04-21-2019, 01:39 PM | #1 |
ZAAAAM
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Dregs (0-0) vs. Suthaveli (0-0) - SUTHAVELI WINS
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Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON A MINIMUM OF 4 BATTLES WILL RESULT IN A DEDUCTION OF 2 VOTES IN YOUR BATTLE. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! VOTE ON 4 BATTLES MINIMUM OR YOU PAY THE PRICE. SIMPLE! COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140091 @Dregs @Suthaveli |
04-21-2019, 06:24 PM | #2 |
Scream
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04-21-2019, 06:43 PM | #3 |
Prayers won't help.
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04-24-2019, 08:22 PM | #4 |
Prayers won't help.
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Fuck grabbing quotes & waiting on this last min suspense shit, lemme talk to ya..
Guess whose champin, Infil-san? w. my market ability, it isn't tough my guy Bet if I hinted it's someone blk in store, u'd follow em around yellin, "Hurry up & buy!" Wait.Now he's white & from da lone star state!? idkwtf games he's on.. But we know da 'Resin' he acted & Texas Asian like parents of Futurama's Amy Wong Res igged ya & in came Cash in hope ya status made major movements Hey. U'll always be top tier in my eyes INF- & after dis murder I'ma get da tattoo prove it & since ya nice w. dat edit button, it shld help ya irl faggot cuz issa fight: ^Watch. I post up on ya & da bs u already put out there'll start ta disappear on sight Mufucka is'a character. Ya'll don't have'ta pay me ta blast dis whacky fuck But if u guys put a bill on his head, I'll match & hv em resemble Elmer Fudd clappin Daffy Duck Ya boii mean w. da left, son. Pump action's clean when I let one If I pull dat trigger, da shotti'll raise ya, kid- Makin u its deceased stepson Ya racist prick. Don't make me raise da fist in da air cuz ya fuckin up I hv no issue exercisin my rights by continuously & givin ya face a lift w. uppercuts When da tre spittin, ya face missin. My astrology sign says I'ma ape w. dis Zodiac killer when lettin off da Taurus- & dat horoscope u from a great distance Ay, take ya'll time proofreading his bars 16 Last edited by Suthaveli; 04-25-2019 at 09:48 PM. |
04-26-2019, 12:32 AM | #6 |
Scream
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Ext. If granted.
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04-26-2019, 07:52 AM | #7 |
Prayers won't help.
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04-26-2019, 07:58 AM | #8 |
ZAAAAM
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Suthaveli Wins
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04-26-2019, 10:41 PM | #9 |
ZAAAAM
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Guess whose champin, Infil-san? w. my market ability, it isn't tough my guy
Bet if I hinted it's someone blk in store, u'd follow em around yellin, "Hurry up & buy!" the setup was very choppy but the second line killed me lmao Wait.Now he's white & from da lone star state!? idkwtf games he's on.. But we know da 'Resin' he acted & Texas Asian like parents of Futurama's Amy Wong nah nah nah Res igged ya & in came Cash in hope ya status made major movements Hey. U'll always be top tier in my eyes INF- & after dis murder I'ma get da tattoo prove it nice & since ya nice w. dat edit button, it shld help ya irl faggot cuz issa fight: ^Watch. I post up on ya & da bs u already put out there'll start ta disappear on sight worded in a way that made me not know what’s happening here Mufucka is'a character. Ya'll don't have'ta pay me ta blast dis whacky fuck But if u guys put a bill on his head, I'll match & hv em resemble Elmer Fudd clappin Daffy Duck good concept but wording hurt it Ya boii mean w. da left, son. Pump action's clean when I let one If I pull dat trigger, da shotti'll raise ya, kid- Makin u its deceased stepson wording Ya racist prick. Don't make me raise da fist in da air cuz ya fuckin up I hv no issue exercisin my rights by continuously & givin ya face a lift w. uppercuts alright When da tre spittin, ya face missin. My astrology sign says I'ma ape w. dis Zodiac killer when lettin off da Taurus- & dat horoscope u from a great distance nice, good closer Overall a pretty good verse. Wording hurt you in some areas but overall you had a good amount of hits and this woulda been a good battle if you’d of let Inf drop. All good though, props for showing. |
04-27-2019, 07:25 AM | #10 |
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Guess whose champin, Infil-san? w. my market ability, it isn't tough my guy
Bet if I hinted it's someone blk in store, u'd follow em around yellin, "Hurry up & buy!" AIGHT, COOL Wait.Now he's white & from da lone star state!? idkwtf games he's on.. But we know da 'Resin' he acted & Texas Asian like parents of Futurama's Amy Wong NOT FEELING THIS Res igged ya & in came Cash in hope ya status made major movements Hey. U'll always be top tier in my eyes INF- & after dis murder I'ma get da tattoo prove it COOL & since ya nice w. dat edit button, it shld help ya irl faggot cuz issa fight: ^Watch. I post up on ya & da bs u already put out there'll start ta disappear on sight HMM, OK Mufucka is'a character. Ya'll don't have'ta pay me ta blast dis whacky fuck But if u guys put a bill on his head, I'll match & hv em resemble Elmer Fudd clappin Daffy Duck SORRY MAN, NOT FAMILIAR WITH THE REFERENCE, SO I DIDNT GET IT AND IM TOO LAZY TO GOOGLE LOL, COULD BE FIRE THOUGH Ya boii mean w. da left, son. Pump action's clean when I let one If I pull dat trigger, da shotti'll raise ya, kid- Makin u its deceased stepson DAMN, AND HERE I WAS THINKING I HAVE BAD WORDING CAUSE ENGLISH IS A SECOND LANGUAGE FOR ME, BUT YOU TOOK AWFUL WORDING TO WHOLE NEW LEVEL HERE MAN, THIS WASN'T CLEAN, COOL CONCEPT THOUGH Ya racist prick. Don't make me raise da fist in da air cuz ya fuckin up I hv no issue exercisin my rights by continuously & givin ya face a lift w. uppercuts PLAYED MAN, SEEN THIS FLIP EXACTLY THIS WAY BEFORE SO ITS A NO FOR ME When da tre spittin, ya face missin. My astrology sign says I'ma ape w. dis Zodiac killer when lettin off da Taurus- & dat horoscope u from a great distance WITH MY ACCENT, ITS A BIT OF STRETCH BUT ITS FINE, STILL SOUNDS AIGHT . . Overall, i would say this wasn't a bad verse bro, wished your opponent would've showed up, sadly we're both in similar situations. anyways one gripe i have with this verse is your wording man, take time to clean your shit up and you'll be good, then apart from a couple of references i didn't get, your verse was decent man. peace. |
04-28-2019, 01:46 AM | #11 | |
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dope verse, some played material but im sure ull have some fresher stuff next week. should have been a good battle, props for showing |
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