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Old 08-26-2013, 07:25 PM   #21
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Seeing as how it's not a difficult concept to grasp, yes, I understand. And I think you're a low-tier writer who probably circles his verses and draws stars around them. You should try italicizing, bolding, and centering your verse, and maybe underlining the lines you really like? That'd be extra deep, bro.
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Old 08-26-2013, 07:32 PM   #22
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Yes, well those sort of things tend to happen when nobody in your dead website league likes or respects you and thinks you're a baby back faggot of epic proportions. But I am used to it by now and thank you for your nice words.
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Old 08-26-2013, 07:37 PM   #23
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bolding, underlining and centering is for presentation purposes. I dont like it looking like a slew of jumbled words.
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Old 08-26-2013, 07:38 PM   #24
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bolding, underlining and centering is for presentation purposes. I dont like it looking like a slew of jumbled words.
Nah, it's just pretentious look at me faggotry.

MY JOB IS NOT TO DESCRIBE MY 'STYLE' TO YOU, YOU FOOL. THAT'S YOUR JOB. I HAVE PLENTY OPEN MIKIES UP TO READ. TRY EM ON FOR SIZE FAIRY
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Old 08-26-2013, 07:55 PM   #25
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Just read your example piece.

Wow.

I have to be an overly verbose retard with a 16 year old's emo faux-suicide glamorization.

GREAT
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oh shit @Defy Gravity , you gonna let him get away with that ?
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Mike you need to pipe down right now. I'm already plotting your championship loss.

It involves Greece.
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Old 08-26-2013, 08:27 PM   #28
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should I entertain this moron? write your verse & stfu
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Old 08-26-2013, 08:39 PM   #29
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This is what you get when you say ...write a piece from the heart. since I'm heartless I wrote a Suicide piece.


LOL anyone who writes a sentence THAT pretentious with THAT ellipsis trying to be THAT dark and THAT brooding is a tremendous idiot.
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SEE @Adonis... THIS IS WHY YOU DON'T SAY SHIT LIKE THIS, BECAUSE THEN YOU END UP WRITING A VERSE ABOUT AN ANT AND LOSING AND LOOKING LIKE AN IDIOT


Like an idiot?

First slow your roll with that shit bro, coming at me sideways aint a good look

2nd, I wrote a very good verse, and to me it was a story, the life of a ANT

Creative and difficult, everything had meaning in there.

But out right calling me a Idiot won't help your cause. I'm actually in a good mood and don't mind it, but going around saying shit will ONLY CAUSE ME TO MAKE A MILLION POSTS STRAIGHT CLOWNING YOU UNTIL YOU implode...promise

play nice and STFU, new week. I don't fret losses.

You wrote a verse where you didn't end the sentence, and half the answers didn't rhyme

see now i'm getting heated. Calma son.
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Old 08-26-2013, 09:12 PM   #31
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Peanut Grease's verse was better, though.
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Good luck this week everyone. Props @Defy Gravity for your verse last week, I didn't know what to do and went for a concept that I couldn't fulfill, hah, but you definitely did the task justice, big ups on that shit.
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Formal Logic takes pride in thinking inside the box.

PiE writes rap about math.

Nigma only has rhymes.

Adonis never has rhymes.

Pinot Grij thinks he's funny.

The Artful Salopian has the worst name ever.

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Aesthetic is new.

Mike Wrecka probably knows the challenges ahead of time.

Plot beat Dagel.

Mr. J writes every verse the same.

Pryde spelled his name with a Y like we're on RapBattles in 2002.

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I've talked shit/created beef with my opponent three consecutive weeks. I feel like I'm taking crazy pills.
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I beat plot does that make me better than Dagel?

Also @PancakeBrah I know beef inspires competition but I ain't feeling the imitation topic..


@Innovator I'd rather be fucking some bad bitches than smoking
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Pryde spelled his name with a Y like we're on RapBattles in 2002.
leaned lmaoooo

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