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Old 08-17-2019, 03:36 AM   #1
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Old 08-17-2019, 06:40 PM   #2
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classic here.

plus whatever's left to kill my time / inhibit emotion
our stories are similar but we never expose them
mimicking social cues inside our physical hosts
inventive / resourceful / primitive / defective / remorseful
i'll light another camel joe. you bring the explosives
pick your poison: be it victim or torturer, make your appointment
it seems what mattered least to me was gravely important
so it is, if it was to be. so vague in it's origin
a Rorschach transforming if you stare for a moment
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Old 08-19-2019, 11:21 PM   #3
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Fire, this stood out to me for some reason..

i'll light another camel joe. you bring the explosives
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deserves proper feed. will repost in a bit, sir.
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Then again hes had this schtick so long he like bb da bb da bb thats all folks
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Old 08-22-2019, 09:24 AM   #5
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hell yeah i want to be! only writer i read on this entire site. i skip guys like nyc and lars. samurais and bragging in foreign accents just ain't cutting it for me. substance is what I'm after and dm writes beautifully. wish i could touch certain topics as confidently and with info as he does!
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I agree, dm is by far the most original and best writer here imho. Why do you imitate his style does it assuage your intense angst and bring you a secondary sort of catharsis? Kind of weird come up with your own style lol. Black sorry about that I'll feed this properly later...
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Hello, Dead Man.

I thought this was a good drop from you; you are assured in language arts and verbiage from writing. Good work, you are very talented. I enjoy your work. Keep writing!
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I agree, dm is by far the most original and best writer here imho. Why do you imitate his style does it assuage your intense angst and bring you a secondary sort of catharsis? Kind of weird come up with your own style lol. Black sorry about that I'll feed this properly later...
me and dm have a pretty cool recognizing of each other. normal stuff between normal people. you're literally the weirdest fucking loser loner here, in a site full of loser loners. following me around adorably leaving little diatribes of love by trying to discredit me. you haven't written anything of substance, probably ever and your only credit to relevancy is that you make up percentages around obscure bitcoin mock popups. you're a lonely freak, so please kindly fuck off. the regularly scheduled calling me by my name and a guess of where i live is bound to come, which only bolsters my lonely loser assumption i, and undoubtedly everyone here has about you. a place in which you constantly clamor for attention over people you perceive as beneath with, which is sad and i hope you seek help, samurai. other than the usual glossing over dms post or having something to say when i commend his writing, your time here is spent posting mining links and being a faceless desperate creep. reevaluate pls. kindly fawk off. clown
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I consider both of you friends so the mutual hatred ITT is a bit jarring

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me and dm have a pretty cool recognizing of each other. normal stuff between normal people. you're literally the weirdest fucking loser loner here, in a site full of loser loners. following me around adorably leaving little diatribes of love by trying to discredit me. you haven't written anything of substance, probably ever and your only credit to relevancy is that you make up percentages around obscure bitcoin mock popups. you're a lonely freak, so please kindly fuck off. the regularly scheduled calling me by my name and a guess of where i live is bound to come, which only bolsters my lonely loser assumption i, and undoubtedly everyone here has about you. a place in which you constantly clamor for attention over people you perceive as beneath with, which is sad and i hope you seek help, samurai. other than the usual glossing over dms post or having something to say when i commend his writing, your time here is spent posting mining links and being a faceless desperate creep. reevaluate pls. kindly fawk off. clown
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Good grief this was nice. I’ll have to read more of your stuff. I saw all the hype but never paid attention. B.B. might want to write like you but I’m going to take a stab at it soon.
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no hatred here i just legit think he's a piece of shit heh
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Well, considering NYC got robbed when it should have just been open for votes i think you should cut him a little slack. Just my opinion
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First four bars were nice, what everyone before me quoted yep...Best bars no doubt.This was a as
wesome read Black, really was...

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outworld fringe of apartment, sloth-like drawn to his forests
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Like this part^

Good read. Always been a fan of the grimey, elevated vocab styles.
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those lines I quoted might be the best I've ready from you, Dead.
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