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Old 01-21-2021, 11:34 PM   #1
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Default Found this in my files PART 2. Dont think i ever dropped this either? Wtf

First things first, i dont know who i am
Cant tell weather or not im at home in my head
Theres way to many things i dont really recall
Like how i wound up in this physical vault
I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past
Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse
A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch
Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad
And somehow i never collapsed, i usually sat down
Its pretty bad when your entire youth is black out
I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget
But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect
Now im gettin to old for this ignorant shit, sick to my ribs
If i could, id lose my mind and claim ignorant bliss
But im stuck with the bad shit, and nothin but past sins
If we could go back, you'd see me redoing actions
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Old 03-24-2021, 02:25 PM   #2
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Awesome flow per usual.
Really liked the topic at hand and liked stuff like jog scrimmage/memory lapse.
Was dope, this was my favorite segment (not much feed to provide you’ve been doing this too long to need it)

“ Theres way to many things i dont really recall
Like how i wound up in this physical vault
I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past
Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse
A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch
Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad”
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Old 03-26-2021, 05:20 PM   #3
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Yeah, flow was amazing in this my dude. Highlight was the section Adverse already quoted... loved that part.

Good read. Very smooth and casual while still dropping some knowledge.

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Old 03-26-2021, 11:27 PM   #4
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Nice work here Geno, that flow always been tight
Your style is refreshing when I start peeping these out
Always cool seeing you drop something...


I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget
But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect

^^^real shit right there
Overall a dope scheme you got cooked up
The verse was on some hard hitting life shit
Keep that pen moving & drop in the proper spot my g
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