Week 7 chat and predictions - Page 30

Split · 11-10-2013, 11:04 PM

YDK'S fone an innernette fuckin up but he has time to bump his OM 4x in two hours teehee

Diode · 11-10-2013, 11:13 PM

i will vote, but they won't be the usual quality. need to get to bed, flying to nj early tomorrow for the wake and then funeral.

Eŋg · 11-10-2013, 11:15 PM

what just happened.

King Ra. · 11-10-2013, 11:18 PM

@Certain

I voted on ThisIsDAM vs symetrik, Innovator vs YDK. If I need to paste the link here let me know. I may vote on some more if I feel good.

dead man · 11-10-2013, 11:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZYG

Lol that is funny ha ha, but I am only a fellow RELEVANT_SPECIES.txt just like you are.

King Ra. · 11-10-2013, 11:23 PM

AHHHH, it all makes sense now. :)

Diode · 11-10-2013, 11:34 PM

@Certain

my battle is locked so..

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=30093
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=30096
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=30101

Certain · 11-10-2013, 11:53 PM

Thanks, all. That leaves us with this breakdown at the three-hour mark:

I need one more vote: @Mr. J, @Vividlyvague.

I need two more votes: @NYCSPITZ, @Just Write, @Clockwise, Innovator.

I need three more votes: @YDK, @Frank, @Zenland.

Innovator, I see you voting. I'm going to put laundry in and vote on what's left.

Certain · 11-11-2013, 12:10 AM

@ThisisDAM, don't worry, I saw your votes.

patrown · 11-11-2013, 12:11 AM

@Diode - feels like a car crash. gone in a flash/ ride for others/ gauges are filled/ and i guess parking lot would be indicative of driving but.. i still felt it from your word choices.

favorite line..
cause and effecting your affection, you're leaving me ill
least favorite line..
depression and dejection, you know i'm serving it

altogether you hit the topic very well. instead of giving some kind of literal story, you instead captured the essence of the photo and drew some emotion out of it's perception. well executed, although a tad abrupt.

@breathless - fuuuck. almost halfway through i wanted to start typing out something along the lines of, " it's missing something," but once i got to the end.. i realized you were setting me up for that final moment of "oh fuck," which i did experience. i can take this piece apart and dissect it stanza by stanza.. but really, in the end, i feel like you wrote a compelling tale and led your audience along with a bitter ass(es) carrott. great job. well done.

ThisisDAM · 11-11-2013, 12:13 AM

Thanks. Nice job too Symmetrik

Certain · 11-11-2013, 12:16 AM

For the record, I have no idea what would happen if Frank doesn't vote.

@Mike Wrecka

Diode · 11-11-2013, 12:52 AM

thanks for the feedback, patrown.

e11even · 11-11-2013, 01:39 AM

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=2...d=1#post205333

YOU'RE NEXT!!!!! Diode...

Frank · 11-11-2013, 01:43 AM

Voting from my phone, pardon the brevity.

e11even · 11-11-2013, 02:05 AM

@Diode

This was a somber, concetrated piece a lot more serious and emotion driven than last week. The narrative intertwined with that consistent flow really made the piece standout in my mind afterwards. Even though the clearest connection to the topic came at the end, it felt like a culmination-to rather than a thrown in notion to tie it in. I would have had a tough time with that one, but LGBT rights may have played a role if that pic was my topic. MVGT diode (lol).

I loved the drop, Diode. I hope you go against a physical opponent next week. That was a waste of a lotta dope.

Certain · 11-11-2013, 03:16 AM

Battles are closed. Thanks to everyone who voted. Pray for my laptop, or you may not get Certain's Corner this week.

Zen · 11-11-2013, 07:18 AM

Sorry bout the lack of voting. I'll vote in future weeks to make up for my douchebaggery.

breathless · 11-11-2013, 07:35 AM

@patrown thanks for the feed broskie

11-10-2013, 11:04 PM	#581
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899395	YDK'S fone an innernette fuckin up but he has time to bump his OM 4x in two hours teehee __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

11-10-2013, 11:13 PM	#582
Diode PR's Finest Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 14,156 Battle Record: 12-7 Rep Power: 85899406	i will vote, but they won't be the usual quality. need to get to bed, flying to nj early tomorrow for the wake and then funeral. __________________

11-10-2013, 11:34 PM	#587
Diode PR's Finest Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 14,156 Battle Record: 12-7 Rep Power: 85899406	@Certain my battle is locked so.. http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=30093 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=30096 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=30101 __________________

11-10-2013, 11:53 PM	#588
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Thanks, all. That leaves us with this breakdown at the three-hour mark: I need one more vote: @Mr. J, @Vividlyvague. I need two more votes: @NYCSPITZ, @Just Write, @Clockwise, Innovator. I need three more votes: @YDK, @Frank, @Zenland. Innovator, I see you voting. I'm going to put laundry in and vote on what's left. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-11-2013, 12:10 AM	#589
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	@ThisisDAM, don't worry, I saw your votes. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-10-2013, 11:15 PM	#583
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,146 Rep Power: 0	what just happened.

11-10-2013, 11:18 PM	#584
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	@Certain I voted on ThisIsDAM vs symetrik, Innovator vs YDK. If I need to paste the link here let me know. I may vote on some more if I feel good.

11-10-2013, 11:23 PM	#586
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	AHHHH, it all makes sense now. :)

11-11-2013, 12:11 AM	#590
patrown ‹^›ô¿ô‹^› Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 596 Battle Record: 13-19 Rep Power: 0	no show love. @Diode - feels like a car crash. gone in a flash/ ride for others/ gauges are filled/ and i guess parking lot would be indicative of driving but.. i still felt it from your word choices. favorite line.. cause and effecting your affection, you're leaving me ill least favorite line.. depression and dejection, you know i'm serving it altogether you hit the topic very well. instead of giving some kind of literal story, you instead captured the essence of the photo and drew some emotion out of it's perception. well executed, although a tad abrupt. @breathless - fuuuck. almost halfway through i wanted to start typing out something along the lines of, " it's missing something," but once i got to the end.. i realized you were setting me up for that final moment of "oh fuck," which i did experience. i can take this piece apart and dissect it stanza by stanza.. but really, in the end, i feel like you wrote a compelling tale and led your audience along with a bitter ass(es) carrott. great job. well done.

11-11-2013, 12:13 AM	#591
ThisisDAM Significance over Purpose Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: nYc Posts: 141 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 35	Thanks. Nice job too Symmetrik __________________ Twitter - @ThisisDAM

11-11-2013, 12:16 AM	#592
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	For the record, I have no idea what would happen if Frank doesn't vote. @Mike Wrecka __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws. Last edited by Certain; 11-11-2013 at 12:45 AM.

11-11-2013, 12:52 AM	#593
Diode PR's Finest Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 14,156 Battle Record: 12-7 Rep Power: 85899406	thanks for the feedback, patrown. __________________

11-11-2013, 01:39 AM	#594
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=2...d=1#post205333 YOU'RE NEXT!!!!! Diode... __________________ Ahem.

11-11-2013, 01:43 AM	#595
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Voting from my phone, pardon the brevity. __________________ *VETWORK*

11-11-2013, 02:05 AM	#596
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	@Diode This was a somber, concetrated piece a lot more serious and emotion driven than last week. The narrative intertwined with that consistent flow really made the piece standout in my mind afterwards. Even though the clearest connection to the topic came at the end, it felt like a culmination-to rather than a thrown in notion to tie it in. I would have had a tough time with that one, but LGBT rights may have played a role if that pic was my topic. MVGT diode (lol). I loved the drop, Diode. I hope you go against a physical opponent next week. That was a waste of a lotta dope. __________________ Ahem.

11-11-2013, 03:16 AM	#597
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Battles are closed. Thanks to everyone who voted. Pray for my laptop, or you may not get Certain's Corner this week. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-11-2013, 07:18 AM	#598
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	Sorry bout the lack of voting. I'll vote in future weeks to make up for my douchebaggery.

11-11-2013, 07:35 AM	#599
breathless Master of Beastiality Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Lansing, Mi Posts: 368 Battle Record: 4-6 Rep Power: 0	@patrown thanks for the feed broskie __________________ I used to be amazing... http://soundcloud.com/dancourser/sets