Shadow Boxing Battle #1 - CLOSED

Hush · 08-02-2020, 12:38 PM

Long awaited and I appreciate the patience. You can PM me your votes if you would like. For those who want to keep the mystery going , you DO NOT have to be in the tournament to vote . ALL VOTES will be counted within reason. Thank you for your patience.

Battler 1

I can see u champing shadow boxing. thats my hunch
Cuz you both connect with nothing when throwing a punch
I'm kidding creep, you losing is a given....
If he's making moves in shadows it's attacking unsuspecting women
Quit the lame lines. Your rhymes never earn wealth
So 'committed to whack shit' ur in the loony bin for not keeping hands to yourself
A quick cock of the glock will prove that your not hard
When I start dumping shells like red lobsters busboy cleaning after bombbard
If you hung in my hood the goons would teach you a lesson
You'd come 'post up, then disappear' like voting in the pic section
Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day
A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume

Battler 2

no telling what I do when the blades cut across
knife lodged in til ur done bleeding out, pussy. thats menopause
I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight
yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site. ha
& faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known
reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone.
shadow boxing ? naa. I take to the street
deliver such combos on u my punches pushing overtime with Uber Eats
uglyyy when ya mom was pregnant .. THAT shit was upsetting
we prayed she tie the knot with baby inside her. Call it a shotgun wedding.
& eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon
ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room.

UPN Zuch · 08-02-2020, 12:59 PM

Battler 2 got this pretty easily. No haymakers but everything was pretty cool.

Battler 1 had making moves in shadows and bomb bard lines that stood out. Bomb bard line could have been worded better.

Vote battler 2

UserName · 08-02-2020, 01:39 PM

Battler 1

Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day
A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume

coolest line you had, bud.

Battler 2

I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight
yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site. ha
& faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known
reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone.
& eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon
ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room

These were cool. The rest was really, really iffy. You flowed/worded everything better than Battler 1, that's for sure. Cool Resin impression.

v - Battler 2

Hush · 08-02-2020, 03:00 PM

PM’d vote

I can see u champing shadow boxing. thats my hunch
Cuz you both connect with nothing when throwing a punch

6

I'm kidding creep, you losing is a given....
If he's making moves in shadows it's attacking unsuspecting women

6

Quit the lame lines. Your rhymes never earn wealth
So 'committed to whack shit' ur in the loony bin for not keeping hands to yourself

7

A quick cock of the glock will prove that your not hard
When I start dumping shells like red lobsters busboy cleaning after bombbard

5

If you hung in my hood the goons would teach you a lesson
You'd come 'post up, then disappear' like voting in the pic section

7

Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day
A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume

7

Battler 2

no telling what I do when the blades cut across
knife lodged in til ur done bleeding out, pussy. thats menopause

6

I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight
yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site. ha

7

& faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known
reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone.

7

shadow boxing ? naa. I take to the street
deliver such combos on u my punches pushing overtime with Uber Eats

7

uglyyy when ya mom was pregnant .. THAT shit was upsetting
we prayed she tie the knot with baby inside her. Call it a shotgun wedding.

7

& eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon
ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room.

7

battler 2 was definitely more consistent throughout. Some of the ideas like tie the knot, delivering combos are pretty outdated but the overall wording of everything was crisp.

v/ battler 2

Hush · 08-03-2020, 07:35 AM

PM’d Vote

Connect with nothing
Unsuspecting women
Bombard line woulda hit if worded better

Anonymous
Combos
Escape room

Pretty close. I think battler 2 just edged it with consistency and better wording with the Resin style

Vote - 2

Amen · 08-03-2020, 08:55 AM

1

Connect with nothing was a obvious play that couldn’t been executed a little harsher.
Moves in shadows was over worded.
Committed to wack shit was meh.
Dumping shells had potential but your execution wasn’t good.
Post up was meh.
Great resume was alright.

2

Menopause was meh.
League of your own is a played concept and you hardly flipped it well enough to pass.
Reps an anonymous was ok.
Punches pushing overtime was meh.
Shotgun wedding was ok.
Escape room was ok.

Battler 2 edged this.

Barcotic · 08-03-2020, 10:24 AM

Battler 1
I can see u champing shadow boxing. thats my hunch
Cuz you both connect with nothing when throwing a punch
Cuz you both? Awkward wording on a dated idea
I'm kidding creep, you losing is a given....
If he's making moves in shadows it's attacking unsuspecting women
Again, wording needs a tweak. Good concept, but no one would refer to the tournament as 'shadows'. + the rhyming was slacking
Quit the lame lines. Your rhymes never earn wealth
So 'committed to whack shit' ur in the loony bin for not keeping hands to yourself
Not feeling this at all
A quick cock of the glock will prove that your not hard
When I start dumping shells like red lobsters busboy cleaning after bombbard
Fire, as far as concept goes. Not so much on the execution..so this barely hit, when it could've been a banger
If you hung in my hood the goons would teach you a lesson
You'd come 'post up, then disappear' like voting in the pic section
Poor wording seems to be a recurring issue. Another dope idea, turned mediocre with bad execution
Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day
A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume
Same shit. The second line alone is haymaker worthy, but you need a better setup and an above grade 3 level rhyming ability for the bar as a whole to be one

Battler 2
no telling what I do when the blades cut across
knife lodged in til ur done bleeding out, pussy. thats menopause
Slack execution, dope idea. Decent overall
I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight
yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site.
Lol ok
& faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known
reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone.
Dope
shadow boxing ? naa. I take to the street
deliver such combos on u my punches pushing overtime with Uber Eats
Nah man. Combo shit is mad played, and your flip wasn't enough to make it any good
uglyyy when ya mom was pregnant .. THAT shit was upsetting
we prayed she tie the knot with baby inside her. Call it a shotgun wedding.
Ok-ish
& eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon
ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room.
Cool, nothing special but wording is on point

Mannnnn if these two switched each other styles and kept the same concepts, I'd have Battler 1 winning w/ a FIRE verse

Not the case tho, unfortunately for him
Mvgt Battler 2

Bomb Bard · 08-06-2020, 07:20 AM

A quick cock of the glock will prove that your not hard
When I start dumping shells like red lobsters busboy cleaning after bombbard

Vs

I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight
yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site.
& faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known
reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone.

Decent battle. Battler 1 had wording issues battler two had some misses but they had more impact than battler 1

V/2

Ouch · 08-06-2020, 12:55 PM

Person 1...

I'm kidding creep, you losing is a given....
If he's making moves in shadows it's attacking unsuspecting women
thats alright... not bad
Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day
A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume
[b] pretty nice/b]

vs...

& faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known
reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone.
& eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon
ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room

both had 2 decent ones i've got to give it number 2

08-02-2020, 01:39 PM	#3
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228862	Battler 1 Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume coolest line you had, bud. Battler 2 I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site. ha & faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone. & eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room These were cool. The rest was really, really iffy. You flowed/worded everything better than Battler 1, that's for sure. Cool Resin impression. v - Battler 2 __________________ First Class

08-02-2020, 03:00 PM	#4
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	PM’d vote I can see u champing shadow boxing. thats my hunch Cuz you both connect with nothing when throwing a punch 6 I'm kidding creep, you losing is a given.... If he's making moves in shadows it's attacking unsuspecting women 6 Quit the lame lines. Your rhymes never earn wealth So 'committed to whack shit' ur in the loony bin for not keeping hands to yourself 7 A quick cock of the glock will prove that your not hard When I start dumping shells like red lobsters busboy cleaning after bombbard 5 If you hung in my hood the goons would teach you a lesson You'd come 'post up, then disappear' like voting in the pic section 7 Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume 7 Battler 2 no telling what I do when the blades cut across knife lodged in til ur done bleeding out, pussy. thats menopause 6 I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site. ha 7 & faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone. 7 shadow boxing ? naa. I take to the street deliver such combos on u my punches pushing overtime with Uber Eats 7 uglyyy when ya mom was pregnant .. THAT shit was upsetting we prayed she tie the knot with baby inside her. Call it a shotgun wedding. 7 & eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room. 7 battler 2 was definitely more consistent throughout. Some of the ideas like tie the knot, delivering combos are pretty outdated but the overall wording of everything was crisp. v/ battler 2 __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

08-03-2020, 07:35 AM	#5
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	PM’d Vote Connect with nothing Unsuspecting women Bombard line woulda hit if worded better Anonymous Combos Escape room Pretty close. I think battler 2 just edged it with consistency and better wording with the Resin style Vote - 2 __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

08-03-2020, 10:24 AM	#7
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	Battler 1 I can see u champing shadow boxing. thats my hunch Cuz you both connect with nothing when throwing a punch Cuz you both? Awkward wording on a dated idea I'm kidding creep, you losing is a given.... If he's making moves in shadows it's attacking unsuspecting women Again, wording needs a tweak. Good concept, but no one would refer to the tournament as 'shadows'. + the rhyming was slacking Quit the lame lines. Your rhymes never earn wealth So 'committed to whack shit' ur in the loony bin for not keeping hands to yourself Not feeling this at all A quick cock of the glock will prove that your not hard When I start dumping shells like red lobsters busboy cleaning after bombbard Fire, as far as concept goes. Not so much on the execution..so this barely hit, when it could've been a banger If you hung in my hood the goons would teach you a lesson You'd come 'post up, then disappear' like voting in the pic section Poor wording seems to be a recurring issue. Another dope idea, turned mediocre with bad execution Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume Same shit. The second line alone is haymaker worthy, but you need a better setup and an above grade 3 level rhyming ability for the bar as a whole to be one Battler 2 no telling what I do when the blades cut across knife lodged in til ur done bleeding out, pussy. thats menopause Slack execution, dope idea. Decent overall I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site. Lol ok & faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone. Dope shadow boxing ? naa. I take to the street deliver such combos on u my punches pushing overtime with Uber Eats Nah man. Combo shit is mad played, and your flip wasn't enough to make it any good uglyyy when ya mom was pregnant .. THAT shit was upsetting we prayed she tie the knot with baby inside her. Call it a shotgun wedding. Ok-ish & eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room. Cool, nothing special but wording is on point Mannnnn if these two switched each other styles and kept the same concepts, I'd have Battler 1 winning w/ a FIRE verse Not the case tho, unfortunately for him Mvgt Battler 2 __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

08-06-2020, 12:55 PM	#9
Ouch Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2019 Posts: 5,684 Battle Record: 1-5 Accomplishments - Lost to Kill Spree Champed - Wall Talking Rep Power: 4052252	Person 1... I'm kidding creep, you losing is a given.... If he's making moves in shadows it's attacking unsuspecting women thats alright... not bad Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume [b] pretty nice/b] vs... & faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone. & eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room both had 2 decent ones i've got to give it number 2 __________________ I just figured out how to change this.

08-02-2020, 12:38 PM	#1
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Shadow Boxing Battle #1 - CLOSED Long awaited and I appreciate the patience. You can PM me your votes if you would like. For those who want to keep the mystery going , you DO NOT have to be in the tournament to vote . ALL VOTES will be counted within reason. Thank you for your patience. Battler 1 I can see u champing shadow boxing. thats my hunch Cuz you both connect with nothing when throwing a punch I'm kidding creep, you losing is a given.... If he's making moves in shadows it's attacking unsuspecting women Quit the lame lines. Your rhymes never earn wealth So 'committed to whack shit' ur in the loony bin for not keeping hands to yourself A quick cock of the glock will prove that your not hard When I start dumping shells like red lobsters busboy cleaning after bombbard If you hung in my hood the goons would teach you a lesson You'd come 'post up, then disappear' like voting in the pic section Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume Battler 2 no telling what I do when the blades cut across knife lodged in til ur done bleeding out, pussy. thats menopause I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site. ha & faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone. shadow boxing ? naa. I take to the street deliver such combos on u my punches pushing overtime with Uber Eats uglyyy when ya mom was pregnant .. THAT shit was upsetting we prayed she tie the knot with baby inside her. Call it a shotgun wedding. & eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room. __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

08-03-2020, 08:55 AM	#6
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,470 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	1 Connect with nothing was a obvious play that couldn’t been executed a little harsher. Moves in shadows was over worded. Committed to wack shit was meh. Dumping shells had potential but your execution wasn’t good. Post up was meh. Great resume was alright. 2 Menopause was meh. League of your own is a played concept and you hardly flipped it well enough to pass. Reps an anonymous was ok. Punches pushing overtime was meh. Shotgun wedding was ok. Escape room was ok. Battler 2 edged this.

08-06-2020, 07:20 AM	#8
Bomb Bard FUCK YOU Join Date: Feb 2015 Posts: 1,041 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 8436723	A quick cock of the glock will prove that your not hard When I start dumping shells like red lobsters busboy cleaning after bombbard Vs I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site. & faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone. Decent battle. Battler 1 had wording issues battler two had some misses but they had more impact than battler 1 V/2