03-30-2019, 10:57 AM | #1 |
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Boyfriend
Baby boy I know you heard I'm the good girl
Your boys tell you that you can do better And baby that's the truth But I dig something about you I'm loving your swag Don't care about them other dames I'll be your Ryder or Die I give it to you all night Baby boy I'll take you high Them other dames don't compare and Independent man, making his own dough to pay bills He loves some Silver He knows I'm a boss I'm not scare to lose him now |
03-30-2019, 02:37 PM | #2 |
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was this about me babe? was really powerful stuff haha <3
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03-30-2019, 02:42 PM | #3 |
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Chill fam. She's all about me. She wants BBC.
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03-30-2019, 02:45 PM | #4 |
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if she needs small white dick she knows where to come, i'm fucking OUT
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03-30-2019, 03:07 PM | #5 |
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03-30-2019, 11:31 PM | #6 |
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making his own dough to pay bills
He loves some Silver ^Probably the best concept I've read from you yet and it works well. I've read your stuff throughout the years and this is definite progression from the last piece I read from you. Keep writing and focusing on line length/flow and rhymes. Shits getting better for sure.
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03-31-2019, 10:13 AM | #7 |
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Thanks for feedback loves
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03-31-2019, 01:44 PM | #8 |
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dope drop the silver line def the best, keep it up
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03-31-2019, 02:37 PM | #9 |
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Thanks love
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03-31-2019, 09:38 PM | #10 |
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I thought the alias change may have improved your shit, guess not...Havin' said that it's probably the best piece you've written.
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03-31-2019, 09:40 PM | #11 |
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03-31-2019, 10:27 PM | #12 |
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yea, should i write a verse about it?
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03-31-2019, 10:47 PM | #13 |
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If you must, I'm sure Silver would read it...
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03-31-2019, 11:58 PM | #14 |
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Thanks
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