WEEK NINE CHAT - Page 3

Objective · 02-16-2021, 12:52 AM

That was a dope battle to read. Good stuff @fraze & @Diablo

fraze · 02-16-2021, 01:06 AM

Anyway guess this is over now.

Ending of my verse is when dude passes out from being drugged.
He got hit with the ole spanish fly routine.
The girl and her man are running a two man scam to lure tourists in front of the Basillica.
She gets them to the spot for drinks, she slips them a roofie, and they rob him.
He sees her with HIM- her partner in crime (as pictured in topic) when she comes back from the rr, then he passes out and never sees her again so he's always left wondering.

Years later he hears the song 'Despacito' playing and it reminds him of what happened and how he felt at the time. He's still afraid and untrusting because of that situation, but how beautiful she was and the connection he felt still impacts him.

sral · 02-16-2021, 01:50 AM

I think @fraze should feed @Diablo :-)

02-16-2021, 12:52 AM	#41
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,786 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474189	That was a dope battle to read. Good stuff @fraze & @Diablo __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

02-16-2021, 01:06 AM	#42
fraze Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Louisville, KY Posts: 913 Battle Record: 14-24 Rep Power: 32898722	Anyway guess this is over now. Ending of my verse is when dude passes out from being drugged. He got hit with the ole spanish fly routine. The girl and her man are running a two man scam to lure tourists in front of the Basillica. She gets them to the spot for drinks, she slips them a roofie, and they rob him. He sees her with HIM- her partner in crime (as pictured in topic) when she comes back from the rr, then he passes out and never sees her again so he's always left wondering. Years later he hears the song 'Despacito' playing and it reminds him of what happened and how he felt at the time. He's still afraid and untrusting because of that situation, but how beautiful she was and the connection he felt still impacts him. __________________

02-16-2021, 01:50 AM	#43
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,251 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	I think @fraze should feed @Diablo :-) __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)