Level 4590

Mitch · 08-31-2013, 07:42 PM

Protoplasmic projection, levitation in the belly of leviathon,
zionist propoganda projects protested with polygon
powered powers by hyropawn
heads with astounding shadow prowling prowess,
pouncing inner battery pitter pattery poncho'd honchos.
My henchman hollow tip top positions with metallic malice
battle concession confederate degenerates with bracket bashers.
Malevolent Level six masters backed with black lash extensions
siege sea shores of sober sorbet slurpers. Prophetic hermetics
assemble telepathic masses to half mass the magistrates
violet ember emblems, unwrapping voilent voids of nebulic ebonic.

Geno · 08-31-2013, 08:11 PM

This was different not sure what to make of it yet. Rittled with vocab

The sub forum for "cypher section" is at the top of open mic. Check there to see if that answers ur question @Mitch

Wise Wiggles · 08-31-2013, 10:07 PM

nice. reminded me of Aesop rock kind of. You mentioned bracket basher, one of his tracks.. liked the alliterations also. pce

Allen Knight · 08-31-2013, 11:42 PM

I thought this was pretty nice tbh

Mike Wrecka · 09-01-2013, 12:46 PM

ya i liked this piece guy. would sound really sick spit. your structure wasnt complex but the vocab was. its hard to string together so many words without using conjuctions. good work. was a little abstract in content , more of a flex verse, would love to see what you could do on a topic or storytelling tip. check out our writing league it has two weeks left but you get plenty of feedback in there.

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=13242

check it out. good piece here.

08-31-2013, 07:42 PM	#1
Mitch Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 160 Rep Power: 2208348	Level 4590 Protoplasmic projection, levitation in the belly of leviathon, zionist propoganda projects protested with polygon powered powers by hyropawn heads with astounding shadow prowling prowess, pouncing inner battery pitter pattery poncho'd honchos. My henchman hollow tip top positions with metallic malice battle concession confederate degenerates with bracket bashers. Malevolent Level six masters backed with black lash extensions siege sea shores of sober sorbet slurpers. Prophetic hermetics assemble telepathic masses to half mass the magistrates violet ember emblems, unwrapping voilent voids of nebulic ebonic.

08-31-2013, 08:11 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	This was different not sure what to make of it yet. Rittled with vocab The sub forum for "cypher section" is at the top of open mic. Check there to see if that answers ur question @Mitch __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-31-2013, 10:07 PM	#3
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	nice. reminded me of Aesop rock kind of. You mentioned bracket basher, one of his tracks.. liked the alliterations also. pce __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

08-31-2013, 11:42 PM	#4
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	I thought this was pretty nice tbh __________________ C.O.B

09-01-2013, 12:46 PM	#5
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,523 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779335	ya i liked this piece guy. would sound really sick spit. your structure wasnt complex but the vocab was. its hard to string together so many words without using conjuctions. good work. was a little abstract in content , more of a flex verse, would love to see what you could do on a topic or storytelling tip. check out our writing league it has two weeks left but you get plenty of feedback in there. http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=13242 check it out. good piece here. __________________ A.bove T.he R.est