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09-18-2015, 03:08 PM | #1 |
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So am I crazy or what? Did Dia bite this from one of y'alls veteran topical heads? I swear I read this before. Maybe I'm crazy, reminds me of Bags a bit tho..cos this is beyond dia
What Dia supposedly wrote (maybe he improved and I'm crazy, thought i'd ask tho):
I want to raise a glass to my jaded past. The hidden details, you'd be afraid to ask. you have to wait for when my face unmasked. why tho? when this whisky is made to last. I want to raise a glass, to the competition. I hope it catches on and becomes a repetition. and the weakness is cut.. like an incision. then we can control the cancer like remission. I want to break a glass, and shatter my ego. This season my selfishness was scattered by evil. I lost and felt fractured, that chapter was lethal. hurricanes brewing..this is what disaster will equal. I want to raise a glass.... to my last opponent. hour glass is running out and we passed the moment. then.. my pride was stolen like a felony in prison. I no longer wanted to raise a glass to melody's or rhythms. people telling me I need to let go of my jealousy and listen. so the echo's chemistry can glisten' now the extacy is wisdom. I'm presently a victim.. or I'm guessing the clarity is missing. time is running out for clemency..dreadfully, scarcity is ticking. burned bridges... how can I mend fences, my destiny is skipping. that's a remedy for zealously' admit it, respect for me? forbidden! hatred is distributed evenly..in memory where its sensibly omitted. but now its camouflaged, every opinion, was successfully augmented. I'm getting my closure when the bottle is empty.. this ending is closer. Next time I raise a glass to you.. it wont be before tipping it over. cheers!.. a message to the haters.. would end up being a letter to my self. Or I can read this passage from saviors.. it would be better for my health. but I'm stubborn.. I ripped the scripture in pieces, and severed it in stealth. I'll raise a glass in a burning inferno.. because I'm tethered to this hell. we need to look at the end game... that's where my soul stays unmatched. you're trying to fight a destiny, with a glitch and the whole games unpatched. no complaint just facts.. I got enough vibes to make the soul train collapse. because raising a glass, is just a random shoutout when no names attached. my ego is unstable, and my image is tainted cause I eat flesh from failures. when it comes to me.. don't raise a glass.. just learn to respect your elders |
09-18-2015, 03:13 PM | #2 |
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this sucks, the rhyme schemes are basic as fuck, the spelling is atrocious, the grammar is abysmal, and it has no structure or plot.
could just be dia. but yeah, he still probably bit it.
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09-18-2015, 03:28 PM | #3 |
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Nobody here would write that garbage.
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09-18-2015, 03:29 PM | #4 |
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09-18-2015, 03:31 PM | #5 |
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this isn't good. I hate to say sew, but stitch...
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09-18-2015, 03:32 PM | #6 |
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09-18-2015, 03:41 PM | #7 |
Wes Gil is a faggot
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09-18-2015, 08:09 PM | #9 |
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Stopped reading after seeing "raise a glass" for the second time
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09-18-2015, 08:38 PM | #10 |
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@Amen
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09-18-2015, 10:45 PM | #11 |
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Looks like a warthog piece
Terrible
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09-18-2015, 11:18 PM | #12 |
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if it's bitten, he bit someone who is at the beginning, awkward stage of elevation. it's really not as awful as everyone else is making it out to be, though. just full of mistakes that most people make en route to improving (clunky phrasing, meaningless rhymes to keep a scheme going, trite and cliched ideas, etc).
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09-19-2015, 01:56 AM | #13 |
...DA GAWD...
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No thats just prolly dia...
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09-19-2015, 05:32 AM | #14 |
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Codys a faggot too
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09-19-2015, 06:25 AM | #15 |
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So he raised his glass?
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09-19-2015, 08:19 AM | #17 |
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Snitches get stitches out here @Strikta
He gets zero respect from me Even if Dia did bite this, Cody still infinitely worse IMO for going out of his way to name and shame him I know you live by the G code too
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09-19-2015, 08:44 AM | #18 |
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