05-21-2020, 02:55 AM | #1 |
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Exis ft. Johnny 6 feet - Devils Advocates...
Ayo,
I'm a child of the corn, Who's glorious writtens stand out in rap form Red rose with black thorns, The shinin' armour & sword all came along Movin' on, Put on earth before birth & church said, "You're the first' Stop the omens curse, Carry his carcass back home in a hearse It's us versus them on a verse, As skeleton daggers stuck up from the dirt Prove to you what words are worth, We disconnect necks from they shirts The stories kinda private, But I heard that both can turn water into cider Fightin' dragons from the Bible On the Great wall of China, with a lighter Half man, half God's technique Have about as much sense as he's got physique & his tone of speech, Is the reason women wear they cleaveges deep I'm a mic athlete, You peons can't even connect on bare feet Obey my sword tip, When your cords lit & your mic dropped in the moshpit With science & panzers in your closets, But it's Rawness from the claw fist Witty & clever tips, That's Biblical like writtens in Sanskrit It's like your assholes stitched since you can't do shit Don't bother with this, I use styles & modern patterns Write rhymin' letters, Shinin' a light like Green Lanterns My two cents & truckloads of ideas in my think tanks Teach kids Mickey's a big fag & Disney's the ballbags "How racist, he's all black!" Shut the fuck up, now y'all mad Like black creatures on PSP screens with eaten features It's just a pixel, Fetus & people really are talkin' feces No needs for a hypothesis, Go & see the black Jesus He'll Butt your Head talk & act like Beavis Rise like yeast, I possess intellect yet still a street beast I'm knee deep & this jail bed makes me need sleep Use multiple schemes to confirm rights of free speech & if you hear & read this, You've reached the fifth style switch I write Biblicals & can flip scripts to multi syllables Spread Hip Hop's vitamins & minerals, add some Tyllenol For the buzz & kill 'em all, Let's clear the field to minimal. You want to summon my attention? Then paint the pentagram 'What's the point?' There's 5 stupid! Come and get these legend's hands! Regressive, insecure, witness the full reversal 6'll stay aggressive while they're trapped in a circle Regret their birth too, I play Ouija boards for laughs Call your grandma's ghost a bitch, leave her in that portal, trapped I hit backflips with my pen, trying to reach those greater heights Made a collect call to hell to ask Satan for advice "Turn the rocks into bread, turn the sand into water Lead followers to the dessert like lambs to the slaughter For forty days and forty nights sit in deep meditation Slip into a trance stronger than sleep medication". |
05-23-2020, 02:42 PM | #2 |
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First verse, you found the right balance between simplistic and too heavy. I aim to do the same when Im writing so the format
here works for me. Otherwize pretty effortless free flowing without going overboard with anything. The thematics and vocab you play with here indicate that you are a man of culture, like myself. Overall nice and easy read, would read again if you dropped something similar. That's Biblical like writtens in Sanskrit It's like your assholes stitched since you can't do shit Second, I dug the opener line. Overall the verse had the right amount of sinister to it, comes off technically soundand fitted the theme. A bit short compared to other perhaps but I guess you said your piece with less bars. Regret their birth too, I play Ouija boards for laughs Call your grandma's ghost a bitch, leave her in that portal, trapped |
05-31-2020, 10:35 PM | #3 |
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Gracias bro...My bad, didn't say who's verse first & shit, just assumed every nigga here knew my wack style...Johnny went second.
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