Week 2: WZA (0-1) vs. YDK (0-1) \\ YDK wins via no-show

Certain · 03-03-2014, 03:56 AM

Season 3

The Basics | Read the full rules here.

Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread.

Topic

"I'm not half the man I used to be." — Paul McCartney

Good luck, @WZA and @YDK.

YDK · 03-03-2014, 05:23 PM

Czech

YDK · 03-07-2014, 08:39 PM

I'm not half the man I use to be, usually;
I've been used up and stupidly; accepted what ruined me.
Tears fall fluidly when I think about the lunacy
that caused me to fragment mentally from scrutiny!
The death of my mother didn't kill me fruitlessly,
Because the community raised me the rest of the way beautifully.
I've dealt with that pain as much as humanly possible,
Hurdled the obstacles in my path atleast the ones that were plausable.
Like moving on was optional I declared my resolve
as i let pills "heal" me till even they were appalled!
Pain killers had me enthralled so i called to anyone that would scald me
To slip from the grip of addiction before death could befall me...

Years later I've never wavered, I've done what i needed
Turned from the wayward son to a father that succeeded.
A published author, loving husband, and a genuine person,
A man that can handle anything no matter the burden.
My life since my mother's death; I grew from that seed,
Like a rose in the pavement I'm blooming dutifully.
So I'm not half the man that i use to be,
I'm twice that...usually.

03-03-2014, 03:56 AM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Week 2: WZA (0-1) vs. YDK (0-1) \\ YDK wins via no-show Season 3 The Basics \| Read the full rules here. Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topic "I'm not half the man I used to be." — Paul McCartney Good luck, @WZA and @YDK. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

03-03-2014, 05:23 PM	#2
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Czech __________________

03-07-2014, 08:39 PM	#3
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	I'm not half the man I use to be, usually; I've been used up and stupidly; accepted what ruined me. Tears fall fluidly when I think about the lunacy that caused me to fragment mentally from scrutiny! The death of my mother didn't kill me fruitlessly, Because the community raised me the rest of the way beautifully. I've dealt with that pain as much as humanly possible, Hurdled the obstacles in my path atleast the ones that were plausable. Like moving on was optional I declared my resolve as i let pills "heal" me till even they were appalled! Pain killers had me enthralled so i called to anyone that would scald me To slip from the grip of addiction before death could befall me... Years later I've never wavered, I've done what i needed Turned from the wayward son to a father that succeeded. A published author, loving husband, and a genuine person, A man that can handle anything no matter the burden. My life since my mother's death; I grew from that seed, Like a rose in the pavement I'm blooming dutifully. So I'm not half the man that i use to be, I'm twice that...usually. __________________