Cold World

Sunny · 03-01-2018, 02:43 AM

Sitting here
writing about my life
I talk to God to fade away strife
I cry to get things off my chest
Struggles and fight battles put to rest
Devil try to break me down
I show him I rise above
God by my side
He promised to guide me

Geno · 03-01-2018, 06:01 AM

Fire

Sunny · 03-01-2018, 02:51 PM

Thanks

Eŋg · 03-04-2018, 09:12 PM

if you wrote this off the cuff, i wouldn't be mad at it.

it still isn't good, but i'd understand.

03-01-2018, 02:43 AM	#1
Sunny Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 47 Rep Power: 0	Cold World Sitting here writing about my life I talk to God to fade away strife I cry to get things off my chest Struggles and fight battles put to rest Devil try to break me down I show him I rise above God by my side He promised to guide me

03-01-2018, 06:01 AM	#2
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03-01-2018, 02:51 PM	#3
Sunny Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 47 Rep Power: 0	Thanks

03-04-2018, 09:12 PM	#4
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,146 Rep Power: 0	if you wrote this off the cuff, i wouldn't be mad at it. it still isn't good, but i'd understand.