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XI WK VI: Quill (1-1) vs. brokenhal0 (2-3) (BROKENHAL0 WINS)
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01-29-2023, 12:32 AM | #2 |
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With heart strings pulling like carriage and pony's daylight sunglasses cover the pupils of complicated stories tabloid pages written by these shameless phony's entertained by knowing that you don't know me there's a little bit of truth in all these verses homey. She lives in it to take pictures with her kids in it snippets of her playing the front row she bust it wide for knicks tickets realistic athleticism appears less than a caricature of a stick figure but she eats less just to think bigger. what grasp attention quicker then fatter asses she told me I was just another trick pulling rabbits out the hat in her magic classes her chauffeur opens the door, fans and paparazzi scattered flashes.. I told her baby this industry could be rather savage better yet I walked her through the rappers passage she said your nothing but a ''Munch'' hal0...your stats are average I replied sure baby whatever tickles your tonsils backwards after she let me hit I got blocked the next day like that matters,no shame in her game the low lights of a well known low paid actress. While she tends to share her wealth with you,you tend to care the tender moments spared that she builds a hell with you ... I love you dearly, but I don't want to melt with you ... As threats of pain throw off your character in a fit of rage shes throwing my wardrobe down the banister the actions of malice seem practiced rather than genuine cruel yet crucial that's how you factor in the settlements when a man loves a woman in a matter of months mold can enter in dispose of such poisonous fruits those spores ain't renderin a metaphor before you met her for the medicine divorce courts now you lost dog here's a plaque the biggest award for another dickless veteran ... For those who find love outside themselves it's rather excellent but shes gets men wrapped around her most evident depression spin flirtatious suburban diva excellence a strapless dress with no bra keep trying harder mothers milk ain't manipulating my metaverse im drinking avion mixed with devil springs in a grey Nissan driving through Bensonhurst.. She can't see in the dark but she can feel me Helen Keller take a stab at your bleeding heart Heltah Skeltah if us sharing (Sharron) tainted (Tate) the star of rosemary's baby Man Women & Child another broken family that was not so lazy. She worked hard for it all,looking at the stars cherishing the merits inherited realism and grace,yet with all the sex she couldn't be a parent her mother said what a disgrace then brought her a coat made out of ferrets the meaning to this is everything has it's place and the truth is often disparaged through gifts given from all the glitz and the glamours still can't fill the void which is unconditionally cherished she sung a song of gloom for every womb that was damaged if the miracle of birth owned a label who would it manage... She looked so peaceful decomposing in that compost heap electric tape wrapped around her feet so tight it stretched her ankles Hotel California plays through a distant window news cameras roll over scented candles excellent powder tested samples Im just expelling out the vomit for the next example.. In the bath tub sinking into the abyssal depths shallow breathing pulp fiction how it occurred to her friends naloxone shots made her heart beat again naked on the bathroom floor waking up screaming and vomiting bathwater purple and heaving shit a part of her was still intoxicated receiving visions of the wildest dreaming beyond the land of oz getting her directions on cut! , attention whores for only a second she started to question...who the real directors are? a short glimpse behind the scenes in the land of stars only good grows as wood can , she was so scandalous on set reading hers scripts , taking pride in embarrassing a good man. Life imitates artist so god bless a goddess in a chiffon dress dominating red carpets walking mezzanines charming in the arms of piranhas rocking Balenciaga's in Medellin she got you sweating under the collar hook lined let em bleed. Expressing whatever weakness remains left I love eating pussy but don't taste death is life any better after sparing your soul just for safe sex I separated it all and now the world below the valley of the dolls weighs less she's far away and remains next ...Whats up!! Images of Russian tea rooms a blonde mistress crying red tears dripping on a white napkin her midnight kisses felt crystal clear the movie writes itself do you remember your the director beyond the stars she wants to help you untie your belt. I Who plea maybe's just to please lady's nah not me lately far out of reach Pleiades,she's like a sister to me and it's sick how unreasonable some of these bitches could be something about her beauty shines differently The challenge is to adjust rather then dance with death her own thoughts are her rivals off screen,dancer steps desensitizing the one man who runs hundreds of stations at the sideshows the subject at hand will open up cloudy eyes though so you either smile or frown when the bright lights glow. Looking at the stars cherishing her merits she inherited realism and grace would have made American Idol by looking at her tapes Looking at the stars cherishing the merits I've inherited realism and grace would have made America Idol if that was the case. Last edited by brokenhal0; 01-29-2023 at 09:40 AM. Reason: BrOKeNHaL0: To AdD ViDeo DeLEte S FrOm HtTpS |
01-29-2023, 09:26 AM | #3 |
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01-29-2023, 09:38 PM | #4 |
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This is dope as hell
I see some slick lines flows super tight |
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