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06-13-2015, 12:26 AM | #22 | |
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I'm almost done. I dont know when you're closing matches but...Dont...
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06-13-2015, 09:19 PM | #23 |
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I voted on errything ya bish...lets get the ball rolling and give me another topic
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06-13-2015, 10:30 PM | #24 |
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Thanks. Voting ends tomorrow night. Battles go up tomorrow night.
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06-13-2015, 11:03 PM | #25 |
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I'll try to vote tomorrow, but Monday would be much easier for me, personally.
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06-14-2015, 12:23 AM | #27 |
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No Zen in the mag? :(
Cool stuff though, Vulgar. Props for picking up on the topical side of things. |
06-14-2015, 03:13 AM | #28 |
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Thanks for closing, the parting verbiage was a tad unnecessary though.
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06-14-2015, 04:06 AM | #29 |
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You're deletion and Eminem comments were an insult to the time and effort I put in to judging the battle. I feel like you deserved parting verbiage. Granted, Certain's was far harsher than I would ever imagine. But you kind of asked for it. Lol.
I noticed some slick rhymes&rhythm in your verse, but it was schizophrenic. In other words, if you had consistently showed a "pattern of the unorthodox"..it would have been dope, and may have won. But "the unorthodox" was scatter-shot; a let-down after I saw a really cool flow followed by something that simply didn't rhyme. I know firsthand the feeling of perhaps "others" not "seeing the pattern" or feeling the flow, etc. Your only recourse is to change the way it is displayed on the page or record it. These things have nothing to do with Eminem's style, or whether the people who judged like Eminem or not. |
06-14-2015, 12:55 PM | #30 |
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if i saw "structured traditionally"
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06-14-2015, 02:19 PM | #31 |
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I voted for Genocide (who Had a more traditionally structured verse). Not BECAUSE he had the more traditionally structured.
Coincidentally it was only afterwards that I read Vulgar's mag synopsis in which he guessed as much as to how you both would approach it with different styles. I was trying to tell you your non-traditional structure was cool in a lot of places, but not in all the places. I am very open to non-traditional structuring but I still like to see rhymes throughout, because it's rap. |
06-14-2015, 03:10 PM | #32 |
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lmao what happened to rakontur/Adonis?
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06-14-2015, 08:53 PM | #33 |
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Since when doesn't this shit have to rhyme?
It's always rhymed....that's a huge part of the very specific type of writing we do.
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06-14-2015, 08:53 PM | #34 |
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06-14-2015, 10:34 PM | #35 |
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Stupid fucking fox.runied.everything! Pm me. I'm gonna fuck u.
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06-14-2015, 10:49 PM | #36 |
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if ya'll think I can't be unbiased, I wont vote. If you see I simply wanted ALL THE WAY out (due to realizing this isn't at all what I signed up for), then please accept that I will vote fairly.
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06-15-2015, 03:20 AM | #37 |
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damn I wouldve penned something real quick. Been MIA for a bit
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06-15-2015, 08:36 AM | #38 |
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PM'd.
I await promised intercourse with the childlike excitement of a giddy schoolgirl. *giggles*
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06-15-2015, 08:37 AM | #39 |
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I am sure nobody will stop you voting.
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06-15-2015, 08:50 AM | #40 |
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I'd prefer it if you didn't vote on my battles. Thanks.
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