Potatosacklegend vs Beans - BEANS WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Newbie Tourney VII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Friday,
  September 12th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, Sept 10t 2014
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Min. = 8 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• Limit MUST be agreed upon

General Rules:

• First to 5, Win by 2, 3-0=KO
• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will be disqualified.
• A check in ISmandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@PotatoSackLegend @Beans

[Kill Spree]

How many links @Sharp Nine

This my check

Feeling 12?

[PotatoSackLegend]

k

check

[Kill Spree]

Potatosacklegend




http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=92621
Some gay poem he wrote got no feed



I fuck moms into vegetable state, I'll son ya shit weak text
& if they talk'n of a hot potato? It's gossiping about their kids recess
I'm champ'n this tourney, this beat down won't be fun
Whip U wit the belt, so change your User Title ...to "this my only one:("
Dude you'll never shine, I hit a bitch wit hot rights
So it's no problem for potato to roger good-L's... <---& thats ya only spot light!
Nothing you release is positive, negative note? I punch heads
Cos we'll never see P-sacks dope unless it's failing a drug test
Ya posted poem was gay, even U sees that
We couldn't stomach that read, that's why U got no feed back
That shit was choppy as fuck! Ya can't cut hype with beans kid
So if U ever think you gotta edge in this? I'll use it to slice U to pieces

[PotatoSackLegend]

ya girls tired of u fuckin her, she needs me to charge her. my sex is liver, dunny
poundin her ass out with my drum stick is all i need to energizer bunny
everyday i wake up under the weather n need a pick me up to write glossy schemes
im too sick to be around you n im highly doubtful u want to end up coughy beans
this sloppy feen will need rehab after i flip bars N set bombs
i wanted to show him what bein dopamine its too bad he'll inject that into his arm from heron
u got ko'ed by allen knight after claimin u spark infrareds like u hectic son
we never seen sunbeams but judging by ur pic u'd break the scale if u stepped on 1
faggot evry bitch u picked up ended up likcin my ass sauce
im not playin no fuckin games even tho i always have bean bags toss
Tellem "I lost my limbs but if i show u my dick ull want it in ur mouth in a sec"
once i send them a pic of daddy long leg they start to bug out on the web

[Camp Bell]

beans:

I fuck moms into vegetable state, I'll son ya shit weak text
& if they talk'n of a hot potato? It's gossiping about their kids recess
thought this couldve been worded better, dope concept tho

I'm champ'n this tourney, this beat down won't be fun
Whip U wit the belt, so change your User Title ...to "this my only one:("
nah

Dude you'll never shine, I hit a bitch wit hot rights
So it's no problem for potato to roger good-L's... <---& thats ya only spot light! thought this was coo w/o the spotlight ending

Nothing you release is positive, negative note? I punch heads
Cos we'll never see P-sacks dope unless it's failing a drug test
lol coo coo

Ya posted poem was gay, even U sees that
We couldn't stomach that read, that's why U got no feed back
smh dope

That shit was choppy as fuck! Ya can't cut hype with beans kid
So if U ever think you gotta edge in this? I'll use it to slice U to pieces[/QUOTE]
nah, weak



potato:


ya girls tired of u fuckin her, she needs me to charge her. my sex is liver, dunny
poundin her ass out with my drum stick is all i need to energizer bunny
tbh, the energizer bunny lines are played, i liked the flow of this tho

everyday i wake up under the weather n need a pick me up to write glossy schemes
im too sick to be around you n im highly doubtful u want to end up coughy beans
mad potential but "coughy" is a stretch "ima charge you a cough fee bean"

this sloppy feen will need rehab after i flip bars N set bombs
i wanted to show him what bein dopamine its too bad he'll inject that into his arm from heron
i hate that you misspelled heroin

u got ko'ed by allen knight after claimin u spark infrareds like u hectic son
we never seen sunbeams but judging by ur pic u'd break the scale if u stepped on 1
nah

faggot evry bitch u picked up ended up likcin my ass sauce
im not playin no fuckin games even tho i always have bean bags toss
the wording too sloppy

Tellem "I lost my limbs but if i show u my dick ull want it in ur mouth in a sec"
once i send them a pic of daddy long leg they start to bug out on the web
lmaooo wtf


this was a very entertaining battle. both were inconsistent at times.
with one being more than the other. i have potato edging this out.
due to more inconsistencies on potato part.


vote: beans

[Plot]

beans

I fuck moms into vegetable state, I'll son ya shit weak text
& if they talk'n of a hot potato? It's gossiping about their kids recess
You saying kids play hot potato at little lunch? weird, dont get it.

I'm champ'n this tourney, this beat down won't be fun
Whip U wit the belt, so change your User Title ...to "this my only one:("
Kinda ok

Dude you'll never shine, I hit a bitch wit hot rights
So it's no problem for potato to roger good-L's... <---& thats ya only spot light!
Dont get it

Nothing you release is positive, negative note? I punch heads
Cos we'll never see P-sacks dope unless it's failing a drug test
wack

Ya posted poem was gay, even U sees that
We couldn't stomach that read, that's why U got no feed back
nah

That shit was choppy as fuck! Ya can't cut hype with beans kid
So if U ever think you gotta edge in this? I'll use it to slice U to pieces[/QUOTE]
weak



potato

ya girls tired of u fuckin her, she needs me to charge her. my sex is liver, dunny
poundin her ass out with my drum stick is all i need to energizer bunny
you calling her puss a bunny? weird

everyday i wake up under the weather n need a pick me up to write glossy schemes
im too sick to be around you n im highly doubtful u want to end up coughy beans
weak

this sloppy feen will need rehab after i flip bars N set bombs
i wanted to show him what bein dopamine its too bad he'll inject that into his arm from heron.
seen doper mean/dopamine before, bad flip

u got ko'ed by allen knight after claimin u spark infrareds like u hectic son
we never seen sunbeams but judging by ur pic u'd break the scale if u stepped on 1
I seen sunbeams, wack

faggot evry bitch u picked up ended up likcin my ass sauce
im not playin no fuckin games even tho i always have bean bags toss
homo

Tellem "I lost my limbs but if i show u my dick ull want it in ur mouth in a sec"
once i send them a pic of daddy long leg they start to bug out on the web.
wack

V-Beans, marginally less weird

[Window Taco]

Tough battle to pick a winner cuz HONESTLY I felt u both had strong verses. And I capitalized honestly cuz real talk some dudes on this site vote against people cuz either 1 they feel threatened by them and wanna get rid of them or 2 they just don't know how to vote. That's my opinion and fuck whoever mad about it.


beans

I fuck moms into vegetable state, I'll son ya shit weak text
& if they talk'n of a hot potato? It's gossiping about their kids recess
Enjoyable line it's decent but just needed a newer metaphor for hot potato since that's not known as a big recess game right now or if it is should uh just linked it to an article explaining it's popular and that would have made this line more effective.

I'm champ'n this tourney, this beat down won't be fun
Whip U wit the belt, so change your User Title ...to "this my only one:("
Solid line. Felt u didn't need the ellipsis but other than that solid line.


Dude you'll never shine, I hit a bitch wit hot rights
So it's no problem for potato to roger good-L's... <---& thats ya only spot light!
Best line so far, solid, just lacking in creativity

Nothing you release is positive, negative note? I punch heads
Cos we'll never see P-sacks dope unless it's failing a drug test
Nice line, pretty creative too, and it tied nameplay into the meta, good shit.

Ya posted poem was gay, even U sees that
We couldn't stomach that read, that's why U got no feed back
Line way to simple for me and I didn't think it was harsh enough to excuse its simplicity.

That shit was choppy as fuck! Ya can't cut hype with beans kid
So if U ever think you gotta edge in this? I'll use it to slice U to pieces
very nice closer. Ok metaphor, and solid punch with a good flow.




potato

ya girls tired of u fuckin her, she needs me to charge her. my sex is liver, dunny
poundin her ass out with my drum stick is all i need to energizer bunny
I get it and it's an effective line but I don't like it lol yet it's still effective and works well, especially in the imagery department.

everyday i wake up under the weather n need a pick me up to write glossy schemes
im too sick to be around you n im highly doubtful u want to end up coughy beans
Ok line just felt the coffee metaphor could have been better connected.

this sloppy feen will need rehab after i flip bars N set bombs
i wanted to show him what bein dopamine its too bad he'll inject that into his arm from heron.
Didnt like this bar nor feel it was strong because the heron line could have punched him more directly besides just insulting his intelligence

u got ko'ed by allen knight after claimin u spark infrareds like u hectic son
we never seen sunbeams but judging by ur pic u'd break the scale if u stepped on 1
Didnt like this bar at all and felt it wasn't strong due to the fact that the sunbeams part could have had a more creative insult instead of the obvious scale thing.

faggot evry bitch u picked up ended up likcin my ass sauce
im not playin no fuckin games even tho i always have bean bags toss
Didnt like the way u structured the punch and bean bags is waaaaay to obvious.

Tellem "I lost my limbs but if i show u my dick ull want it in ur mouth in a sec"
once i send them a pic of daddy long leg they start to bug out on the web
Not an effective closer, it was different for sure, but the punch was not hard hitting.


V/ Beans

Beans won more bars and did it in majority of the cats.

[jilti]

Ya posted poem was gay, even U sees that
We couldn't stomach that read, that's why U got no feed back
That shit was choppy as fuck! Ya can't cut hype with beans kid
So if U ever think you gotta edge in this? I'll use it to slice U to pieces

Vs

ya girls tired of u fuckin her, she needs me to charge her. my sex is liver, dunny
poundin her ass out with my drum stick is all i need to energizer bunny
this sloppy feen will need rehab after i flip bars N set bombs
i wanted to show him what bein dopamine its too bad he'll inject that into his arm from heron


conclusion: even on quotes at 2 a piece, so i'm gonna judge by the rest of each verses. thought PSL was more consistent, better attempts. Good battle here by both

Vote-Potato Sack in a close one

[Clayray]

Nothing you release is positive, negative note? I punch heads
Cos we'll never see P-sacks dope unless it's failing a drug test

vs


Tellem "I lost my limbs but if i show u my dick ull want it in ur mouth in a sec"
once i send them a pic of daddy long leg they start to bug out on the web



Beans: "That shit was choppy as fuck! Ya can't cut hype with beans kid
So if U ever think you gotta edge in this? I'll use it to slice U to pieces" is overused concept beans.

PTS: "everyday i wake up under the weather n need a pick me up to write glossy schemes
im too sick to be around you n im highly doubtful u want to end up coughy beans"

thought this was a cool concept. could have been worded better though imo to make it hit harder.

overall, both were okay. but if i had to chose one that had less lines that didn't miss it would be Beans

[Red Soldier]

I fuck moms into vegetable state, I'll son ya shit weak text
& if they talk'n of a hot potato? It's gossiping about their kids recess
EH WORDING, OK NP
I'm champ'n this tourney, this beat down won't be fun
Whip U wit the belt, so change your User Title ...to "this my only one:("
NO
Dude you'll never shine, I hit a bitch wit hot rights
So it's no problem for potato to roger good-L's... <---& thats ya only spot light!
NOT FEELING THIS
Nothing you release is positive, negative note? I punch heads
Cos we'll never see P-sacks dope unless it's failing a drug test
COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER
Ya posted poem was gay, even U sees that
We couldn't stomach that read, that's why U got no feed back
NO REAL DISS JUST A STATEMENT
That shit was choppy as fuck! Ya can't cut hype with beans kid
So if U ever think you gotta edge in this? I'll use it to slice U to pieces
EH

VS

ya girls tired of u fuckin her, she needs me to charge her. my sex is liver, dunny
poundin her ass out with my drum stick is all i need to energizer bunny
OK
everyday i wake up under the weather n need a pick me up to write glossy schemes
im too sick to be around you n im highly doubtful u want to end up coughy beans
HAD POTENTIAL, FELL FLAT
this sloppy feen will need rehab after i flip bars N set bombs
i wanted to show him what bein dopamine its too bad he'll inject that into his arm from heron
TOO WORDY
u got ko'ed by allen knight after claimin u spark infrareds like u hectic son
we never seen sunbeams but judging by ur pic u'd break the scale if u stepped on 1
COOL
faggot evry bitch u picked up ended up likcin my ass sauce
im not playin no fuckin games even tho i always have bean bags toss
WTF ?
Tellem "I lost my limbs but if i show u my dick ull want it in ur mouth in a sec"
once i send them a pic of daddy long leg they start to bug out on the web
NAH

PSL had 2 bars I likes that I think was enough for him to win.

Vote: PSL

[Unfukwitable]

I'm champ'n this tourney, this beat down won't be fun
Whip U wit the belt, so change your User Title ...to "this my only one:("

vs

Tellem "I lost my limbs but if i show u my dick ull want it in ur mouth in a sec"
once i send them a pic of daddy long leg they start to bug out on the web

Ehh the wording in this was bad to me, No creativity, No hard hitting lines... I had to settle for a winner after the read.

vote/ Beans

[theMuzzl3]

Originally Posted by Beans

Potatosacklegend




http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=92621
Some gay poem he wrote got no feed



I fuck moms into vegetable state, I'll son ya shit weak text
& if they talk'n of a hot potato? It's gossiping about their kids recess
I'm champ'n this tourney, this beat down won't be fun
Whip U wit the belt, so change your User Title ...to "this my only one:("
Dude you'll never shine, I hit a bitch wit hot rights
So it's no problem for potato to roger good-L's... <---& thats ya only spot light!
Nothing you release is positive, negative note? I punch heads
Cos we'll never see P-sacks dope unless it's failing a drug test
Ya posted poem was gay, even U sees that
We couldn't stomach that read, that's why U got no feed back
That shit was choppy as fuck! Ya can't cut hype with beans kid
So if U ever think you gotta edge in this? I'll use it to slice U to pieces

Opening line not too great, kind of couldn't understand the lack of English.
3&4rd lines good.
5th & 6th line, not really structured well… you had to put a <--- just to get your point across. Woulda been good if the 6th line matched the 5th, in length.
7th & 8th lines, really good.
9th & 10th, I don't like how you went after his poem & posted a link, but its a battle.
closing lines, very good.

Originally Posted by PotatoSackLegend

ya girls tired of u fuckin her, she needs me to charge her. my sex is liver, dunny
poundin her ass out with my drum stick is all i need to energizer bunny
everyday i wake up under the weather n need a pick me up to write glossy schemes
im too sick to be around you n im highly doubtful u want to end up coughy beans
this sloppy feen will need rehab after i flip bars N set bombs
i wanted to show him what bein dopamine its too bad he'll inject that into his arm from heron
u got ko'ed by allen knight after claimin u spark infrareds like u hectic son
we never seen sunbeams but judging by ur pic u'd break the scale if u stepped on 1
faggot evry bitch u picked up ended up likcin my ass sauce
im not playin no fuckin games even tho i always have bean bags toss
Tellem "I lost my limbs but if i show u my dick ull want it in ur mouth in a sec"
once i send them a pic of daddy long leg they start to bug out on the web

1st 2 lines would been better if you changed "energizer bunny" to "energize her bunny", or something like that.
3rd, & 4th, not sure if you spelled "coughy" like that on purpose, but good lines.
5th & 6th line -- 6th line was too long & misspelled words on both lines.
7th - 10th lines -- very good
11,12th lines as a closer wasn't good enough.

/v Beans