03-01-2014, 11:39 AM | #1 |
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DEAD MAN VS. LARS: THE TOPOCALYPSE IS OPEN FOR VOTES
Winter Topical Champ match. The battle of the century of the week.
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54377 Check it out and vote you animals.
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03-01-2014, 11:55 AM | #2 |
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Don't really know what categories to judge a topical piece on but Lar's verse was dope with the imagery and story line. I liked his verse much better and it was put together nicely. So props @Lars
Other verse was okay, reason I didn't really like it as much as Lars' verse, is because. The beginning of the verse just seemed all over the place. I couldn't really make out what/where he was trying to go. Then it picked up and I started to get a sense of feel and imagery. But Lar's verse was nicely put together and painted a much better story Line, IMO. But I don't do topicals so, I wouldn't know what's dope or not, lol. |
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sad to see the winter topical end. AOWL is just a no show fest
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First weeks are generally chalk full of no shows in my experience. After a few weeks it'll start hitting its stride.
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Word.
Week 1 is a vetting process.
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yeah and apparently nc's is as jingoistic as ever
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do i look puerto rican to you? that was first grade spanish littered in there and it was enough to send them running to the hills see objective's piece for how to really scare people away lol
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I know what it means. You called Netcees jingoistic, and you wear your homeland on your sleeve.
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Personally, I only speak American and take it as an affront if someone writes in those less successful languages.
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I'm fluent in autocorrect. It even "corrects" real words @Diode. Btw PR=planetrap all day
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I recall that change up being used a handful of times on PR, poorly might I add. Disappearances sounds kinda cool tbh
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Lars, on the other hand, is the complete opposite of everything I just said. He's more the mathematician. Cold, formulaic, open-ended. The Armchair bandit. Either way, I'm just a mid tier topicalist having a little rant. Both are part of the GOATs. |
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