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01-21-2021, 11:34 PM | #1 |
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Found this in my files PART 2. Dont think i ever dropped this either? Wtf
First things first, i dont know who i am
Cant tell weather or not im at home in my head Theres way to many things i dont really recall Like how i wound up in this physical vault I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad And somehow i never collapsed, i usually sat down Its pretty bad when your entire youth is black out I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect Now im gettin to old for this ignorant shit, sick to my ribs If i could, id lose my mind and claim ignorant bliss But im stuck with the bad shit, and nothin but past sins If we could go back, you'd see me redoing actions
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03-24-2021, 02:25 PM | #2 |
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Awesome flow per usual.
Really liked the topic at hand and liked stuff like jog scrimmage/memory lapse. Was dope, this was my favorite segment (not much feed to provide you’ve been doing this too long to need it) “ Theres way to many things i dont really recall Like how i wound up in this physical vault I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad” |
03-26-2021, 05:20 PM | #3 |
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Yeah, flow was amazing in this my dude. Highlight was the section Adverse already quoted... loved that part.
Good read. Very smooth and casual while still dropping some knowledge. Write more.
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03-26-2021, 11:27 PM | #4 |
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Nice work here Geno, that flow always been tight
Your style is refreshing when I start peeping these out Always cool seeing you drop something... I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect ^^^real shit right there Overall a dope scheme you got cooked up The verse was on some hard hitting life shit Keep that pen moving & drop in the proper spot my g
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