02-26-2018, 04:17 PM | #1 |
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Erron Black 0-1 Vs Darker Ego 2-2 - ERRON BLACK WINS
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02-28-2018, 09:38 PM | #2 |
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I swear I've got this sewn up, you're the lightest of work.
Got him on pins and needles like people getting high in the burbs. Leave this bitch in stitches when I'm writing a verse. While we'd only see Dar' nit in the threads like he's not trying to curse. He's a no-one, and I'm quite sure we're well aware. We'd only see D.E. put on the map if we're talking 'bout Delaware. You'll get stabbed and bladed for your average statements. Even the crowd'll give him Sighs when a cut leaves his breath exasperated. Don't even try to start, faggot, you don't make money in a large bracket. Only way you'd turn a mint on display is basketball with March Madness. Crowd's asking for a raft, cause this man's a frail nerd. We see even the row's paddling away, you're a Titanic failure. Last edited by Erron Black; 02-28-2018 at 10:07 PM. |
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When it comes to rap you are like a stand up comedian but without the humor Rejected lame Fuck your rumors, You are an infection in the game like enormous tumors Face sudden karma When the serpent is allure, Flowing toxic infecting all the pure Instead of serving the cure mangle your corpse with a tractor and leave it fermenting in manure The handsome lord Mentoring your crew, Serve you headless in a stew for the legends and the few End review, Am a Devil to you, that`ll slice your reputation with A Hanzo sword and sever it in two!! Ma rhymes on point like thorns in a ***tus, Bombing your status, Devour your world like galactus You need a whole swat team, countless marines in machines and a thousand special forces to track us I pound keys like a statistician make you dissappear on scene like a slick Magician Not a problem on the mission for a liric technician I`ll Solve this kid like a mathematician!!! In stage, Shine so much A blind ya vision, Counter your love poems with a violent diction You are hopeless, Misplaced, leave you throatless with a blades after A signed petition
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03-01-2018, 03:10 PM | #5 |
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i cut the last for in darker verse, VOTE UP YAH'LL.
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03-02-2018, 02:41 AM | #6 | |
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swear I've got this sewn up, you're the lightest of work.
Got him on pins and needles like people getting high in the burbs. Cool play, feeling it. Leave this bitch in stitches when I'm writing a verse. While we'd only see Dar' nit in the threads like he's not trying to curse. Nice nameplay, wording could have been better. He's a no-one, and I'm quite sure we're well aware. We'd only see D.E. put on the map if we're talking 'bout Delaware. Lol dope You'll get stabbed and bladed for your average statements. Even the crowd'll give him Sighs when a cut leaves his breath exasperated. Decent Don't even try to start, faggot, you don't make money in a large bracket. Only way you'd turn a mint on display is basketball with March Madness. Clever, feeling it Crowd's asking for a raft, cause this man's a frail nerd. We see even the row's paddling away, you're a Titanic failure. Not really feeling this, decent concept though __ When it comes to rap you are like a stand up comedian but without the humor Rejected lame Fuck your rumors, You are an infection in the game like enormous tumors Like the flow, but very basic punch Face sudden karma When the serpent is allure, Flowing toxic infecting all the pure Instead of serving the cure mangle your corpse with a tractor and leave it fermenting in manure Pretty hard hitting but no real concept behind it, but i dig it The handsome lord Mentoring your crew, Serve you headless in a stew for the legends and the few End review, Am a Devil to you, that`ll slice your reputation with A Hanzo sword and sever it in two!! Great multies, cool bar Ma rhymes on point like thorns in a ***tus, Bombing your status, Devour your world like galactus You need a whole swat team, countless marines in machines and a thousand special forces to track us Again good flow, but not direct enough I pound keys like a statistician make you dissappear on scene like a slick Magician Not a problem on the mission for a liric technician I`ll Solve this kid like a mathematician!!! Good flow but simple punch.... In stage, Shine so much A blind ya vision, Counter your love poems with a violent diction You are hopeless, Misplaced, leave you throatless with a blades after A signed petition Good finish Overall this was a decent battle, feel like D.e needs to work on his punches and using some nameplays because hes got a great flow but that's where he lacked here when erron had a solid verse was more direct and more creative. Vote erron black
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03-02-2018, 12:52 PM | #7 |
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Vote erron black
Darks verse has sum cool flow, errons was more direct, both were pretty simplistic tho. |
03-02-2018, 02:31 PM | #8 |
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I swear I've got this sewn up, you're the lightest of work.
Got him on pins and needles like people getting high in the burbs. okay I guess Leave this bitch in stitches when I'm writing a verse. While we'd only see Dar' nit in the threads like he's not trying to curse. nah forced wordplay and weak at that He's a no-one, and I'm quite sure we're well aware. We'd only see D.E. put on the map if we're talking 'bout Delaware. coulda been harsher kind of simple You'll get stabbed and bladed for your average statements. Even the crowd'll give him Sighs when a cut leaves his breath exasperated. that was nice I liked that Don't even try to start, faggot, you don't make money in a large bracket. Only way you'd turn a mint on display is basketball with March Madness. also nice Crowd's asking for a raft, cause this man's a frail nerd. We see even the row's paddling away, you're a Titanic failure. nah weak closer vs When it comes to rap you are like a stand up comedian but without the humor Rejected lame Fuck your rumors, You are an infection in the game like enormous tumors ehh I see the rhyme but wheres the punch Face sudden karma When the serpent is allure, Flowing toxic infecting all the pure Instead of serving the cure mangle your corpse with a tractor and leave it fermenting in manure nah too wordy not a diss really either The handsome lord Mentoring your crew, Serve you headless in a stew for the legends and the few End review, Am a Devil to you, that`ll slice your reputation with A Hanzo sword and sever it in two!! nah same problem Ma rhymes on point like thorns in a ***tus, Bombing your status, Devour your world like galactus You need a whole swat team, countless marines in machines and a thousand special forces to track us okay a lotta rhymes going on there... I guess I pound keys like a statistician make you dissappear on scene like a slick Magician Not a problem on the mission for a liric technician I`ll Solve this kid like a mathematician!!! too simple In stage, Shine so much A blind ya vision, Counter your love poems with a violent diction You are hopeless, Misplaced, leave you throatless with a blades after A signed petition eh?? overall: I think darker ego would fit topical battles better... I think that's more his style.... erron black wasn't much better but with two quotables I think he easily took this battle handsdown... vote: erron black
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Crowd's asking for a raft, cause this man's a frail nerd.
We see even the row's paddling away, you're a Titanic failure. Vs nothing Erron has some decent attempts but nothing was really landing for me. The closer was ok. Ego didn’t have any punches in his verse, not really much to talk about. Erron had the better verse. v/Erron |
03-03-2018, 01:48 PM | #11 |
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Pretty simplistic matchup. Erron had a solid structure but I didn't feel a lot of oomph behind the punchlines. Everything was just cool. Darker had like an Open Mic piece.. I think you leaned too heavily on multis and not enough on impactful punchlines.
Vote -- Erron Black
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