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Old 01-31-2018, 11:28 AM   #1
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I was a country boy; barefoot; running through the countryside.
Smile on my face, ’cause it was all about the fun in life.
Happy-go-lucky; plucky. Had his own puppy. Buddies
with the next door neighbors. A Rockwell painting
of a couple friends attached to the jungle gym out back.
Summers spent like Huckle Finn. For months on end we’d have
daily games of H-O-R-S-E on a faded, aging court.
Play-by-play reports by the players playing. Scores
kept in your head… The rain delayed no sport.
Tire-swings tied to trees where forts resided. These were norms
provided me. July; we’d treat the fourth to Hide-and-Seek and S’mores.
… lord. My wildest dreams couldn’t rival Springs I had before...

we moved to…

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Old 01-31-2018, 12:32 PM   #2
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Ill. Nice Gaussian blur.
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Old 02-02-2018, 10:33 AM   #5
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Old 02-03-2018, 01:07 PM   #6
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Old 02-03-2018, 01:07 PM   #7
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Reminded me of "now is the hour"

It's a good book. Kinda strange. But good
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I got a sling blade vibe from it.. good imagery though !
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Nice onslaught of imagery. Fascinating read.
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so dope.
left me hanging, wish it was longer
can read this style forever, loved it

made me happy and sad within seconds of each other lol good shit , so glad to see you're still here
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succinct. flowed organically with impressive imagery.
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