07-08-2019, 09:37 PM | #1 |
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moonlight, sing me a song
for when the record ends and all the whiskey is gone sitting in blackness my sentence centuries long please remember me fondly, when our adventures are over and we're sitting in escape shuttles destined for Mars they say less is more but i've had nothing at all and it didn't feel like anything but empty revolvers aimed between my teeth i clench the barrel and sobbed the taste of gunmetal in my memories often i clawed my way from hell into a relative fortune thankful for my efforts but it never resolved and never will. i'm confident i've severed the bonds between myself and anything contentment involves those i've loved are but a distant mirage, shimmering softly burrowed in this waste of time a senseless nostalgia i always thought constructivism led to reprieve time capsules of my sadness are these letters you read another night i've found myself pretending to breathe 6 Old Fashioneds in and now i'm ready to leave petulance and jealously and death and disease why hide it, when it only takes a second to see behind the curtain, wizard in green, ineptitude gleaming, so FUCK whoever believes me when i get up to speak sensitive being, just like anyone. we've grown to be men as children in our bedrooms we began this descent so it goes. cliche indeed when poets recited, lonely at night @Certain called me aphoristic, i suppose he was right but there's truth in this collective. it's disorder. it's freedom uniformity in chaos my only belief system i'd rather die than let you down, pathetic and fake living just to see what's coming after we break i never thought i'd be here after all that i've lost it's fear that keeps my soul from simply wandering off feel it or don't. lies for friends of mine and needles for dope leave me alone. nevermind please say that you won't dm
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07-09-2019, 01:35 AM | #2 |
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Damn dude, this touched me. For real. The time capsules to sensitive being bit was definitely my favorite. Your writings have always had a way with me, and they always read super smooth without filler. And at the end of each one, I say to myself “I know this head space all too well.”
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07-13-2019, 07:55 PM | #4 |
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So real and dope. Felt it
Going through some bs but this is highly relatable.
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