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Old 01-22-2021, 07:50 AM   #1
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The art in it, exquisite like the blues
They enjoy the rhythm, hip hop makes grooves
Listenin and dancin to the music, it's a trap vibe
They heard the lyrics, they know what's hype

Roots from the old school, when it was the most alive
The underground with that conscious rap, on a mission
Learners become legends and never die, in this era they still live
Gucci and Versace for fashion, money in the millions

Competing for the best on the Billboard charts
It's a ruckus amongst the stars, hits be touching hearts
They say they can't live without it, they've got this habit
Song on repeat like they stuck in a loop, listening to the baddest

High levels of euphoria, mind's travelling
Live shows sold out, jumped off the scaffolding
From the labels to freestyle
Appears the versatile culture
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Old 03-02-2021, 10:21 PM   #2
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Conceptually this is a cool track but it doesn’t really break the mold, I mean we’ve heard this kind of hip hop verse before. I think the things you said were alright but maybe look for more...I guess verbose ways of saying them? Also try expanding your horizons when it comes to topics. Don’t be afraid to linger on a thought for more than a line or two, really flesh out your thoughts and use some colorful language.
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Old 03-15-2021, 12:12 PM   #3
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your label drops was cool maine your flow cool rhythm was uber super cool thanks def feeling your vocab
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