04-26-2016, 10:41 PM | #1 |
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Sharp 2-1 vs Joe Boston 0-3 - SHARP WINS
NBL Season 9 @Joe Boston
Due FRIDAY Extension will be given if asked due to late start. You MUST ask though. Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
04-27-2016, 10:55 AM | #3 |
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12 or 14?
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04-27-2016, 06:42 PM | #5 |
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14 @Sharp
Your from a school of pussies just get da fuc out my face Come to Boston College,Player 2 9 poppin watch u die young like Ron Brace Left me with a bitter taste about u your that certain type of gay If i see the bitch that raised u May 8 hit her body so u can mourn this Mothers Day Play with his emotions on the daily if he continues to talk that gunplay Id even ask his Bird Man she say u dumb af how u gonna get respect with a K Your wife says u dont pay one bill in the crib its a disgrace how u live She suppose to manage with Sharp Chedda? broke fuck cant even keep Cracker Barrel in the fridge Are your kids straight whens the last time they ate? this deadbeats never in sight Wife knows ur saving balance zero so dont go to the bank teller u fucking stumble at life U living trife when the last time u smelled that drug money If i pulled out my gun Andrew, Jackson for everything even take his face off for that twenty Bring nothing new to the table flipping old shit and its funny Hand him a Pure L fag probably rub it over himself like Danny Devito in Always Sunny |
05-01-2016, 12:09 AM | #6 |
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You've had a rough week...
The entire league wants you gone. I'll crush you w/ no indifference This week's 'For Your Pain & Suffering'. De La's new EP was no coincidence acting like dudes say 'v/joe' on the reg. the thought has me dead, bitch You just been Cruz'in w/ the votes? lol. THAT would be a fucked up Convention you're posting ur boner fuel? Soft bitch. ain't set for war son Post all your gay porn in chat. you STILL won't be Hard in this forum stay beggin for Anthony's love - him not hating you would be a personal victory You post a double handjob pic but you on Bags was the most jerking in NBL history mini freakout turning into depression got me wonderin... what you smokin brother? had yourself lots of ups n downs this week... n it wasn't just while lookin at the guys strokin each other Delusional & bipolar, you're diseased and everyone can see it son It's fitting - I'm putting on a clinic while you badly need to be in one + your boy OD'd while you were netceeing? You're scum, thats clear my dude I know you struggle with wording but how hard is it to say 'I'm here for you'? |
05-01-2016, 10:06 AM | #7 |
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Your from a school of pussies just get da fuc out my face Come to Boston College,Player 2 9 poppin watch u die young like Ron Brace ^ I see what you were doing here and it was a solid opener. Left me with a bitter taste about u your that certain type of gay If i see the bitch that raised u May 8 hit her body so u can mourn this Mothers Day ^ Okay. Play with his emotions on the daily if he continues to talk that gunplay Id even ask his Bird Man she say u dumb af how u gonna get respect with a K ^ Think this could have been worded better. Your wife says u dont pay one bill in the crib its a disgrace how u live She suppose to manage with Sharp Chedda? broke fuck cant even keep Cracker Barrel in the fridge ^ Alright. Are your kids straight whens the last time they ate? this deadbeats never in sight Wife knows ur saving balance zero so dont go to the bank teller u fucking stumble at life ^ Nah b. U living trife when the last time u smelled that drug money If i pulled out my gun Andrew, Jackson for everything even take his face off for that twenty ^ cool concept but the overall bar had little impact. Bring nothing new to the table flipping old shit and its funny Hand him a Pure L fag probably rub it over himself like Danny Devito in Always Sunny ^ ehhhhh Sharp: The entire league wants you gone. I'll crush you w/ no indifference This week's 'For Your Pain & Suffering'. De La's new EP was no coincidence ^ alright, solid. Nothing too crazy but a cool reference. acting like dudes say 'v/joe' on the reg. the thought has me dead, bitch You just been Cruz'in w/ the votes? lol. THAT would be a fucked up Convention ^ ehhh I see what you were going for but it wasn't really executed that well. you're posting ur boner fuel? Soft bitch. ain't set for war son Post all your gay porn in chat. you STILL won't be Hard in this forum ^ feels played to me. stay beggin for Anthony's love - him not hating you would be a personal victory You post a double handjob pic but you on Bags was the most jerking in NBL history ^I didn't feel this really mini freakout turning into depression got me wonderin... what you smokin brother? had yourself lots of ups n downs this week... n it wasn't just while lookin at the guys strokin each other ^ ehhh Delusional & bipolar, you're diseased and everyone can see it son It's fitting - I'm putting on a clinic while you badly need to be in one ^ solid solid. + your boy OD'd while you were netceeing? You're scum, thats clear my dude I know you struggle with wording but how hard is it to say 'I'm here for you'? ^ Good closer. This was actually one of the better verses i've seen from Boston, now if only his wording didn't mess up a couple of those lines he could have pulled off the upset, his first set of 4 were solid and the cracker barrel one. Sharp had the opener and the 4 closing bars so I got 6 for both and I think Sharp edged here, I know you're a dope battler Sharp but this verse felt really rushed to me. And all the generic 'you're gay' bars didn't really have much an impact or were clever enough. Regardless, Sharp gets the W here. V/Sharp |
05-01-2016, 11:05 AM | #8 |
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Ron brace, sharp chedda
Vs De las ep Sharp didn't connect with most of his shit. Opener was good. Joe had 2 decent hits V - Joe |
05-01-2016, 02:50 PM | #9 |
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Decent verse, u dwelled on the gay/masturbation jokes, but a good drop all & all. Overall SHARP takes it. |
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05-01-2016, 04:02 PM | #11 |
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Thought Joe Boston had a cool and creative verse, hard to describe though but it felt like the word play was good but either too wordy or the punchlines themselves weren't that good after that. Tough to describe though, but I felt if there was an opportunity to take this battle pretty easily that was missed.
I felt Sharp's verse wasn't bad but I wasn't feeling many of the punchlines, felt it was a lot more crisp and easy to read though. Very tough call but I'm going with Sharp, this one was kind of a toss up.
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05-01-2016, 08:42 PM | #12 |
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May 8, Andrew was ok
Vs. Cruz, up/down was ok, clinic was ok I got sharp here. His wording really made the difference. Joe was kind of all over the place. Sharp. |
05-01-2016, 11:16 PM | #13 |
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Your from a school of pussies just get da fuc out my face
Come to Boston College,Player 2 9 poppin watch u die young like Ron Brace Ok concept Left me with a bitter taste about u your that certain type of gay If i see the bitch that raised u May 8 hit her body so u can mourn this Mothers Day Poorly executed Play with his emotions on the daily if he continues to talk that gunplay Id even ask his Bird Man she say u dumb af how u gonna get respect with a K Not feeling this Your wife says u dont pay one bill in the crib its a disgrace how u live She suppose to manage with Sharp Chedda? broke fuck cant even keep Cracker Barrel in the fridge Lol ok Are your kids straight whens the last time they ate? this deadbeats never in sight Wife knows ur saving balance zero so dont go to the bank teller u fucking stumble at life I see what you're doing but the wording is off. Didn't hit hard imo U living trife when the last time u smelled that drug money If i pulled out my gun Andrew, Jackson for everything even take his face off for that twenty This was nice. Well done Bring nothing new to the table flipping old shit and its funny Hand him a Pure L fag probably rub it over himself like Danny Devito in Always Sunny nah The entire league wants you gone. I'll crush you w/ no indifference This week's 'For Your Pain & Suffering'. De La's new EP was no coincidence Ok acting like dudes say 'v/joe' on the reg. the thought has me dead, bitch You just been Cruz'in w/ the votes? lol. THAT would be a fucked up Convention meh you're posting ur boner fuel? Soft bitch. ain't set for war son Post all your gay porn in chat. you STILL won't be Hard in this forum nah stay beggin for Anthony's love - him not hating you would be a personal victory You post a double handjob pic but you on Bags was the most jerking in NBL history Lmao personal mean af mini freakout turning into depression got me wonderin... what you smokin brother? had yourself lots of ups n downs this week... n it wasn't just while lookin at the guys strokin each other The punch hit hard but the concept is getting tired now, it's 3 straight gay pics in the chat bars. Delusional & bipolar, you're diseased and everyone can see it son It's fitting - I'm putting on a clinic while you badly need to be in one OK. Coulda been executed differently for more effect but it's solid nonetheless + your boy OD'd while you were netceeing? You're scum, thats clear my dude I know you struggle with wording but how hard is it to say 'I'm here for you'? Lol damn this personal couldve been all types of ether but truthfully it fell flat to me Nice little grudge match here. I can tell Joe tried to turn up on sharp and in a few spots he kinda did. But overall he had a lot of flat out misses and some missed opportunities. I've seen and been on the receiving end of sharp when it's in better form, he did ok in this battle. Nothing to crazy but he was killing Joe with the personals, who brought it on himself entirely. Overall sharp hit harder and had the better executed ideas. Decent battle.
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05-01-2016, 11:29 PM | #14 |
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I say they both bout even.
Imo it comes down to a matter of preference. I found sharp verse a lil more humorous. So..vote sharp |
05-02-2016, 04:29 AM | #15 |
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Boston: mothers day
Sharp: opener, hard in the forum, jerking bags Got sharp taking this pretty easily with better concepts and wording. Vote = Sharp |
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may 8 was coo
vs decent opener double hj hit very lackluster for how many lines yall went, sharp barely takes it v/sharp |
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