Is this dope?

Lars · 11-14-2013, 04:32 AM

I said he’s sick, I said I rate him, that this prick was entertaining
I put you up just to take you down, like Christmas decorations
I’m the Grinch who went and sleighed (slayed) him without bustin' down slopes
Cue pictures (Cupid) of your vixen (Vixen) getting blitzen (Blitzed in) her donner (Donner) kebab and I dasher (dash her) before I comets (Cum its)why she loves my south pole
You can try to prace or dance around (Prancer/Dancer) the issue, but i've reigned here (Reindeer) what I’m im putting downs colder
To me your just a bitch with a huge nose, I hope your listening Rudolf, cause to me you’re not that different from the other brown nosers

#LARSGOTBARS

Ryan 12 · 11-14-2013, 04:41 AM

Looks like a watered down Beyond longbar verse from 05', with extremely simple wp

Answer · 11-14-2013, 04:41 AM

no

Rawn MD · 11-14-2013, 04:48 AM

I see what u were going for
Seemed a bit unnatural tho
Sleighed was the best wp tho

Lars · 11-14-2013, 05:36 AM

unnatural how?

every bar makes perfect sense when spoken aloud

i swear some of you textcees never rapped an actual verse that wasnt eminems a day in your life

anime_boners · 11-14-2013, 08:08 AM

your troll game is quite elegant, sir.

Dope girl · 11-14-2013, 09:12 AM

don't mind haters, I don't think so, rawestlines.

Inno · 11-14-2013, 11:17 AM

That nigga said prace or dance around the issue.

Fucking outstanding wp

Diode · 11-14-2013, 11:22 AM

explaining the wordplay after each instance was a nice touch

very parkinsons jk of you

Lars · 11-14-2013, 12:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

That nigga said prace or dance around the issue.

Fucking outstanding wp

i did all the reindeers you fuckwit

i swear some of you dumbasses don't even understand the complexity behind what i'm doing

that's why i gots to explain 'em @Diode

these lames stay sleeping SMH

Strikta · 11-14-2013, 01:16 PM

That shit sucked.

Stop it.

Just C · 11-14-2013, 01:36 PM

'Cue pictures (Cupid)'

Lol.

Stop it. (Stupid)

Seyance · 11-14-2013, 01:40 PM

killed it, repped.

Dope girl · 11-14-2013, 01:47 PM

in my Opinion I can show u how to how kill the rap game fun & easy.

Diode · 11-14-2013, 02:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mizz Millionaire

in my Opinion I can show u how to how kill the rap game fun & easy.

SIG WORTHY

namix · 11-14-2013, 06:47 PM

didnt expect everyone to be so rudolph the bat

Rawn MD · 11-14-2013, 06:48 PM

namix sleighed barons reindeer

Fart · 11-14-2013, 06:52 PM

it's too busy with the ( ) shit.
This reminds me of RB in like 05-06-07

King Ra. · 11-14-2013, 06:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by namix

didnt expect everyone to be so rudolph the bat

That was clean. Too clean.

Suthaveli · 11-14-2013, 08:30 PM

thought it was rude off (Rudolph) the bat with it.

yeeeea, I'm with you lars... I'm with you

11-14-2013, 04:32 AM	#1
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809295	Is this dope? I said he’s sick, I said I rate him, that this prick was entertaining I put you up just to take you down, like Christmas decorations I’m the Grinch who went and sleighed (slayed) him without bustin' down slopes Cue pictures (Cupid) of your vixen (Vixen) getting blitzen (Blitzed in) her donner (Donner) kebab and I dasher (dash her) before I comets (Cum its)why she loves my south pole You can try to prace or dance around (Prancer/Dancer) the issue, but i've reigned here (Reindeer) what I’m im putting downs colder To me your just a bitch with a huge nose, I hope your listening Rudolf, cause to me you’re not that different from the other brown nosers #LARSGOTBARS __________________ PROVEN BITER

11-14-2013, 04:48 AM	#4
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	I see what u were going for Seemed a bit unnatural tho Sleighed was the best wp tho __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

11-14-2013, 05:36 AM	#5
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809295	unnatural how? every bar makes perfect sense when spoken aloud i swear some of you textcees never rapped an actual verse that wasnt eminems a day in your life __________________ PROVEN BITER Last edited by Lars; 11-14-2013 at 09:11 AM.

11-14-2013, 08:08 AM	#6
anime_boners Bisky-chama <3 Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,085 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 85899386	your troll game is quite elegant, sir. __________________ anime boners - pronounced with a long I and a silent e. jsyk

11-14-2013, 11:22 AM	#9
Diode PR's Finest Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 14,156 Battle Record: 12-7 Rep Power: 85899406	explaining the wordplay after each instance was a nice touch very parkinsons jk of you __________________

11-14-2013, 04:41 AM	#2
Ryan 12 Worst of the worst Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 1,014 Battle Record: 6-1 Rep Power: 7022	Looks like a watered down Beyond longbar verse from 05', with extremely simple wp

11-14-2013, 04:41 AM	#3
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,675 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 12534702	no

11-14-2013, 09:12 AM	#7
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,705 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	don't mind haters, I don't think so, rawestlines.

11-14-2013, 11:17 AM	#8
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	That nigga said prace or dance around the issue. Fucking outstanding wp

11-14-2013, 01:16 PM	#11
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181449	That shit sucked. Stop it.

11-14-2013, 01:36 PM	#12
Just C Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 0	'Cue pictures (Cupid)' Lol. Stop it. (Stupid)

11-14-2013, 01:40 PM	#13
Seyance - Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,060 Battle Record: 0-4 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night VII Rep Power: 0	killed it, repped. __________________ i'm truely renaissance.. dominate the web, television, movies and beyond when a leader gets to speaking, it's your duty to respond.. i'm a leave these niggas leaking like i'm julian assange.

11-14-2013, 01:47 PM	#14
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,705 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	yea in my Opinion I can show u how to how kill the rap game fun & easy.

11-14-2013, 06:47 PM	#16
namix been that, done there. Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 2,260 Battle Record: 2-1 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 85246652	didnt expect everyone to be so rudolph the bat __________________ well fed.

11-14-2013, 06:48 PM	#17
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	namix sleighed barons reindeer __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

11-14-2013, 06:52 PM	#18
Fart You Next Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Seattle Posts: 6,348 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7920843	it's too busy with the ( ) shit. This reminds me of RB in like 05-06-07 __________________ smokin spliffs til i dont exist

11-14-2013, 08:30 PM	#20
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534019	thought it was rude off (Rudolph) the bat with it. yeeeea, I'm with you lars... I'm with you