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Old 03-30-2019, 10:57 AM   #1
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Old 03-30-2019, 02:37 PM   #2
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was this about me babe? was really powerful stuff haha <3
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was this about me babe? was really powerful stuff haha <3

Chill fam. She's all about me. She wants BBC.
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if she needs small white dick she knows where to come, i'm fucking OUT
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making his own dough to pay bills
He loves some Silver
^Probably the best concept I've read from you yet and it works well.

I've read your stuff throughout the years and this is definite progression from the last piece I read from you. Keep writing and focusing on line length/flow and rhymes. Shits getting better for sure.
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dope drop the silver line def the best, keep it up
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I thought the alias change may have improved your shit, guess not...Havin' said that it's probably the best piece you've written.
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Did you just diss your penis...?
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Did you just diss your penis...?
yea, should i write a verse about it?
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If you must, I'm sure Silver would read it...
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