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LOLuminati Papi
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12 lines tonight
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Let’s go
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going 13
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Going 1
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I’m a mainstay in finals;
your only Maine stay was an Airbnb and you had to share a bed Cus you had more random dudes checking in that night than in this very thread I don’t even know why you’re here. You and des were tied up Last time that happened was in User’s basement and you were just hoping you might fuck All those left field wack ass concepts. Ur enough to make this final go on unread Cus INF was going off on tangents way before he worked at solar sun-beds I’m Surgical with letters bro - you can’t handle when the pressure grows Cold steel to docs chest and you can hear his heart without a stethoscope I saw your pic when you were Kyo and I’m not falling for it, cunt Yeah I’ve heard of LGBTQ, but you can’t be all of them at once There’s some symmetry between us.. two things we have and hold tight: My set of weapons and your sexual preference cus they’re both ‘bat on both sides’
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That whole verse is a fire stick.
Stethoscope might be the weakest bar, but even that’s a quotable. No wonder INF didn’t want it. Congrats bro. |
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was gonna wait til inf dropped but if this is done
I’m a mainstay in finals; your only Maine stay was an Airbnb and you had to share a bed Cus you had more random dudes checking in that night than in this very thread dope and I appreciate the double punch here, it generally doesn't come across as well in short bar style but i thought it was a good opener I don’t even know why you’re here. You and des were tied up Last time that happened was in User’s basement and you were just hoping you might fuck falls short of a haymaker because the general idea could be fresher but its still a solid bar tied into the happenings in his last battle All those left field wack ass concepts. Ur enough to make this final go on unread Cus INF was going off on tangents way before he worked at solar sun-beds this is dope I’m Surgical with letters bro - you can’t handle when the pressure grows Cold steel to docs chest and you can hear his heart without a stethoscope good, still shy of a haymaker for me but you've done a great job staying consistent I saw your pic when you were Kyo and I’m not falling for it, cunt Yeah I’ve heard of LGBTQ, but you can’t be all of them at once funny There’s some symmetry between us.. two things we have and hold tight: My set of weapons and your sexual preference cus they’re both ‘bat on both sides’ i wasnt feeling this one, kinda feels like you ran out of steam but this is the only thing that felt like a miss to me overall the only thing i didnt really like about this verse is you took too many "you're gay" angles. I feel like it was a large majority of the verse, but the concepts and execution were all there with only one miss. You stayed consistent throughout and it's a dope drop overall. If inf dropped like he did last round, I think you would've ran away with it. You def. deserve to be crowned champ imo |
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Opeber was dope, good relevant punch
Lol st the second line... pretty funny Nah I've seen the tangents wordplay and angle before, so it doesn't resonate with me personally Stethoscope / metal to the chest lines are metas that have been done a lot as gun bars over the years....thatbsaid points for the tie ins and it being a nameplay Lgbtq line pretty funny Closer dece, bit overkill on the gay angle now tho for a short verse Congrats Dave
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nice drop
take the w. was out UPN pay votes forward. & tire of this small nuisance Dave advances over drawn accounts, no loan app by Mark Cuban Zuch straightens his bars out quick but none can see Before a drop he'll Clear Align while ya use that for fucked up teeth Frail faggot benched: then news of him breakin his spine Ironic. Press Coverage was a bunch of gym bros who didn't make it in time Your girl makes fantasy reality, ass let all the dicks in Agents of SWORD, my team surrounds to pierce the bubble like Wandavision These hits makes you black out, watch the hours tick Breaker switch... i'm knocking your block off if you get on a Power Trip You DEAD, bucko.. no check saw him afraid of the match Cloth u cut from is yellow.. & this a weird flex after the RIP, Hulkamanias back |
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that verse was dope as fuck dave.. good shit congrats
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Props dave
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Vote des always
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