2. Sn00p vs 11. ill nik-A - SN00P WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday , August 31st 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Sn00p @ill nik-A

[ill nik-A]

14
Welcome!

[Sn00p]

word. g'luck.

[Sn00p]

u know it's a coke problem when the amount u need for one fix has doubled
shit's reached Historical dimensions. it just takes one Big Nose to see Nixon trouble
& claiming u're a grownup w/ those shoes is more than hypocrisy
shit... u won't see Amman in Jordan unless we're talking geography
but even if i catch him in a suit, i'll just strangle this dirty queer
the way i closen cuban ties will obsolete US diplomatic efforts of the last 30 years
plus w/ how fucked up ur face is, no girl asks "are u down to kiss me?"
so many craters no human has ever touched... i expect a NASA mission by 2050
both outsiders so what? we carry u & some members even want u dead, fag
u're not a Crewmate. u're just Riding Along to get to a Better Place, u Wetback
& how u still worry about txt when u're close to a hundred, faggit?
u're so past ur time. u should have mod priority even over the summer classic
it's nothing to make u die. cuz w/ my arsonal, u're hardly a nuisance
when i run up on u, i come w/ more guns drawn than heckler & koch r&d blueprints

[ill nik-A]

This is a…
smooth ride for me to the finals; my lines are clutch, coward
ya verses tryin to make an impact… but it’s just a fender bender durin rush hour
I’ma put ya tired rhymes to sleep & that won’t go so well
u swear that style’s here to stay… concepts & wording checking into a roach motel
I’m old school so pay attention as I insult u; just SIT & smile…
ur nursery drops are criss-cross apple sauce… while mine behead u Indian style
ur bitch is wild & since u cant make her cream, so I took her
U on her ass like True Religion… but that atheist bitch has the genes of a hooker
F a Trojan war! ya verses tend to fall off & get weak for real
the last ten done always hurt u… proving consistency is ur Achilles heal
ya forced lines get ridden; sayin u top tier’s a lie, u’re fibbin’
concepts are wearing thin… & only Miley Cyris thinks it’s ok for u to try & fit in
I word my shit perfectly so how are u gonna outflow me son
ya punches are hard to see land… they’re stuck in Water World with floaties on

[Alistan aka faggot zelph aka lip bayless]

Guess Nik by landslide . ill edit my vote later thou

[Bash]

Snoops geography n wetback lines sere ok. Wasnt feeling so much the rest. Nik had rush hr, roach motel, n miley cyrus. I have him winning by a quote cause more of snoops bars were a complete miss imo

V-Ill Nik A

[Razah]

Originally Posted by Sn00p

u know it's a coke problem when the amount u need for one fix has doubled
shit's reached Historical dimensions. it just takes one Big Nose to see Nixon trouble

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

ur bitch is wild & since u cant make her cream, so I took her
U on her ass like True Religion… but that atheist bitch has the genes of a hooker

F a Trojan war! ya verses tend to fall off & get weak for real
the last ten done always hurt u… proving consistency is ur Achilles heal

I word my shit perfectly

That's what I liked from each one of you guys. And, the only reason I kept Nik's "wording shit perfectly" quote in there is because, I feel like if Snoop worded some of his shit better, it would hit much harder. Concept wise, I actually do think Snoop had more shit that could've been dope. Can't believe that this Cuban is still battling. Anyways, good shit guys.

vill Nik-A

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Sn00p

u know it's a coke problem when the amount u need for one fix has doubled
shit's reached Historical dimensions. it just takes one Big Nose to see Nixon trouble
cool wp, but the execution here was not as good as it could have been. felt rushed
& claiming u're a grownup w/ those shoes is more than hypocrisy
shit... u won't see Amman in Jordan unless we're talking geography
this was dope af, wish u did more with that setup, but damn the punch was clear and clever
but even if i catch him in a suit, i'll just strangle this dirty queer
the way i closen cuban ties will obsolete US diplomatic efforts of the last 30 years
nah
plus w/ how fucked up ur face is, no girl asks "are u down to kiss me?"
so many craters no human has ever touched... i expect a NASA mission by 2050
fire
both outsiders so what? we carry u & some members even want u dead, fag
u're not a Crewmate. u're just Riding Along to get to a Better Place, u Wetback
eh
& how u still worry about txt when u're close to a hundred, faggit?
u're so past ur time. u should have mod priority even over the summer classic
ok cool.
it's nothing to make u die. cuz w/ my arsonal, u're hardly a nuisance
when i run up on u, i come w/ more guns drawn than heckler & koch r&d blueprints
this was light, but it was cool

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

This is a…
smooth ride for me to the finals; my lines are clutch, coward
ya verses tryin to make an impact… but it’s just a fender bender durin rush hour
nah, this light, but it aint really clever to me..not feelin
I’ma put ya tired rhymes to sleep & that won’t go so well
u swear that style’s here to stay… concepts & wording checking into a roach motel
this was dope. the flips on cliches can get weary tho
I’m old school so pay attention as I insult u; just SIT & smile…
ur nursery drops are criss-cross apple sauce… while mine behead u Indian style
lmao the hell does this even mean? @destroyer
ur bitch is wild & since u cant make her cream, so I took her
U on her ass like True Religion… but that atheist bitch has the genes of a hooker
ok..
F a Trojan war! ya verses tend to fall off & get weak for real
the last ten done always hurt u… proving consistency is ur Achilles heal
pretty clever. cool.. almost felt forced but it didnt. borderline but still clever wp use. so I like it
ya forced lines get ridden; sayin u top tier’s a lie, u’re fibbin’
concepts are wearing thin… & only Miley Cyris thinks it’s ok for u to try & fit in
nah
I word my shit perfectly so how are u gonna outflow me son
ya punches are hard to see land… they’re stuck in Water World with floaties on
nah

Niks style just got to me here. Alot of awkward sayings and references. Stuff felt dated to me. The closer was really really bad to me. I got Snoop because his unquotables appealed to me more. Both had fire when they landed full steam.

[Useless]

u know it's a coke problem when the amount u need for one fix has doubled
shit's reached Historical dimensions. it just takes one Big Nose to see Nixon trouble
--- seen Nixon a lot but not like this. Aite line....
& claiming u're a grownup w/ those shoes is more than hypocrisy
shit... u won't see Amman in Jordan unless we're talking geography
--- felt like u somehow made a personal feel generic lol. Ok line but just feels light.....
but even if i catch him in a suit, i'll just strangle this dirty queer
the way i closen cuban ties will obsolete US diplomatic efforts of the last 30 years
--- ehhh......
plus w/ how fucked up ur face is, no girl asks "are u down to kiss me?"
so many craters no human has ever touched... i expect a NASA mission by 2050
--- lol aite.....
both outsiders so what? we carry u & some members even want u dead, fag
u're not a Crewmate. u're just Riding Along to get to a Better Place, u Wetback
--- lol but still ehhh.....
& how u still worry about txt when u're close to a hundred, faggit?
u're so past ur time. u should have mod priority even over the summer classic
--- nice......
it's nothing to make u die. cuz w/ my arsonal, u're hardly a nuisance
when i run up on u, i come w/ more guns drawn than heckler & koch r&d blueprints
--- aite.....

Vs.

This is a…
smooth ride for me to the finals; my lines are clutch, coward
ya verses tryin to make an impact… but it’s just a fender bender durin rush hour
--- ehhh...
I’ma put ya tired rhymes to sleep & that won’t go so well
u swear that style’s here to stay… concepts & wording checking into a roach motel
--- smooth wording, good line.....
I’m old school so pay attention as I insult u; just SIT & smile…
ur nursery drops are criss-cross apple sauce… while mine behead u Indian style
--- I see what u were going for here but it just didn't come across.....
ur bitch is wild & since u cant make her cream, so I took her
U on her ass like True Religion… but that atheist bitch has the genes of a hooker
--- aite....
F a Trojan war! ya verses tend to fall off & get weak for real
the last ten done always hurt u… proving consistency is ur Achilles heal
--- seen tendon before but this aite...smooth wording helped it......
ya forced lines get ridden; sayin u top tier’s a lie, u’re fibbin’
concepts are wearing thin… & only Miley Cyris thinks it’s ok for u to try & fit in
--- wasn't feeling this...
I word my shit perfectly so how are u gonna outflow me son
ya punches are hard to see land… they’re stuck in Water World with floaties on
--- ehhhhhhhhhhh............

Overall: tbh I wasn't feeling a lot nik's verse. He had some ok lines but then just had some bland generic shit and didn't have any haymakers. Snoop had a couple haymakers, even tho his verse started out using the usual personals on nik he had some aite flips on em n then he picked up steam and closed out strong.

V. Snoop

[puravida]

Originally Posted by Sn00p

but even if i catch him in a suit, i'll just strangle this dirty queer
the way i closen cuban ties will obsolete US diplomatic efforts of the last 30 years
plus w/ how fucked up ur face is, no girl asks "are u down to kiss me?"
so many craters no human has ever touched... i expect a NASA mission by 2050

VS

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

I’m old school so pay attention as I insult u; just SIT & smile…
ur nursery drops are criss-cross apple sauce… while mine behead u Indian style
ya forced lines get ridden; sayin u top tier’s a lie, u’re fibbin’
concepts are wearing thin… & only Miley Cyris thinks it’s ok for u to try & fit in
n

I felt my winner came more aggresive with it. Some nice personals, good wordplay and name. Overall, I feel snoop edged it

vote - snoop

[Sharp]

u know it's a coke problem when the amount u need for one fix has doubled
shit's reached Historical dimensions. it just takes one Big Nose to see Nixon trouble
cool, haven't seen this flip tbh
& claiming u're a grownup w/ those shoes is more than hypocrisy
shit... u won't see Amman in Jordan unless we're talking geography
isn't this pronounced 'uh-mon'? I'm pretty sure it is so I'ma cautiously not call this a big hit. if it's close enough I'll hold off on voting to ask
but even if i catch him in a suit, i'll just strangle this dirty queer
the way i closen cuban ties will obsolete US diplomatic efforts of the last 30 years
cool but wording got too stretched at the end
plus w/ how fucked up ur face is, no girl asks "are u down to kiss me?"
so many craters no human has ever touched... i expect a NASA mission by 2050
nice
both outsiders so what? we carry u & some members even want u dead, fag
u're not a Crewmate. u're just Riding Along to get to a Better Place, u Wetback
nice
& how u still worry about txt when u're close to a hundred, faggit?
u're so past ur time. u should have mod priority even over the summer classic
lol cool
it's nothing to make u die. cuz w/ my arsonal, u're hardly a nuisance
when i run up on u, i come w/ more guns drawn than heckler & koch r&d blueprints
light



This is a…
smooth ride for me to the finals; my lines are clutch, coward
ya verses tryin to make an impact… but it’s just a fender bender durin rush hour
light but cool
I’ma put ya tired rhymes to sleep & that won’t go so well
u swear that style’s here to stay… concepts & wording checking into a roach motel
cool
I’m old school so pay attention as I insult u; just SIT & smile…
ur nursery drops are criss-cross apple sauce… while mine behead u Indian style
not really feeling that
ur bitch is wild & since u cant make her cream, so I took her
U on her ass like True Religion… but that atheist bitch has the genes of a hooker
ok
F a Trojan war! ya verses tend to fall off & get weak for real
the last ten done always hurt u… proving consistency is ur Achilles heal
alright
ya forced lines get ridden; sayin u top tier’s a lie, u’re fibbin’
concepts are wearing thin… & only Miley Cyris thinks it’s ok for u to try & fit in
cool
I word my shit perfectly so how are u gonna outflow me son
ya punches are hard to see land… they’re stuck in Water World with floaties on
nice



damn

so you both had consistency. let me reread this after 1-2

EDIT: So Amman is 'uh mahn' which is a stretch for my accent but I still see it so I'ma consider it ok

But I gotta edge it for sn00p for just being slightly harsher overall. Really not much else to say, I just thought dude had a slightly harder verse

v/sn00p

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Sn00p

u know it's a coke problem when the amount u need for one fix has doubled
shit's reached Historical dimensions. it just takes one Big Nose to see Nixon trouble
this is cool. a little wordy for what the punch gives you
& claiming u're a grownup w/ those shoes is more than hypocrisy
shit... u won't see Amman in Jordan unless we're talking geography
wording is slightly off to me but nice concept
but even if i catch him in a suit, i'll just strangle this dirty queer
the way i closen cuban ties will obsolete US diplomatic efforts of the last 30 years
wording is not quite there again, but concept is dope
plus w/ how fucked up ur face is, no girl asks "are u down to kiss me?"
so many craters no human has ever touched... i expect a NASA mission by 2050
nice
both outsiders so what? we carry u & some members even want u dead, fag
u're not a Crewmate. u're just Riding Along to get to a Better Place, u Wetback
cool, a little light
& how u still worry about txt when u're close to a hundred, faggit?
u're so past ur time. u should have mod priority even over the summer classic
i didnt get this, maybe im missing something simple
it's nothing to make u die. cuz w/ my arsonal, u're hardly a nuisance
when i run up on u, i come w/ more guns drawn than heckler & koch r&d blueprints
this would need more setup to hit hard. light

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

This is a…
smooth ride for me to the finals; my lines are clutch, coward
ya verses tryin to make an impact… but it’s just a fender bender durin rush hour
light but ok.
I’ma put ya tired rhymes to sleep & that won’t go so well
u swear that style’s here to stay… concepts & wording checking into a roach motel
this was meh to me. didn't set up the roach motel bit to make it connect
I’m old school so pay attention as I insult u; just SIT & smile…
ur nursery drops are criss-cross apple sauce… while mine behead u Indian style
um ok. im just gonna go to the next bar now.
ur bitch is wild & since u cant make her cream, so I took her
U on her ass like True Religion… but that atheist bitch has the genes of a hooker
this was nice
F a Trojan war! ya verses tend to fall off & get weak for real
the last ten done always hurt u… proving consistency is ur Achilles heal
this is straight.
ya forced lines get ridden; sayin u top tier’s a lie, u’re fibbin’
concepts are wearing thin… & only Miley Cyris thinks it’s ok for u to try & fit in
nah not feeling it
I word my shit perfectly so how are u gonna outflow me son
ya punches are hard to see land… they’re stuck in Water World with floaties on
didn't like the wording in the punch, doesn't work both ways to me

Standouts from sn00p were Nixon and NASA, with geography, cuban ties, and wetback coming close. Nik had True Religion and Trojan War. Fender bender was ok and the closer was decent but not quite quotable. This is a close battle depending on preference as I don't think either person here had a decisive haymaker. I think Nik had the worse misses and a few of his punches were bland. sn00p had some wording issues but for the most part the punches were decent, so i think he edges this on consistency.

Vote sn00p

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Alistan

Guess Nik by landslide . ill edit my vote later thou

Can't count this til there's an explained vote