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Old 07-10-2019, 06:24 PM   #1
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I don't care how many honestly...
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aka lost to snitching is gangsta aka in the stick clique..

this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot
if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit
try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye
if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky
im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown
treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground
ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it
she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package
u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her
that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors
i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead
every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds
ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip
cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit
SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin
after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation
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Dead. Again.


I respect ur heritage but...

Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over...
Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower,
I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears...
Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs!
Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco...
I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco,
Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin...
& we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children,
I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled...
The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World,
U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods...
I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas,
Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast...
Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask!
U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin...
Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season.
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this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot
if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit
mmm decent at best, the drug habit part was too random and there’s no tie in for it
try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye
if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky
nah lol
im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown
treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground
pretty cool
ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it
she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package
lol ok
u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her
that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors
pigment wp is too played, a miss here
i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead
every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds
not feelin it
ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip
cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit
nice I liked it
SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin
after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation
solid closer


3 good
1 ok
1 Decent
3 misses

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Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over...
Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower,
mmm decent
I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears...
Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs!
lol nice
Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco...
I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco,
pretty cool here
Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin...
& we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children,
didnt like this one
I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled...
The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World,
alright
U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods...
I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas,
this one was pretty wordy, decent at best
Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast...
Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask!
alright
U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin...
Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season.
nah lol


2 good
2 ok
2 decent
2 misses


This one was really tough to decide. Allen had 1 more strong hit than body but body had a more consistent verse with 1 less miss. Allen had some cool wordplay and some nice bars like the click bait one I really liked. Body had a lot of cool concepts but were sometimes wordy which took away from the impact, however, I feel Body was more creative and had less played lines than Allen. Allen had some bad ones like pigment and catapult was very forced. Again, close one but I have body edging it in the end.


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this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot
if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit

I know I did a purse bar in a previous round and got plenty of shit for it but this is ok

try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye
if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky

i can't rectify trying to make pull/pult sound passable as wordplay. Maybe "'ta gun" and "the gun" works more phonetically but it's still a reach

im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown
treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground

I like the concept but the execution is off. From the context of talking about a skilled gardner, nobody says they've got a "Green Thumbs me up" the interpretation of this wordplay only works on one side

ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it
she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package

ok

u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her
that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors

dope

i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead
every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds

I'll be honest, I'm not sure what "vit" or "vitil" is supposed to represent and the "vitil" in vitiligo isn't pronounced vital

ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip
cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit

this is dope

SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin
after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation

solid closer, i like the overall concept

body

Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over...
Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower

this is cool but the general concept isn't super fresh

I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears...
Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs!

I didn't understand wtf bananas in pyjamas was so I looked it up on youtube and after about 3 seconds of watching this intro clip, I hate you for writing this bar and making me read it. It's solid though

Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco...
I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco,

Again, don't really know the reference but I can understand what's going on without looking it up. That being said, it's still kind of a stale concept

Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin...
& we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children,

Nah im not a fan of just connecting various sitcoms with no solid relationship to each other

I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled...
The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World

lol I wouldn't classify a tricycle as a toy, and I double checked the intro to bobby's world to make sure that he doesn't actually have a toy in his hand. That being said I kinda like this because of the nostalgic factor, but it could've been executed better

U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods...
I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas,

I'm not a huge fan of associative song-title bars, but also the idea of saying I'll knock you out and you'll have street dreams is a bit of a stretch

Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast...
Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask!

I really like this concept, I could nitpick it a bit but this is solid.

U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin...
Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season.

kinda funny, ok closer


overall this is close, I got clickbait as botb and I think AK just overall had more punches that landed for me

mvgt AK
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The pigment wordplay and the click bait line gave AK my vote if you guys want to count it. I know I should probably leave more of an expo but honestly I just feel like AK won with those couple lines so MVGT AK
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aka lost to snitching is gangsta aka in the stick clique..

this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot
if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit

light

try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye
if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky

idk why people actually mad at one of the rare wordplays that actually worked this year. shit was cool/

im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown
treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground

green thumbs me up is worded horribly

ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it
she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package

lol eh...I guess. kinda funny kinda obvious.

u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her
that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors

never seen a pigment flip tbh. fire.

i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead
every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds

was way too much involved in understanding this bar.....not repping this.

ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip
cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit

wording isn't perfect but this is dope

SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin
after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation

I guess this is about an rb battle? or some battle here I aint peeped. I get the idea. wording was eh. punch an concept were ok.



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Dead. Again.


I respect ur heritage but...

Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over...
Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower,

boring

I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears...
Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs!

pyjamas? u british? fun idea I guess....hard to read this in a gangster tone when the banas in pajams song in playing in my head now tho lol.

Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco...
I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco,

DON DEMARCOOOOOOO

Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin...
& we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children,

eh...relevant flip on some old associative bars about 90s sitcoms. meh. mediocre.

I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled...
The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World,

I mean idk if id call a big wheel a big toy. concept is pretty fire tho lol

U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods...
I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas,

light to me

Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast...
Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask!

this is fly

U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin...
Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season.

eh cheesy
that coco bar was insane from body but I think ak had more punches landed here

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aka lost to snitching is gangsta aka in the stick clique..

this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot
if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit

Ok

try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye
if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky

slightly forced to me. Decent flip.

im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown
treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground

Cool concept so so execution...

ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it
she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package

light here

u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her
that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors

seen it. cool flip straight & simple

i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead
every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds

didn't like this one nor wording.

ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip
cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit

dope concept...lotv probly

SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin
after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation

didn't like the partial np but not a miss


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Dead. Again.

I respect ur heritage but...

Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over...
Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower,

nah here not a great concept

I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears...
Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs!

eh ok but kinda cheesy tbh

Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco...
I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco,

Cool..

Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin...
& we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children,

associative stuff better live. not feeling

I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled...
The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World,

This cool too not a Haymaker but decent

U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods...
I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas,

eh.. too basic

Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast...
Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask!

this is decent. the double simile helped it

U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin...
Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season.

nah fam

V AK, his misses were better w/ about equal good hits
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