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Old 06-13-2015, 12:12 AM   #21
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I actually find out tuesday whether or not I need surgery, hoping I get it cause I got vertigo pretty bad and the floor of one eye is broken so it's literally a couple millimeters lower then other, nobody else but I can notice but it bugs
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Old 06-13-2015, 12:26 AM   #22
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I'm almost done. I dont know when you're closing matches but...Dont...
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Old 06-13-2015, 09:19 PM   #23
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I voted on errything ya bish...lets get the ball rolling and give me another topic
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Old 06-13-2015, 10:30 PM   #24
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Thanks. Voting ends tomorrow night. Battles go up tomorrow night.
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Old 06-13-2015, 11:03 PM   #25
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I'll try to vote tomorrow, but Monday would be much easier for me, personally.
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Old 06-14-2015, 12:11 AM   #26
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Old 06-14-2015, 12:23 AM   #27
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No Zen in the mag? :(

Cool stuff though, Vulgar. Props for picking up on the topical side of things.
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Old 06-14-2015, 03:13 AM   #28
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Thanks for closing, the parting verbiage was a tad unnecessary though.
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Old 06-14-2015, 04:06 AM   #29
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You're deletion and Eminem comments were an insult to the time and effort I put in to judging the battle. I feel like you deserved parting verbiage. Granted, Certain's was far harsher than I would ever imagine. But you kind of asked for it. Lol.

I noticed some slick rhymes&rhythm in your verse, but it was schizophrenic.
In other words, if you had consistently showed a "pattern of the unorthodox"..it would have been dope, and may have won. But "the unorthodox" was scatter-shot; a let-down after I saw a really cool flow followed by something that simply didn't rhyme.

I know firsthand the feeling of perhaps "others" not "seeing the pattern" or feeling the flow, etc. Your only recourse is to change the way it is displayed on the page or record it. These things have nothing to do with Eminem's style, or whether the people who judged like Eminem or not.
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Old 06-14-2015, 12:55 PM   #30
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if i saw "structured traditionally"

I dont sign up.
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Old 06-14-2015, 02:19 PM   #31
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I voted for Genocide (who Had a more traditionally structured verse). Not BECAUSE he had the more traditionally structured.

Coincidentally it was only afterwards that I read Vulgar's mag synopsis in which he guessed as much as to how you both would approach it with different styles.

I was trying to tell you your non-traditional structure was cool in a lot of places, but not in all the places. I am very open to non-traditional structuring but I still like to see rhymes throughout, because it's rap.
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Old 06-14-2015, 03:10 PM   #32
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lmao what happened to rakontur/Adonis?
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Old 06-14-2015, 08:53 PM   #33
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Since when doesn't this shit have to rhyme?

It's always rhymed....that's a huge part of the very specific type of writing we do.
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Old 06-14-2015, 08:53 PM   #34
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Sorry for the no show btw.

Props @MMLP for your verse.

G/l with the rest of this.
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Old 06-14-2015, 10:34 PM   #35
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Stupid fucking fox.runied.everything! Pm me. I'm gonna fuck u.
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if ya'll think I can't be unbiased, I wont vote. If you see I simply wanted ALL THE WAY out (due to realizing this isn't at all what I signed up for), then please accept that I will vote fairly.

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Old 06-15-2015, 03:20 AM   #37
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damn I wouldve penned something real quick. Been MIA for a bit

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I am sure nobody will stop you voting.
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I'd prefer it if you didn't vote on my battles. Thanks.
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