11-09-2015, 07:59 PM | #1 |
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Neighbor vs. $chein Dolla $ign - OPEN FOR VOTES
BA Swag & Flow Tournament II Verses are due Friday 11/13/15 @ 11:59 PM PST 10-16 lines No swaying, biting, flipping, recycling, or tom foolery No extensions. You are allowed a 12 hour grace period once in the entire tournament. So if you use it in the first round, you will go the rest of the tourney without being allowed a grace period. Good luck. @Neighbor @Wavy Crockett @$chein Dolla $ign@Knucklehead
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11-09-2015, 08:55 PM | #2 |
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11-09-2015, 11:22 PM | #3 |
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11-13-2015, 10:54 PM | #4 |
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. . Your dad's a faggot & ya sister can't read; I let somethin clap from the drums, no Timbaland beat Leave they fuckin brains all over the mini-van seats, reloadin shot after shot; that's an Instagram feed These slugs? Kamikazes - you catch one from the tommy, it gets gorier... The snub or the shotty, fuck it.. all my guns got a body like Mech Warrior Feel like you runnin from zombies - this Bowie knife got the Dracula effect Start hackin at the neck & pick his Spinal w/ the machete; Killer Instinct's character select That Uzi spread split your lip in half like a Hitler 'stache.. I'm shootin lead at it Triple mags; got that blister pack breakin whatever's inside ya chest up, no Mucinex tablets You ain't ready to stop me; I'm a Pentium-copied legend pennin at mach speed Get ya fam stretched in the lobby, w/ "Dolla Sign" all over their jackets like Ted DiBiase A mix of Kano's karate w/ fists that hit like KO's from Rocky; You gon' fold in these hands & I ain't tryna demonstrate origami My bitch draw w/ a gun - Kat Von D, but it's Black Ops 3; in this game, I'm a Nazi Ricochet from the fifth I wave disintegrate most of ya body Sniffin 'caine on a yacht w/ dinner plates of kohlrabi & vintage-aged golden saké off the picture framed coasts of Bali Ya life's a joke.. I'll slice ya throat w/ fish scale on the blade like Kisame Hoshigaki
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11-15-2015, 12:01 AM | #5 |
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My fortress view provide gore. Come through & try, whore. Sentry haul make the ammo squeal, entry hall w/ that Lambo feel - Got Suicide doors I expire poor posers. Admire your kosher God, the haywire war soldier Spawn crowds to get ya lawn loud.. U'll see $ign posted outside, call the hellfire foreclosure When I floss son, 3 Harley's pull up & the boss gun be hearty Catch ya on the couch just chillin', the barrell cut off for spillin' - No Boston Tea Party Fuck Val Venis - Got Debbie on the floor, G. Playin' piano for me w/ sore knees When $ breakin' doors he's followed by Jason Vorhees score scene in an amazin' 4 keys Spec Ops mottos we roaring - $ign crew flex hawks & hollows be pouring No Kendo throat kicks, Extendos loaded.. Got ya catchin' Clips unexpected like Xbox auto recording U got that SPAM/gin burden, crib lends a damn grim purpose My suite got lamb skin curtains designed by my man Tim Burton w/ the tan trim flirtin' When my Candy whip glide, usually w/ Danny Mcbride cruisin' for fat fannys & thighs & a Pakistani bitch ride in the back seat while she pack heat on that Miami strip vibe Weapon case full to kill & slam optics, headshots leave mullets drilled & damn frosted In camo to cause harm, even my ammo got arms - AR holdin' Bullet Bills fam hostage Last edited by ~RustyGunZ~; 11-15-2015 at 12:05 AM. |
11-19-2015, 03:07 PM | #6 |
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That Uzi spread split your lip in half like a Hitler 'stache.. I'm shootin lead at it Triple mags; got that blister pack breakin whatever's inside ya chest up, no Mucinex tablets You ain't ready to stop me; I'm a Pentium-copied legend pennin at mach speed Get ya fam stretched in the lobby, w/ "Dolla Sign" all over their jackets like Ted DiBiase A mix of Kano's karate w/ fists that hit like KO's from Rocky; You gon' fold in these hands & I ain't tryna demonstrate origam ^^^that dibiase line was fire Knuck Spec Ops mottos we roaring - $ign crew flex hawks & hollows be pouring No Kendo throat kicks, Extendos loaded.. Got ya catchin' Clips unexpected like Xbox auto recording When my Candy whip glide, usually w/ Danny Mcbride cruisin' for fat fannys & thighs & a Pakistani bitch ride in the back seat while she pack heat on that Miami strip vibe ^^^those were dope V/wavy, alot of highlights here both had some swagged out dope shit. dolla xbox line was real nicee, but i thought wav's verse was a lil better & he had Lotb w/ that million dollar man jawn shit was sick. props to both.
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11-19-2015, 07:41 PM | #7 |
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Wavys shit was nice all the way thru. Had a couple hiccups but nothing major. Really good verse bro.
Knucks verse started out fire but fell off after the first couple bars. V. Wavy Neighvy |
11-20-2015, 08:50 PM | #8 |
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Wavy - Started off somewhat slow and just got better after the fifth line. Not that the last four bad as I did like the mech warrior line, I'm just sayin'. Killer Instinct was the shit, dope reference. I feel like this could have been worded better: ''breakin whatever's inside ya chest up''. Beside of that line I enjoyed the read for the most part. Some dope shit there and the closure was nice. Dope shit.
$chein - Cool opener, got dragged into it pretty fast and read through it well. I think I personally enjoyed this line the most: ''My suite got lamb skin curtains designed by my man Tim Burton w/ the tan trim flirtin'', it was a crazy/absurd visual you gave me and I enjoyed the rhymescheme. The last four lines were on point as well. Vote - It's hard to pick a winner because I felt both came with it and it's close. But I ended up with $chein Dolla $ign on this one. Wave's got a lot of dope shit but felt $chein edged it with the xbox, tim burton, candy whip and the rest towards the end over waves Killer Instinct, pentium and coasts of bali line, some shit also flew over my head and had no impact to me like the Ted DiBiase-line tho' but I ain't in the mood to google even though I usually do, sorry about that. Dope battle.
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12-04-2015, 11:07 PM | #9 |
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Hmm...this was BOTR.
Wavy - smooth verse....can read this verse up and down quickly. Good lines worded well, I can see why you won 1 of these before. liked the dolla sign, ted dibiase line, mucinex was cool but break whatevers up was vague...overall your have a good grasp of s&f Schein - dope metaphors....opener was real cool...although the setups seemed a bit dialed in for the line, Spec Ops mottos we roaring - $ign crew flex hawks & hollows be pouring No Kendo throat kicks, Extendos loaded.. Got ya catchin' Clips unexpected like Xbox auto recording ^ good line. good scheme and flowed well. very 1-2 couplet setup/punch like, but no problem there Id have to edge this to Wavy, but this could rock either way. nice battle yall |
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cool battle here. mvgt / neigh. just enjoyed his hits more. more quotables. |
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