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Old 05-28-2018, 10:29 AM   #1
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Old 05-28-2018, 12:07 PM   #2
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Old 05-28-2018, 01:47 PM   #3
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here. 10-12? @Joe Boston.....I'm good whenever you wanna drop.

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Old 06-01-2018, 12:43 PM   #4
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I say..



You should be a bubblegum rapper but if you think ya flowin
I’ll use a Bazooka Joe & open up this wrapper till the pink is showin
This is an all-out war so bullets will clip your shin...head...spine
& when ya look over at AMC the last thing you’ll see is The Thin Red Line
I could win dead lyin...instead I got a gurney for your sad journey
This week I’ll murder you & the nigga that dropped you in the tag tourney
If the K-Ci you, it’ll split you in two so...JoJo don't roll up slow to me
Or I’ma body a singin nigga...guns will tune him up too fast for Jodeci
I’ma stage this...let Boston Celtics but I’m the King & your the pawn
You ran shit till ya saw my Cavs chase ya down on the block like Lebron
Your 1-2 & the flyest on the bench but this shit`ll make God pray bro...
If you scramble or Jet...I’ll catch you & spread you all over Broadway Joe


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Old 06-01-2018, 07:02 PM   #5
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Keep flapping your gums bitch, these knuckles and your face will meet
Set the Barr by whoopin that ass, you'll apologize quicker than a Roseanne Tweet
Sugar in your tank you sweet as fuck, that fag shit i dont support
You probably tease and get balls to the face, should replace Draymond Green on the basketball court
I hope this resorts to voilence, got killing down to a science get to fucking know me
I'll leave you dead toungue hanging to the side of ur cheek looking like the Miley Cyrus Emoji
Your bitch stuffs hoagies to the face, shes turned on by excessivey eating
A cheat day for her is if a man keeps her hunger satisfied the bitch is actually cheating
These two fist beating him senseless, fag better run for the fences
After i split his fucking crown he gonna need 20 stitches and routine trips to the dentist
Got The Pound like fucking Benchlifts an easy death wont be that hard
Blood all over your Beshte shells roaring through you like the fucking Lion Guard
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You should be a bubblegum rapper but if you think ya flowin
I’ll use a Bazooka Joe & open up this wrapper till the pink is showin
man.. i wanted to like this, wording made it weird for me, coo concept
This is an all-out war so bullets will clip your shin...head...spine
& when ya look over at AMC the last thing you’ll see is The Thin Red Line
ok
I could win dead lyin...instead I got a gurney for your sad journey
This week I’ll murder you & the nigga that dropped you in the tag tourney
lol, dope
If the K-Ci you, it’ll split you in two so...JoJo don't roll up slow to me
Or I’ma body a singin nigga...guns will tune him up too fast for Jodeci
I was waiting for the Drake tie-in, lol, fks w/ this tho
I’ma stage this...let Boston Celtics but I’m the King & your the pawn
You ran shit till ya saw my Cavs chase ya down on the block like Lebron
thought this could've been doper
Your 1-2 & the flyest on the bench but this shit`ll make God pray bro...
If you scramble or Jet...I’ll catch you & spread you all over Broadway Joe
I didn't like we needed a pic for this to make sense, cool line tho

Keep flapping your gums bitch, these knuckles and your face will meet
Set the Barr by whoopin that ass, you'll apologize quicker than a Roseanne Tweet
lol
Sugar in your tank you sweet as fuck, that fag shit i dont support
You probably tease and get balls to the face, should replace Draymond Green on the basketball court
na..
I hope this resorts to voilence, got killing down to a science get to fucking know me
I'll leave you dead toungue hanging to the side of ur cheek looking like the Miley Cyrus Emoji
coo
Your bitch stuffs hoagies to the face, shes turned on by excessivey eating
A cheat day for her is if a man keeps her hunger satisfied the bitch is actually cheating
lol...na
These two fist beating him senseless, fag better run for the fences
After i split his fucking crown he gonna need 20 stitches and routine trips to the dentist
not feeling this one
Got The Pound like fucking Benchlifts an easy death wont be that hard
Blood all over your Beshte shells roaring through you like the fucking Lion Guard
alot going on here, wasn't familiar w/ the ref either, see what u did now

Closer than I thought it would be. I guess a lot of this is preference, but Body did what he had to to take this. That miley cyrus line was funny, but body had better misses, and the tag shit was lotb for me.

Cool read, thanks guy... Props to both for showing.

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Old 06-02-2018, 11:34 PM   #7
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You should be a bubblegum rapper but if you think ya flowin
I’ll use a Bazooka Joe & open up this wrapper till the pink is showin
this is fire tbh
This is an all-out war so bullets will clip your shin...head...spine
& when ya look over at AMC the last thing you’ll see is The Thin Red Line
wasnt really feelin this
I could win dead lyin...instead I got a gurney for your sad journey
This week I’ll murder you & the nigga that dropped you in the tag tourney
decent, kind of indirect
If the K-Ci you, it’ll split you in two so...JoJo don't roll up slow to me
Or I’ma body a singin nigga...guns will tune him up too fast for Jodeci
this is wordy and I’ve used this on him many moons ago but either way this is good bro, I liked it
I’ma stage this...let Boston Celtics but I’m the King & your the pawn
You ran shit till ya saw my Cavs chase ya down on the block like Lebron
felt like you were trying to incorporate too much, esp in the setup. Decent at best
Your 1-2 & the flyest on the bench but this shit`ll make God pray bro...
If you scramble or Jet...I’ll catch you & spread you all over Broadway Joe
i liked this, good shit

Snarch is gonna be a problem soon, he’s DEFINITELY got the concepts and ideas as well as the fundamentals down, just has to perfect the wording for his specific style and tweak some shit but that’s gonna happen soon. Good shit guy.

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Keep flapping your gums bitch, these knuckles and your face will meet
Set the Barr by whoopin that ass, you'll apologize quicker than a Roseanne Tweet
alright not bad, the concept had potential for more but this was overall still ok
Sugar in your tank you sweet as fuck, that fag shit i dont support
You probably tease and get balls to the face, should replace Draymond Green on the basketball court
alright I liked this
I hope this resorts to voilence, got killing down to a science get to fucking know me
I'll leave you dead toungue hanging to the side of ur cheek looking like the Miley Cyrus Emoji
the concept was good but you fell into bad habit and made this too wordy, decent at best now
Your bitch stuffs hoagies to the face, shes turned on by excessivey eating
A cheat day for her is if a man keeps her hunger satisfied the bitch is actually cheating
nahh
These two fist beating him senseless, fag better run for the fences
After i split his fucking crown he gonna need 20 stitches and routine trips to the dentist
the whole crown play is pretty overdone and played bro
Got The Pound like fucking Benchlifts an easy death wont be that hard
Blood all over your Beshte shells roaring through you like the fucking Lion Guard
whats a bench lift? That a new workout routine that I haven’t heard of yet? This wasn’t good man

Joe you started off really good and if you had kept up that momentum this would have been a fire verse and you would have won it. Your last 3 lines were all misses and hurt your chance at winning this. You have dope concepts as per usual, just gotta continue working on your wording and execution


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Old 06-03-2018, 12:42 AM   #8
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You should be a bubblegum rapper but if you think ya flowin
I’ll use a Bazooka Joe & open up this wrapper till the pink is showin

Ight Opener

This is an all-out war so bullets will clip your shin...head...spine
& when ya look over at AMC the last thing you’ll see is The Thin Red Line

Niceeee

I could win dead lyin...instead I got a gurney for your sad journey
This week I’ll murder you & the nigga that dropped you in the tag tourney

Lol Funny

the K-Ci you, it’ll split you in two so...JoJo don't roll up slow to me
Or I’ma body a singin nigga...guns will tune him up too fast for Jodeci

I can imagine this been flipped a couple times, I liked it tho!

I’ma stage this...let Boston Celtics but I’m the King & your the pawn
You ran shit till ya saw my Cavs chase ya down on the block like Lebron

Not to hard hitting here

Your 1-2 & the flyest on the bench but this shit`ll make God pray bro...
If you scramble or Jet...I’ll catch you & spread you all over Broadway Joe

Decent Ender

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Keep flapping your gums bitch, these knuckles and your face will meet
Set the Barr by whoopin that ass, you'll apologize quicker than a Roseanne Tweet

Lol nice opener

Sugar in your tank you sweet as fuck, that fag shit i dont support
You probably tease and get balls to the face, should replace Draymond Green on the basketball court

This was ok

I hope this resorts to voilence, got killing down to a science get to fucking know me
I'll leave you dead toungue hanging to the side of ur cheek looking like the Miley Cyrus Emoji

Coo

Your bitch stuffs hoagies to the face, shes turned on by excessivey eating
A cheat day for her is if a man keeps her hunger satisfied the bitch is actually cheating

Lol idk this bar just is what it is I guess

These two fist beating him senseless, fag better run for the fences
After i split his fucking crown he gonna need 20 stitches and routine trips to the dentist

Could have did better with this one

Got The Pound like fucking Benchlifts an easy death wont be that hard
Blood all over your Beshte shells roaring through you like the fucking Lion Guard


Didn't really get this one!



Cool battle here! Props to both, I got Body here, just overall less misses and better creativity in his verse. Joe started with heat then faded!

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You should be a bubblegum rapper but if you think ya flowin
I’ll use a Bazooka Joe & open up this wrapper till the pink is showin

(Good opener. Rapper/wrapper is VERY played but you executed it well and gave it a fresh touch. Also had the name play in there so overall nice line.)

This is an all-out war so bullets will clip your shin...head...spine
& when ya look over at AMC the last thing you’ll see is The Thin Red Line

(I haven’t seen this movie but I might have missed a reference but I think I caught everything. AMC and name a movie isn’t too crazy. I just thought this was okay)

I could win dead lyin...instead I got a gurney for your sad journey
This week I’ll murder you & the nigga that dropped you in the tag tourney

(Ha...prob coulda did a bit more with this angle but it was good as it was)

If the K-Ci you, it’ll split you in two so...JoJo don't roll up slow to me
Or I’ma body a singin nigga...guns will tune him up too fast for Jodeci

(Yup I like it. The Jodeci wp came off smooth and was a good tie in. K-Ci was fine too. Only critique is the JoJo and ‘Body a singing nigga’ seem seem like a forced tie in (unless Joe sings lol). Overall good line though).

I’ma stage this...let Boston Celtics but I’m the King & your the pawn
You ran shit till ya saw my Cavs chase ya down on the block like Lebron

(This was cool. Might have tried to do a bit too much. Might have tried to do too much and some concepts came off a bit underdeveloped...ie the sell tix wp didn’t have any tie in to the punch - you kinda just dropped the angle. King and your the pawn came off a bit forced even though I see what you was trying to do. The actual punch was good though. Overall, pretty good line.

Your 1-2 & the flyest on the bench but this shit`ll make God pray bro...
If you scramble or Jet...I’ll catch you & spread you all over Broadway Joe

(Yep, liked this one. Solid name flip, I’m digging the joe Namath reference and overall good closer)



Keep flapping your gums bitch, these knuckles and your face will meet
Set the Barr by whoopin that ass, you'll apologize quicker than a Roseanne Tweet

(This was okay. It wasn’t crazy because there was no double meaning or anything with the punch. Straightforward but it also came off a bit basic)

Sugar in your tank you sweet as fuck, that fag shit i dont support
You probably tease and get balls to the face, should replace Draymond Green on the basketball court

(I like the current event reference and the concept. The wording on this was kinda weird. It just didn’t come off hard and the ‘tease abs get balls to the face’ just didn’t come off right and the whole line was wordy)

I hope this resorts to voilence, got killing down to a science get to fucking know me
I'll leave you dead toungue hanging to the side of ur cheek looking like the Miley Cyrus Emoji

(Yep, liked this)

Your bitch stuffs hoagies to the face, shes turned on by excessivey eating
A cheat day for her is if a man keeps her hunger satisfied the bitch is actually cheating

(Ha this was funny to me. Not rolling on the ground but funny. Shoulda worded it cleaner though)

These two fist beating him senseless, fag better run for the fences
After i split his fucking crown he gonna need 20 stitches and routine trips to the dentist

(This was too much of a statement)

Got The Pound like fucking Benchlifts an easy death wont be that hard
Blood all over your Beshte shells roaring through you like the fucking Lion Guard

(I missed this reference. Tried to google it but I still didn’t catch it. I think this was just too obscure of a reference though)


Very consistent verse from BodySnatcher. Every showing he’s had in his league has been good imo. He did his thing with his typical punch heavy style layered with intricate tie ins. I think your biggest thing is some of the tie ins feel forced and sometimes you teeter on the line of doing too much and it distracts from the punch.

Joe came with it too though but just got out punched in this one. Also had some obscure references that hurt him in this one. Enjoyed the read. I think Body Snatcher took this one.

Mvgt Body Snatcher
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