10-16-2020, 06:53 PM | #1 |
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WEEK 3: Brokenhal0 0-1 VS Universe 0-2 UNIVERSE WINS
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Rules Line limit Minimum: 10 Maximum: 16 Verses due 11:59pm EST October 20, 2020 (Tuesday) Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE Good luck, gentlemen __________________ |
10-17-2020, 12:55 AM | #2 |
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Your a universal bore a loser worse to talk to cause you booze and burst to law
some universes don't deserve support that universe is lost time to saw those universes off like a universal force effect and cause how this moves in tune with song a planet where your multis lack truth and all you do is wrong im universally you so when i spit the future looks back in two a source while you Use others to Verse the lack in U feed your corpse while the dogs dragged it threw another dimension in time no stars shine in vacuumed rooms im like a living starship call me event horizon your crew just got sucked into the blackest diamond minding annunaki universe got merked hes a fake hes a copy the constellations spelling out universe is sloppy haters on this site playing favorites cause some see commodity in pass go that's your last hope pour some tabasco in your black holes i will steal your galaxy's wearing my labcoat extinguish all your suns until no light shines on your dad's throne this verse certain to move the earth call that adverse effects another pussy playing with planets but this big bang happens next Last edited by brokenhal0; 10-17-2020 at 01:18 AM. |
10-18-2020, 09:10 AM | #3 |
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You know what? Fuck it. I'll match the 18...
"Learn to count, motherfucker" - Brian Ortega That was a barely legal 18... Some things don't improve with time, Zuch You handed this bum a squeegee just so he could squeak by in my view Bro' I read the rhymes you spewed... I'd prefer to have the Covid 19 flu Twice removed since the 9th of June, rather than rub elbows with the likes of you CaPiTal LettERs advertised the truth; I don't consider many things used It's not my business, but it proves Brochure can't deliver anything new... Shouldn't have stepped in the ring dude, no one expects you to win this If you played to your strengths you'd never make it off the bench to begin with You less than efficient; A shallow halibut never raising a line It's kind of like Shallow Hal a bit... you don't pull your weight in my eyes Your wifey's like, "Why can't my bitch ass husband hit a punch?" It's cuz I see them coming from afar, missy... like prescription drugs Son's got a God complex, you looked upon as easy prey Couldn't pass yourself off as a frontrunner with a baton at a relay race Tonight's the night, a Slice of Life - Dexter versus an odd little angel But I'm still trying to wrap my head around what YOU brought to the table... Guess 'Everything Connected' but your halo... I must've missed Bro's fall It's no prob, kid just got lit up in retro-specked like a disco ball... Thanks for coming out.
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..Passed the Present and Future.. Last edited by Universe; 10-18-2020 at 02:34 PM. |
10-19-2020, 02:17 AM | #4 |
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this verse certain to move the earth call that adverse effects
another pussy playing with planets but this big bang happens next Vs Shouldn't have stepped in the ring dude, no one expects you to win this If you played to your strengths you'd never make it off the bench to begin with You less than efficient; A shallow halibut never raising a line It's kind of like Shallow Hal a bit... you don't pull your weight in my eyes Your wifey's like, "Why can't my bitch ass husband hit a punch?" It's cuz I see them coming from afar, missy... like prescription drugs Tonight's the night, a Slice of Life - Dexter versus an odd little angel But I'm still trying to wrap my head around what YOU brought to the table... Universe wins this handily, Halo’s closer was okay but the rest was bleh. V/Uni |
10-19-2020, 03:35 AM | #5 |
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Universe
Shallow Hal cool Disco ball ok You didn’t need much against this opponent Halo Nothing much bro.. keep working on it Vote universe |
10-19-2020, 12:43 PM | #6 |
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You less than efficient; A shallow halibut never raising a line
It's kind of like Shallow Hal a bit... you don't pull your weight in my eyes Son's got a God complex, you looked upon as easy prey Couldn't pass yourself off as a frontrunner with a baton at a relay race vs nothing.... v/universe. not sure if brokenhalo is a troll or being serious? universe had some decent stuff, but I have a feeling he held back after judging his competition.
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10-20-2020, 08:54 AM | #7 |
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Both did pretty well. Good work.
Vote - BROKEN HALO |
10-20-2020, 09:41 AM | #8 |
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This is why we ban.
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10-20-2020, 09:51 AM | #9 |
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@Universe this verse was fire. I enjoyed all the tie-ins & associations in the set ups. I like your style, it’s different. Rub elbows was a fire flip, pharmacy was nice, shallow hall was cool, brochure was nice because it all tied together well.
I’m not reading brokenhalos verse. Vote Universe. |
10-20-2020, 04:23 PM | #10 |
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From what I've read so far on here, I think Universe is pretty underrated as a battler around here. His verse wasn't perfect and had several stretches that I didn't really like, but there were several very creative concepts... and the wording had an originality to it that made it refreshing. Decent verse.
Brokenhalo... The tabasco/black hole line was actually kinda funny and smooth. There wasn't really anything else. Keep practicing. Vote, Universe.
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10-21-2020, 05:11 PM | #11 |
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Universe ain’t no joke
Solid verse throughout. Disco and shallow Hal were my favs Halo I wasn’t feeling much of yours. Better than last week so at least you’re improving. Keep it up. Vote Uni
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10-22-2020, 03:00 PM | #12 |
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Your a universal bore a loser worse to talk to cause you booze and burst to law
some universes don't deserve support that universe is lost funny but why would you support an universe time to saw those universes off like a universal force effect and cause how this moves in tune with song cool philosophy a planet where your multis lack truth and all you do is wrong im universally you so when i spit the future looks back in two wording hurt this yo but u couldve done something cool with this a source while you Use others to Verse the lack in U feed your corpse while the dogs dragged it threw lol is the punchline in the setup also its sretched and corny another dimension in time no stars shine in vacuumed rooms im like a living starship call me event horizon statement your crew just got sucked into the blackest diamond minding annunaki universe got merked hes a fake hes a copy eeeeeh the constellations spelling out universe is sloppy haters on this site playing favorites cause some see commodity in pass go whos hating that's your last hope pour some tabasco in your black holes i will steal your galaxy's wearing my labcoat extinguish all your suns until no light shines on your dad's throne this is some thanos shit this verse certain to move the earth call that adverse effects another pussy playing with planets but this big bang happens next ok potential bar but dude vs. That was a barely legal 18... Some things don't improve with time, Zuch You handed this bum a squeegee just so he could squeak by in my view okk Bro' I read the rhymes you spewed... I'd prefer to have the Covid 19 flu Twice removed since the 9th of June, rather than rub elbows with the likes of you cool CaPiTal LettERs advertised the truth; I don't consider many things used It's not my business, but it proves Brochure can't deliver anything new... ok[/B] Shouldn't have stepped in the ring dude, no one expects you to win this If you played to your strengths you'd never make it off the bench to begin with okk You less than efficient; A shallow halibut never raising a line It's kind of like Shallow Hal a bit... you don't pull your weight in my eyes okk Your wifey's like, "Why can't my bitch ass husband hit a punch?" It's cuz I see them coming from afar, missy... like prescription drugs cool Son's got a God complex, you looked upon as easy prey Couldn't pass yourself off as a frontrunner with a baton at a relay race ok Tonight's the night, a Slice of Life - Dexter versus an odd little angel But I'm still trying to wrap my head around what YOU brought to the table... statement Guess 'Everything Connected' but your halo... I must've missed Bro's fall It's no prob, kid just got lit up in retro-specked like a disco ball... cool yooo universe good verse and stuff.. gotta mention that your initial attitude on the line limit was wack and childish thats not a textcee spirit but im glad you overcame that situation.. someone had to say it... you definitely bringing heat compared to your first battle. looking forward to battle you v/ universe |
10-23-2020, 11:16 AM | #13 |
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Shallow halibut the most ridiculous setup ever lol. Uni had some cool stuff though like brochure and the flow was nice. Hal0 didn’t have any standouts to me
Vote - universe
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10-23-2020, 01:10 PM | #14 |
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The first guy wrote a topical verse and universe fed through his entire verse
Not sure how to vote on this |
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