12-15-2020, 11:15 AM | #1 |
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WILDCARD WEEK: #5 Dave VS #12 Adverse / ADVERSE ADVANCES
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12-15-2020, 05:39 PM | #2 |
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Check, pics? 10?
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12-15-2020, 06:57 PM | #3 |
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12-15-2020, 07:04 PM | #4 |
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12-16-2020, 02:32 AM | #5 |
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12-16-2020, 04:17 AM | #6 |
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12-18-2020, 07:43 AM | #7 |
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What are thoooooooooooooooooooose? That whole outfit proves this fool never Mack it I Haven’t seen red over camo looking so ugly since full metal jacket You can judge a man by his surroundings and seeing those cars I know it’s over Just look at that run down piece of trash in red AND the wreck over his shoulder And I don’t give a shit what he say He’s only stood in a dirt lot because he bought those kicks on eBay Scraped into the playoffs, now this big softy needs some luck He fought tooth and nail to get here?! those items could probably beat him up Not even a pair of new kicks.. That’s the outfit I’ma bury you with Felled by a foreigner; Tell the coroner he’ll be there in two ticks
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12-18-2020, 12:00 PM | #8 |
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LISTEN BITCH Everybody else gives you praise but I’ll give you endless caps dude Say u a legend in the making..till ur gettin carved with the metal like that Hendrix statue And BELIEVE if it comes to hands this bitch gettin killed Spotty ass beard...uppercuts give that ‘patch work’ till dude need more stitches than quilts Knock you to the street with ease, you’re a guy I can tell ain’t macho Y’all ain’t seen ‘a bitch get drug over bricks’ like this since Griselda Blanco Dave’s a fucking bum bruh and that get-up lends facts to my claim After they snapped the pic he sat down, shook that cup n started askin for change I’m a wildcard fam cuz it wouldn’t take much for me to be a threat in this bitch Dave’s a wildcard, too. I Can’t tell if he’s a Justin Bieber Stan or a lesbian chick Last edited by Adverse; 12-18-2020 at 08:47 PM. |
12-19-2020, 06:09 AM | #9 |
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Dave -
That whole outfit proves this fool never Mack it I Haven’t seen red over camo looking so ugly since full metal jacket Scraped into the playoffs, now this big softy needs some luck He fought tooth and nail to get here?! those items could probably beat him up Overall, not your strongest verse. looooooved the opener, and while I get the misdirection attempt in the followup, I think it could've used some tinkering. Ebay and closer were kinda just a whiff for me. Sorry. Adverse - Everybody else gives you praise but I’ll give you endless caps dude Say u a legend in the making..till ur gettin carved with the metal like that Hendrix statue And BELIEVE if it comes to hands this bitch gettin killed Spotty ass beard...uppercuts give that ‘patch work’ till dude need more stitches than quilts Knock you to the street with ease, you’re a guy I can tell ain’t macho Y’all ain’t seen ‘a bitch get drug over bricks’ like this since Griselda Blanco Solid verse, man. Hendrix line was on the cusp of good, I quoted it, but it's a little TOO on the nose for me to be a really GREAT pic diss. Still, I'm giving half points for the attempt. Patch work was nice, Griselda blanco was inspired and dope. Change line and closer were a hard pass for me. So ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm... I'm kinda torn here. Dave had LOTB to me in the full metal jacket line. But I've got Ad with like half a quote more. Griselda Blanco was a runner up for LOTB for me, so I guess, and I never saw this coming, I'm leaning Adverse? I'm kinda shocked, no offense, but yeah. I'm going with Adverse. Wow. V - Adverse
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Dave-
Full metal jacket was nice. I also like the misdirection with the over the shoulder bar. After that though, things started to cool of heavy. The eBay line I gotta be missing something, I just don’t see the connection s my bad. Adverse- Quilts and blanco bars were cool, and the change cup line hit as well. Nothing else after this. This was a very close battle and a case of a really good writer hiring a rough spot, and adverse really starting to put it together. Was really looking forward to Dave in the quarters but I gotta go adverse here based on number of quotables. He had one more. Good battle guys Vote- adverse |
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Close: piece of trash in red You usually drop harder than this, the verse feels rushed. I also feel like you could have done more with the pic. It feels weird you didn't touch the Christmas tree at all. Full metal was your best bar, didn't have a lot else. Quote:
Close: Griselda, asking for change Ok verse. No haymakers but the only real miss was the closer. I really wanted to like the Griselda Blanco bar, nice idea. Don't know what was up with that closer. Vote: Adverse Feel like evaD could have made this closer, he definitely has the skill to compete, but the verse this week falls short. Adverse had a consistent drop, that neither over or underwhelmed. Nice pic battle. |
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12-20-2020, 12:19 AM | #12 |
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Adverse got this
Fire verse Good showing
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12-20-2020, 12:12 PM | #13 |
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Fmj, wreck kinda
Vs Hendrix, patch work V/ adverse. I've seen much better from dave before. ad came wit it
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12-20-2020, 12:17 PM | #14 |
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Adverse wins 5-0 and advances.
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