore the depths of hell
Living life broken, hope y'all have spent it well
What a dry mental spell, haters offended...welllll
I ain't gotta speak on that, they can creep on back
Put these lines to the fiends to see y'all crack.
Mistreat y'all raps by not even reading into all that.
Because boredom is gruesome
Real recognize real and I see through them
Looking at better days ahead, guillotines and fulcrums
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Old 02-07-2021, 12:42 AM   #3074
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Deny the children , with lucid eyes of stillness
looting a minded village , with a suit and tie for pillage
boots inline with wellness , dignified indulgence
looking into the mirror , liquidized and selfless
liquid eyes the helpless , write like I dealt with
the twisted mind of elvis...

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Both anxious messes who should honestly take depressants
I made this bed we both lay in with blank expressions
Used to love these instrumentals then I found you, my musical embodiment
Who had the brains, humor and the beauty at the heart of it
I’ve made countless mistakes, I’m abundant with vices
And I don’t say what I should like my tongues in a vice grip
But I wouldn’t rather share these gorgeous broken pieces with anyone else
Honestly, I’ve always loved you, just need to work harder on lovin myself
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Old 02-09-2021, 01:59 PM   #3076
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Hard to believe these folks fuck with themselves
When failure is evident they start rushing for help
Start breaking down, crying over nothing as well
Oh, you mad? That's a great reason to tuck em & bail
Consider touching the braille if you don't feel this
You been out lying & chalked up til you gon' fill this
This flow hit harder than y'all gonna admit
Could break that wall down quick if you want to persist
Cause frankly my dear I don't give a damn...
They gone with the wind
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If you need me I’ll be...

Here in the shadows
Fighting spiritual battles
Dodging existential pitfalls
Additionally it was never my mission to get lost
Is this world true or false fuck it just fill in a box
At this point it doesn’t matter if it’s real or it’s not
I’m just a specter spectating from a vivid vantage point
Do I go on feeling this way or give up....like I even have a choice
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Catch a writer by the toe, clash and void.
A bunch of stars are mediocre asteroids
Who made that noise, kept heads ringing
The same dick who kept bed heads singing
Slang the same verse 10x with no fail
My deer melancholy to the headlights, no avail
So they sail off in the sky with their presents
Make it rain girl, I'm too fly to share with pheasants
Get my nutrients from the high & go off.
Lay like a newt on stone status, rhymes just roll on.
That charge positive got me looking like a proton
Look at the page you wrote on....go on
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Fastened to the wheel, parasitic-like
Tired as the usher on a carriage from the Reich
If it's fair it isn't right. Carry me from life
foraging for berries in a parried paradise but buried with respite
Barely indecisive.

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I'm the type that could write above ya average
Spend bucks at taverns, throwing up like Atlas
Live it up with a halo and the strut of a savage
Ideas so deep they could touch Atlantis.
My manuscript make you say man you sick
Wrote the instructions in the manual..shiiiiiit
J jump over these rappers like candlestick
J be quick too, jiu jitsu hit you then damn you kids
Weaponry with the same kick Daniel did.
Your rhymes comparable to cocker spaniel shit
Gross. I don't like that
And if you leave it there better be right back
With the correct baggage to swipe that.
Place it in the disposal unit, I like that.
Well done, mission accomplished
Official like it was written from congress
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