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Old 08-06-2020, 03:46 PM   #1
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Verse 1


Hi...

That verse makes me think you must be retarded
Your style's discussion arguments. Looks like u don't understand what a bar is
You suck but build yourself up beyond belief
If you gassed yourself any harder Portland PD would make you chief
Met your girl and in 2 seconds her legs were spread n extended
She opened up so quick I thought the quarantine ended
My snipers headed your way. Beams pop up before they blast nerds
One dot after another... It'll look like typing a password
Simply a demon. Give me a reason and I'll make your life hell, dude
Get cross with me and soon you'll be crying 'the power of christ compels you'
If we meet for hands, you're beyond help, b
Swolen body, unrecognizable face... You'll look like an FGR selfie

Bye...





Verse 2


Drop dead, faggot. ain’t noone mistake YOU for a top ten
motherfucker joined an alias tourney just to prove he anon threat
truth is ur concepts suck. I’m the greatest at this
my spot solidified. this whitehead so soft he use toothpaste for his zits
Hush played you in this. You shouldn’t have made the card w/ a shooter
you got my dearest sympathies tho, cuz u bear all the Hallmarks of a loser
restart ur computer pussy. ur wife’s pussy fucking reeks
u Odysseus leave more trojans in that horse stomach than the Greeks
u nothing but a geek and never called the favorite
I’m a Stakeholder. u pale as Dracula after a slow night as dawn is breaking
u not at all creative. I give u the brush off cuz i forever be doper
think Kevin Smith in Dogma.. You’ve always Ben Afleck on my shoulder..
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Old 08-07-2020, 01:16 PM   #2
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Passwords

Anon
Hallmarks
Trojans

Thought 2 edged it here. Liked both verses. 1 dipped with the quarantine bar. Had to google the gas one and it didn’t hit that hard tbh

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Old 08-07-2020, 06:15 PM   #3
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That verse makes me think you must be retarded
Your style's discussion arguments. Looks like u don't understand what a bar is

ok, a little simplistic for my preferences

You suck but build yourself up beyond belief
If you gassed yourself any harder Portland PD would make you chief

slightly better than above, but kinda the same comment

Met your girl and in 2 seconds her legs were spread n extended
She opened up so quick I thought the quarantine ended

kinda funny but ive been bored of quarantine bars for a couple months now and I still havent seen one that's actually great

My snipers headed your way. Beams pop up before they blast nerds
One dot after another... It'll look like typing a password

this is dope

Simply a demon. Give me a reason and I'll make your life hell, dude
Get cross with me and soon you'll be crying 'the power of christ compels you'

eh this is alright, the phrase "getting cross" makes me assume that you're from Europe.

If we meet for hands, you're beyond help, b
Swolen body, unrecognizable face... You'll look like an FGR selfie

alright closer



Drop dead, faggot. ain’t noone mistake YOU for a top ten
motherfucker joined an alias tourney just to prove he anon threat

meh not a fan of the execution, concepts alright

truth is ur concepts suck. I’m the greatest at this
my spot solidified. this whitehead so soft he use toothpaste for his zits

whitehead just seems random and in the context of a shadow boxing battle just kinda of grasping at straws

Hush played you in this. You shouldn’t have made the card w/ a shooter
you got my dearest sympathies tho, cuz u bear all the Hallmarks of a loser

decent wording/execution on an ok concept

restart ur computer pussy. ur wife’s pussy fucking reeks
u Odysseus leave more trojans in that horse stomach than the Greeks

kinda gross, kinda funny, not the first time the trojan horse concepts been done but the bar's ok

u nothing but a geek and never called the favorite
I’m a Stakeholder. u pale as Dracula after a slow night as dawn is breaking

the stake/dracula thing is a little bit cringe, but the "stakeholder" idea is new to me, I just think the wording could've been better

u not at all creative. I give u the brush off cuz i forever be doper
think Kevin Smith in Dogma.. You’ve always Ben Afleck on my shoulder..

Nah this wp is horrendously bad


This is a bit tough to vote on. I battler 1 was really simple to me and I'm not a fan of that style - but I'll say he didn't make any of the missteps battler 2 made and that consistency is a big factor of importance to me. One dot after another was definitely bar of the battle for me as well. Battler 2 had the #2 and #3 best bars of the battle for me, so more quotables overall but they also had the worst 2 bars and arguably the worst 3.

overall v/ battler 1 for more consistency and lotb
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Old 08-08-2020, 02:08 PM   #4
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highs

Met your girl and in 2 seconds her legs were spread n extended
She opened up so quick I thought the quarantine ended
My snipers headed your way. Beams pop up before they blast nerds
One dot after another... It'll look like typing a password

mids n/a

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That verse makes me think you must be retarded
Your style's discussion arguments. Looks like u don't understand what a bar is
You suck but build yourself up beyond belief
If you gassed yourself any harder Portland PD would make you chief
Simply a demon. Give me a reason and I'll make your life hell, dude
Get cross with me and soon you'll be crying 'the power of christ compels you'
If we meet for hands, you're beyond help, b
Swolen body, unrecognizable face... You'll look like an FGR selfie




2

highs

mids

Hush played you in this. You shouldn’t have made the card w/ a shooter
you got my dearest sympathies tho, cuz u bear all the Hallmarks of a loser


lows

Drop dead, faggot. ain’t noone mistake YOU for a top ten
motherfucker joined an alias tourney just to prove he anon threat
truth is ur concepts suck. I’m the greatest at this
my spot solidified. this whitehead so soft he use toothpaste for his zits
restart ur computer pussy. ur wife’s pussy fucking reeks
u Odysseus leave more trojans in that horse stomach than the Greeks
u nothing but a geek and never called the favorite
I’m a Stakeholder. u pale as Dracula after a slow night as dawn is breaking
u not at all creative. I give u the brush off cuz i forever be doper
think Kevin Smith in Dogma.. You’ve always Ben Afleck on my shoulder..


battler 1 last 4 had wording and execution issues, had the 2 best lines in this battle though
battler 2 missed alot. Anon was very light, whitehead ?, ought to see us ? big reach



battler 1 wins
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That verse makes me think you must be retarded
Your style's discussion arguments. Looks like u don't understand what a bar is
You suck but build yourself up beyond belief
If you gassed yourself any harder Portland PD would make you chief
Met your girl and in 2 seconds her legs were spread n extended
She opened up so quick I thought the quarantine ended

Dot after dot


Vs

Anon threat and Trojans was ok


Your wording/execution wasn’t great here. Battler 1 was a bit basic but had better wording and overall better conceptually.


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Verse 1


Hi...

That verse makes me think you must be retarded
Your style's discussion arguments. Looks like u don't understand what a bar is
ok
You suck but build yourself up beyond belief
If you gassed yourself any harder Portland PD would make you chief
naaa
Met your girl and in 2 seconds her legs were spread n extended
She opened up so quick I thought the quarantine ended
eh
My snipers headed your way. Beams pop up before they blast nerds
One dot after another... It'll look like typing a password
thats fire
Simply a demon. Give me a reason and I'll make your life hell, dude
Get cross with me and soon you'll be crying 'the power of christ compels you'
eh
If we meet for hands, you're beyond help, b
Swolen body, unrecognizable face... You'll look like an FGR selfie
ok


Bye...





Verse 2


Drop dead, faggot. ain’t noone mistake YOU for a top ten
motherfucker joined an alias tourney just to prove he anon threat
dope
truth is ur concepts suck. I’m the greatest at this
my spot solidified. this whitehead so soft he use toothpaste for his zits
ok
Hush played you in this. You shouldn’t have made the card w/ a shooter
you got my dearest sympathies tho, cuz u bear all the Hallmarks of a loser
eh
restart ur computer pussy. ur wife’s pussy fucking reeks
u Odysseus leave more trojans in that horse stomach than the Greeks
eh
u nothing but a geek and never called the favorite
I’m a Stakeholder. u pale as Dracula after a slow night as dawn is breaking
eh
u not at all creative. I give u the brush off cuz i forever be doper
think Kevin Smith in Dogma.. You’ve always Ben Afleck on my shoulder..
nice

close battle. I got battler 1 with lotb

the hallmark and dracula lines from two felt a bit dated



vote battler 1
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