07-27-2013, 10:39 PM | #1 |
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Animosi T vs. Storyteller - OPEN FOR VOTES
The Ultimate Writer II The Premier Tutoring Tournament @Animosi T @Storyteller Rules Due Dates:
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07-28-2013, 01:03 AM | #2 |
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07-28-2013, 02:06 PM | #3 |
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Want to do 12 lines?
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07-31-2013, 09:24 PM | #4 |
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Ill post tomorrow, my bad.
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07-31-2013, 09:33 PM | #5 |
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Lame you ass....
Anyways ill post tomorrow
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08-01-2013, 11:02 AM | #6 |
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Storyteller aka Mr. Write, Serious, Renegade, Poe'Tree
This fag’s a true fake, so Ani’ll strike this jerk till this prick fall! Ya’ll can see that Stor’ Fronts without even goin’ to a strip mall! I bash this geek, till he trashed and weak, all over the place like twister night! Cuz u wouldn’t see Serious engaging if he was Mr. right/Mr. Write This square needs my guidance, after all – what’s a story w/o ANI, mation! You aint growin in text, stayin small like the dicks of many Asians! ST can match me, I cook up the meanest batch free, I KO u before we start the match T Your quips don't hit, they couldn't scratch me, but my shots leave you bodied after you catch three T’ll rip you bar for bar, so u thinkin of the alphabet if you say S in front of T! I murk this cat, so if you hear Ren’owns, its praising me for doing work on Poe’Tree! Last edited by Animosi T; 08-02-2013 at 07:58 PM. |
08-01-2013, 06:34 PM | #7 |
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Fuck it quick key....
Animosi T aka Eternity I'm gladly ringin' my own neck to catch me and my bitches new moves, If we catch him ringin' his neck- ANI one can tell how cause his knees are always bruised. Rice cake hoe! You a lard with such a bitch inheritance Ani-Muslim knows that skin isn't exposed like ur bars so it always pales in comparison. I mean ur a joke never progressing with what you are doin'... An-I know what eternity means... Just sayin' that's the duration it'll take before we see any improvement. U the Michael Jackson of this text shit cus u and him have the same shine, I mean when it comes to a race you both end up cumin' behind. I'm surprised u tried my pic cuz that's da closest u'll get to international extensions dude, I mean NC annihilate putting u to shame... ... but A and T together just links us to other mentions better than you!!!!
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08-01-2013, 07:55 PM | #8 |
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@Knucklehead it's open for votes
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08-03-2013, 10:39 AM | #9 |
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An- ur structure was different n u only had 1 punch that landed meh n u over wording everything makes it look even more like a statment come more direct
Story- getting better but nothing that was a wow in the verse had a line n 2 that made me lol but overall u had tbe better verse V/ Story |
08-03-2013, 11:52 PM | #10 |
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This fag’s a true fake, so Ani’ll strike this jerk till this prick fall!
Ya’ll can see that Stor’ Fronts without even goin’ to a strip mall! I actually liked this concept i think ur wording was off, but not by a shitload tbh I bash this geek, till he trashed and weak, all over the place like twister night! Cuz u wouldn’t see Serious engaging if he was Mr. right/Mr. Write ahhh another nice concept plagued by bad wording man, ur concepts is nice ur wording is horrid here which makes it hit alot weaker then it should of This square needs my guidance, after all – what’s a story w/o ANI, mation! You aint growin in text, stayin small like the dicks of many Asians! this was bad the whole way around, the punch was a bit gay and the set up was fucking , just no go back to how u done ur first 2 bars ST can match me, I cook up the meanest batch free, I KO u before we start the match T Your quips don't hit, they couldn't scratch me, but my shots leave you bodied after you catch three this was horrid wording man, match twice int he same line, just ur wording is killing u T’ll rip you bar for bar, so u thinkin of the alphabet if you say S in front of T! I murk this cat, so if you hear Ren’owns, its praising me for doing work on Poe’Tree! again your wording is horrible i have issues understanding this cuz of your wording vs I'm gladly ringin' my own neck to catch me and my bitches new moves, If we catch him ringin' his neck- ANI one can tell how cause his knees are always bruised. the exeuction is bad and the wordplay is forced bro Rice cake hoe! You a lard with such a bitch inheritance Ani-Muslim knows that skin isn't exposed like ur bars so it always pales in comparison. again your wording here is an issue and it seems a bit forced I mean ur a joke never progressing with what you are doin'... An-I know what eternity means... Just sayin' that's the duration it'll take before we see any improvement. the punch was ok except for the an-i shit because thats just bad man, its not wordplay at all U the Michael Jackson of this text shit cus u and him have the same shine, I mean when it comes to a race you both end up cumin' behind. huh? if this is a cum bar then its horrible if not its really simple and ur wording is killing u I'm surprised u tried my pic cuz that's da closest u'll get to international extensions dude, I mean NC annihilate putting u to shame... ... but A and T together just links us to other mentions better than you!!!! wording was horrible yeah just wording is a major issue, ur cocnepts are low and you need to work on ur cncepts but before that u need to put some shine on ur wording so ur bars can be nderstood more my dude yeah i think story needs to really work on concepts and woridng, i think animosi=t actually has a chance to become good in this esp with the help of his coaches, i mean he has nice concepts for the most part if he gets some tweakin on them and tweks his wording he could actually be nice v/anim |
08-04-2013, 04:16 PM | #11 |
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An..
This fag’s a true fake, so Ani’ll strike this jerk till this prick fall! Ya’ll can see that Stor’ Fronts without even goin’ to a strip mall! simple but effective, could have done more with it tbh Vs Story Nothing....wording was horrible all the way around....its like your trying to complicate your simple concepts. V-Ani |
08-04-2013, 08:02 PM | #12 |
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Bump
2-1 me.
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