Round 1: 1. ALIEN vs. 4. jack ripper {ALIEN wins KO}

God Of War · 02-02-2013, 05:59 PM

David Lama
June 23rd, 2009, 07:43 AM

Stick and Move 2009

Verses due June 24th 2009.
Midnight Pacific Time
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l

[HR][/HR]ALIEN
June 23rd, 2009, 07:44 AM

check.

[HR][/HR]jack ripper
June 23rd, 2009, 08:20 AM

check

[HR][/HR]ALIEN
June 23rd, 2009, 05:03 PM

Quit the battle and run.... cuz when the laughter is done....
Everyone'll see your a jack of small trades and a master of none
I'm runnin' you over easy cuz your skill needs elevating...
First time yall seen jack under a car.... while its still accelerating
All my sick nameplays got your girls attention, eyes focused...
So I'll go ahead and take jack's bitch and ripper pussy wide open
Cuz honestly, we know you don't got girls on their knees n shit...
Only girls taking jack down their throat are on a drinking binge
You movin' slow now, I caught up n ripped this slim fool...
So much for Jack being quick n nimble :(

[HR][/HR]jack ripper
June 24th, 2009, 02:57 AM

im damn right sick, everybody stay away from me//
100 foot zone, is the tone, don't gaze at me//
if you saw the derange me, i'd leak in your veins see//
im like heroin ingections, i'll infect in you brain seams//
strainious n tameless, is the destipiton of a killer//
now if add another, poppin pescription pills im Jack Ripper//
extract, is what provides you to be still n exact//
in these raps, i give slaps, this shits easier than a fuckin relapse//
So Alien isnt this a battle and your just talkin bout hoes//
your rhymes like a stutter but my shit just flows//

[HR][/HR]Rip That
June 24th, 2009, 07:40 AM

ALIEN - Whats with all the damn nameplays? SMH. Not a bad verse at all just could have use a little variety. Had some good ones but got repetitive and predictable quick.

Jack - Filler, filler, filler. Where's your punches at? Do you know what a punchline is? I dont think you do. No offense.

ALIEN annihilated Jack.

[HR][/HR]jack ripper
June 24th, 2009, 11:28 AM

mate i been doin this for about a month

[HR][/HR]Genocide
June 24th, 2009, 03:38 PM

sorry jack -were you a little excited when you wrote that verse or something? had a lot of annoying misspellings and it looked like you forgot to add some words here and there -not to mention it was all bragging, not battle material whatsoever -thats what your supposed to put in open mic

vote ---------Alien

Genocide

[HR][/HR]MoreHits
June 24th, 2009, 04:05 PM

not even close.......better everything and actually had punches.....biggest mismatch this round......i dont think anyone will disagree here..........vote........ALIEN

[HR][/HR]NoDoze
June 24th, 2009, 04:10 PM

Vote Alien Jacks seemed like just a rap, There was not one thing in there really towards Alien at all. Was this a battle?

02-02-2013, 05:59 PM	#1
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,825 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493980	Round 1: 1. ALIEN vs. 4. jack ripper {ALIEN wins KO} David Lama June 23rd, 2009, 07:43 AM Stick and Move 2009 Verses due June 24th 2009. Midnight Pacific Time 10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount these are keystyle battles. you only have a day to write. NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER. IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE 1st to 5 wins 3-0 = KO 4-1 = TKO check in. G/l [HR][/HR]ALIEN June 23rd, 2009, 07:44 AM check. [HR][/HR]jack ripper June 23rd, 2009, 08:20 AM check [HR][/HR]ALIEN June 23rd, 2009, 05:03 PM Quit the battle and run.... cuz when the laughter is done.... Everyone'll see your a jack of small trades and a master of none I'm runnin' you over easy cuz your skill needs elevating... First time yall seen jack under a car.... while its still accelerating All my sick nameplays got your girls attention, eyes focused... So I'll go ahead and take jack's bitch and ripper pussy wide open Cuz honestly, we know you don't got girls on their knees n shit... Only girls taking jack down their throat are on a drinking binge You movin' slow now, I caught up n ripped this slim fool... So much for Jack being quick n nimble :( [HR][/HR]jack ripper June 24th, 2009, 02:57 AM im damn right sick, everybody stay away from me// 100 foot zone, is the tone, don't gaze at me// if you saw the derange me, i'd leak in your veins see// im like heroin ingections, i'll infect in you brain seams// strainious n tameless, is the destipiton of a killer// now if add another, poppin pescription pills im Jack Ripper// extract, is what provides you to be still n exact// in these raps, i give slaps, this shits easier than a fuckin relapse// So Alien isnt this a battle and your just talkin bout hoes// your rhymes like a stutter but my shit just flows// [HR][/HR]Rip That June 24th, 2009, 07:40 AM ALIEN - Whats with all the damn nameplays? SMH. Not a bad verse at all just could have use a little variety. Had some good ones but got repetitive and predictable quick. Jack - Filler, filler, filler. Where's your punches at? Do you know what a punchline is? I dont think you do. No offense. ALIEN annihilated Jack. [HR][/HR]jack ripper June 24th, 2009, 11:28 AM mate i been doin this for about a month [HR][/HR]Genocide June 24th, 2009, 03:38 PM sorry jack -were you a little excited when you wrote that verse or something? had a lot of annoying misspellings and it looked like you forgot to add some words here and there -not to mention it was all bragging, not battle material whatsoever -thats what your supposed to put in open mic vote ---------Alien Genocide [HR][/HR]MoreHits June 24th, 2009, 04:05 PM not even close.......better everything and actually had punches.....biggest mismatch this round......i dont think anyone will disagree here..........vote........ALIEN [HR][/HR]NoDoze June 24th, 2009, 04:10 PM Vote Alien Jacks seemed like just a rap, There was not one thing in there really towards Alien at all. Was this a battle?