01-22-2021, 07:50 AM | #1 |
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The Motive
The art in it, exquisite like the blues
They enjoy the rhythm, hip hop makes grooves Listenin and dancin to the music, it's a trap vibe They heard the lyrics, they know what's hype Roots from the old school, when it was the most alive The underground with that conscious rap, on a mission Learners become legends and never die, in this era they still live Gucci and Versace for fashion, money in the millions Competing for the best on the Billboard charts It's a ruckus amongst the stars, hits be touching hearts They say they can't live without it, they've got this habit Song on repeat like they stuck in a loop, listening to the baddest High levels of euphoria, mind's travelling Live shows sold out, jumped off the scaffolding From the labels to freestyle Appears the versatile culture |
03-02-2021, 10:21 PM | #2 |
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Conceptually this is a cool track but it doesn’t really break the mold, I mean we’ve heard this kind of hip hop verse before. I think the things you said were alright but maybe look for more...I guess verbose ways of saying them? Also try expanding your horizons when it comes to topics. Don’t be afraid to linger on a thought for more than a line or two, really flesh out your thoughts and use some colorful language.
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03-15-2021, 12:12 PM | #3 |
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your label drops was cool maine your flow cool rhythm was uber super cool thanks def feeling your vocab
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