UTC Spotlight Match: Aero vs Karaoke - KARAOKE WINS

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UTC I

Spotlight Battle


Due: 12 Lines

Length: Sunday

Standard Rules apply


@Aero @Karaoke

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Originally Posted by Aero

Check mythology Ares is the God of war you can look up now
Slow it down I just dissed you... Ares is the God of war like calm the fuck down

I'm pound for pound the best and out for necks
Ur going down in history as the only nigga slow enough to do a slow it down in text
Me, lose? That'll never happen like every fight u started
Those Express logos on your shirts are the only reason u feel lionhearted
My current events are dope but my personals will send chills up ur spine
Im single by choice, ur single cuz ur ex caught u trying to meet Hush offline
Not into taxidermy but I'm about to have this GOAT on my mantle
Ironic that ur posts can get 4k views when u cant even get 4 votes in a battle
Only the greats? you're considered that only in your own head
Don't know y u kept uppin it when ur not even qualified to post in ur own thread
I peeped how he disrespected Tyson's wife, this kid's a vermin
I smash snow bunnies regularly while he scares white chicks off faster than Richard Sherman

Bye...

[StarFaggot]

He couldn't
.
.
watch tape of me fucking his girl, left crying saying it wasn't real
He cut film in the middle to vent, same process as his struggle meals
She tells him "my PMS last a year" lol that's a personal failure
Way you can stand for long periods you should work as a teller
But NEVER fight over a hoe, I don't and that's the realest truth
Last time I fought over a bitch your mom acted as a shield for you
I've murdered in real life, your tough talk's an insufferable tactic
I put 3 to sleep, your sleep number's found on an adjustable mattress
Fuck personals and his win streak, I'll diminish this dudes chances
I'll have your grind come to a halt like supervision at school dances
You're a large clumsy black man with a third grader's conversation
When white people call you an ape it isn't racist it's an observation

[Certain]

Karaoke: I liked the opener, even if quoting a 6-month-old line is a bit of a cheap tactic. I thought you blew the Hush line with a poor setup and phrasing. The line about being qualified to post in his thread basically was ripped from a tag on that thread. The closer was solid and topical. There weren't any bad misses here, but the middle eight lacked any real impact. Most of the wording was solid, except for that Hush line, which might have been your best concept of the battle. It was nice that none of the lines were generic.

Aero: The concept behind the opener was outstanding, but the wording behind it made it not feel like an actual punch. So he eats microwave dinners? The only personal to any degree was the setup for the line about school dances, and even that begins, "Fuck personals." Additionally, that seemed like a bit of a feed off Karaoke's verse. The sleep number line would have worked better in a swag-and-flow verse, as it was more about the boast than the punch. For a spotlight battle that was supposed to highlight a grudge of some level, you didn't show much in the way of hostility here. Even the clever lines weren't personal and didn't hit very hard.

Vote: Karaoke

[Texcellence]

Vote: Karaoke

Certain hit the nail on the head. Aero your verse had some great ideas none of which were personal enough or hit as hard as they should considering your opponents verse. I actually opened this battle expecting a lot from you Aero and you disappointed. For that reason this line:

Only the greats? you're considered that only in your own head
Don't know y u kept uppin it when ur not even qualified to post in ur own thread

Stood out to me even more. That's why I voted for Karaoke.

[StarFaggot]

Thanks for taking time to vote.

[Sentex]

Good battle. I think that Karaoke is dope, seen him a couple of times now (congrats on the NBL). This is my first time seeing Aero battle, pretty good man. Top 5 eh? Aero's style is a little bit like Fracture's, the fight over a bitch line in particular. I think that line was my favourite from the battle. I've read the battle over a couple of times and although it's really close, for concepts and execution I've got to give it to Aero. But yeah, dope battle.

Vote - Aero

[Dope girl]

To be honest I enjoyed both verses, Both had a good opener, Closer, & Concepts
Vote- Kar for a better worded.

[Split]

Originally Posted by King Karaoke

Hi...


I'm pound for pound the best and out for necks
Ur going down in history as the only nigga slow enough to do a slow it down in text
> lol good personal, wasnt this on the site diss or something else mad long ago?
Me, lose? That'll never happen like every fight u started
Those Express logos on your shirts are the only reason u feel lionhearted
>ok
My current events are dope but my personals will send chills up ur spine
Im single by choice, ur single cuz ur ex caught u trying to meet Hush offline
>kk
Not into taxidermy but I'm about to have this GOAT on my mantle
Ironic that ur posts can get 4k views when u cant even get 4 votes in a battle
> kinda weak
Only the greats? you're considered that only in your own head
Don't know y u kept uppin it when ur not even qualified to post in ur own thread
> lols
I peeped how he disrespected Tyson's wife, this kid's a vermin
I smash snow bunnies regularly while he scares white chicks off faster than Richard Sherman
>lmao

Bye...

Originally Posted by Aero

He couldn't
.
.
watch tape of me fucking his girl, left crying saying it wasn't real
He cut film in the middle to vent, same process as his struggle meals
>lmfao
She tells him "my PMS last a year" lol that's a personal failure
Way you can stand for long periods you should work as a teller
>eh
But NEVER fight over a hoe, I don't and that's the realest truth
Last time I fought over a bitch your mom acted as a shield for you
>k
I've murdered in real life, your tough talk's an insufferable tactic
I put 3 to sleep, your sleep number's found on an adjustable mattress
>k
Fuck personals and his win streak, I'll diminish this dudes chances
I'll have your grind come to a halt like supervision at school dances
>deadd
You're a large clumsy black man with a third grader's conversation
When white people call you an ape it isn't racist it's an observation
>k

I thought this was pretty one-sided. Struggle meals was the freshest concept in the battle and had really good execution. Kar had some good personals that were a little bit statementish. I liked his Richard Sherman bar. thought he was kinda reaching w/ some of his stuff and could have gone with some strong generic bars. I think Aero's opener and quotes in general were a bit stronger, overall.good showing.

V/ Aero.

[Ryan 12]

I'm pound for pound the best and out for necks
Ur going down in history as the only nigga slow enough to do a slow it down in text
^nah
Me, lose? That'll never happen like every fight u started
Those Express logos on your shirts are the only reason u feel lionhearted
^ok
My current events are dope but my personals will send chills up ur spine
Im single by choice, ur single cuz ur ex caught u trying to meet Hush offline
^lmao
Not into taxidermy but I'm about to have this GOAT on my mantle
Ironic that ur posts can get 4k views when u cant even get 4 votes in a battle
^good
Only the greats? you're considered that only in your own head
Don't know y u kept uppin it when ur not even qualified to post in ur own thread
^nah
I peeped how he disrespected Tyson's wife, this kid's a vermin
I smash snow bunnies regularly while he scares white chicks off faster than Richard Sherman
^meh


vs



watch tape of me fucking his girl, left crying saying it wasn't real
He cut film in the middle to vent, same process as his struggle meals
^lol
She tells him "my PMS last a year" lol that's a personal failure
Way you can stand for long periods you should work as a teller
^weak
But NEVER fight over a hoe, I don't and that's the realest truth
Last time I fought over a bitch your mom acted as a shield for you
^played
I've murdered in real life, your tough talk's an insufferable tactic
I put 3 to sleep, your sleep number's found on an adjustable mattress
^meh
Fuck personals and his win streak, I'll diminish this dudes chances
I'll have your grind come to a halt like supervision at school dances
^ok
You're a large clumsy black man with a third grader's conversation
When white people call you an ape it isn't racist it's an observation
^weak and played



this battle was wack. real talk. was expecting more from both. i always laugh @ aeros bars but he looks like he didnt give a fuck bout this battle. karaoke looks like he dropped a throwaway.

but i guess he takes it for consistency . close battle though




vote... Karaoke

[StarFaggot]

Thanks to those who've voted. Let's get this one done.

[Hush]

Dope battle

[Sharp]

Unless we can find proof, can't say he recycled

[Concrete]

Karaoke, that lionhearted line was dope, clearly best of the battle, the rest was decent.
Aero; neat structure\flow\wording but lacked that heavy punchline to match your opponent in this round.

Vote Karaoke

[StarFaggot]

Cool battle. Thanks to all who took their time to vote.

[Hush]

Oh vote karaoke cuz aero recycled

[CtrlF4]

I wasn't gone say shit but he used that shield line atleast 3 times