01-19-2021, 02:31 AM | #1 |
The Clown Prince
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Broken Hearted
Her ego took a hit when I up and left
She thought the world of me and nothing less Would have gave her all for love and yet... Her favorite reaction was to rush a text Dial my number, hang up, and call again Never knew the problem she was falling in Checked Facebook and her Twitter following Her Insta numbers, Onlyfans, then called again The voicemail is full, too many IM's to the inbox All I ever hear is her crying over this THOT That thought, whatever comes to mind is lost. My issue with her is her lying through lipgloss Making up irrational tales trying to save face Imagine the actions entailed when she gave chase How she rationed & scaled unconditional weight gain Pursued fashionable fails claiming the game changed She knew it didn't but had her mind twisted online Blogging pictures getting her highs lifted off hype. It's easy whenever there's a line with it drawing lies Every thirsty fool will be quick to try quipping on like.... "You so sick with it" "She a boss, damn she the hottest thing" Bada boom, bada bing but for me she's always dropping in She's gotta think how to keep my attention on the brink... Of insanity or is it vanity? Who has time to process that? All I know is she's hoping that she'll get that ol' thing back She'll be able to live well and will let the day continue All she might want is attention but is that what J's into? Nah. But how do you avoid a broad that waits and waits . . . . . . . . And waits . . . . . . . and waits . . . . . . . . . . . . . and waits Saying she will miss you
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01-21-2021, 11:46 PM | #2 |
White Earl
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Sound like you got a maniac on your hands ole boy. Good luck with that. Those are hard to get rid of even once youve decided to. Real shit. Pz bruh
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04-05-2021, 09:32 AM | #3 |
rhyme capsule.
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this was pretty good. more than anything there was a bit of topical (not writing to topics 'topical') wisdom in this. you don't know what you've got 'til it's gone and all that. good rhythm, ain't feel too forced, some immediately relevant commentary. props.
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04-13-2021, 12:44 AM | #4 |
past tense
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Dope.
Dial my number, hang up, and call again Never knew the problem she was falling in Checked Facebook and her Twitter following Her Insta numbers, Onlyfans, then called again Effortless, really. Solid execution sir |
04-18-2021, 10:40 AM | #5 |
w0000
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U don’t need that h0
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