AOWL SEASON 3 MAGAZINE — EDITION 1 — SEASON PREVIEW

[Mael]

I actually posted this in the wrong thread.

Excellent mag, @Certain. Yet again, I'm left speechless by your analytical skills. You did make a few typos and little mistakes here and there, however.

Since you asked;

Originally Posted by Certain

His style isn't so much unique as it is an almalgam of many other greater writers' styles.

*Amalgam - you added an extra 'l' before the first 'm'.

Originally Posted by Certain

He also doesn't not have an elite grip on mechanics, so he will be outrhymed.

Does not or doesn't. The extra 'not' (with it's contracted form) need not apply.

Originally Posted by Certain

And he has a bad trolling habit that sometimes gets in the way of his other pusuits here.

*Pursuits - forgot the 'r' after the first 'u'.

Originally Posted by Certain

Those subte allusions can get to the point where they are indecipherable for readers, alienating his voters.

*Subtle - forgot the 'l' after the 't'.

Originally Posted by Certain

Also, he needs to stop over-formating his text.

*Formatting - forgot to add the extra 't'.

Originally Posted by Certain

His grip on combining rhyme schemes and orginal and interesting diction is hard to come across, and he is a true title contender as a result.

*Original - forgot the 'i' after 'r'.

Originally Posted by Certain

He loses battles because of unapproachbility every once in a while, even as good as he has become at dealing with that issue.

*Unapproachability - forgot the 'a' after the 'h'.

Originally Posted by Certain

He's sloppy, though, and oats is better than him at pretty much ever aspect of this discipline.

*Every

Originally Posted by Certain

Verb's best bet would be to play it tigher and go for the error-free approach.

*Tighter(?) - forgot the 't' after the 'h'.

Originally Posted by Certain

Lets keep it moving forward.

Should be the contracted form of let us; let's. Nothing is being permitted.

Originally Posted by Certain

Of course, I don’t speak spanish, so to me it’s just one emotionally heavy conversation followed by another in different rooms.

The 's' in Spanish should be capitalized.

Originally Posted by Certain

He's one of my favorites for his straightahead style, possessing a firm grasp of mechanics and a narrative style that makes his stories easy to read.

We both know you forgot to add the dash.

[Zen]

Great mag. Seriously makes me wish I stayed in.

[Certain]

Thank you, @Mael. I'll correct the ones in my parts. I didn't proofread this at all.

[Mael]

No worries, @Certain. Great mag, nonetheless.

[Certain]

It's of no surprise to me that all but one of the errors came in the writer capsules, which I wrote Thursday night while exhausted.

[Mael]

I'd suggest Microsoft Word with it's spell check system. As Zenland said, I wish I had signed up after reading the breakdowns. I might when I have more time to write.

[sacrifice]

Superb. Simply superb.

[Split]

listening to Certains breakdown now. was fully expecting him to sound less like the khan academy guy and more like Montez from Workaholics

excited for story leads

PMing topic ideas late tomorrow

lmao@ Frank-proof

[Certain]

Originally Posted by Split Eight

listening to Certains breakdown now. was fully expecting him to sound less like the khan academy guy and more like Montez from Workaholics

excited for story leads

PMing topic ideas late tomorrow

lmao@ Frank-proof

I'll be more animated next time.

[Diode]

Originally Posted by Mael

I'd suggest Microsoft Word with it's spell check system. As Zenland said, I wish I had signed up after reading the breakdowns. I might when I have more time to write.

its

[dead man]

Certain idk how I missed your audio commentary before but it was pretty awesome truth be told. Had me cracking up throughout and you did a really good job with your list of most underrated. I would agree with many of those you chose.

Entire magazine was gold from oats and vulgs thoughtful discussion to the profiles to the predictions. If this is the quality we are to expect then I have no doubt that this will be the most successful AOWL yet.

Salute

[Certain]

As a matter of saving my time and rewarding the non-procrastinators, I'm going to be giving more detailed breakdowns of verses that don't require extensions every week in the magazine. If you post by Thursday, you'll get about twice as much feed as if you require until Friday.

[sacrifice]

Originally Posted by Certain

As a matter of saving my time and rewarding the non-procrastinators, I'm going to be giving more detailed breakdowns of verses that don't require extensions every week in the magazine. If you post by Thursday, you'll get about twice as much feed as if you require until Friday.

That's unfortunate, but understandable.

I had my verse about 50% done by Thursday, but life got in the way (3 year old child, preparing to move to Florida next month, etc... I couldn't pass a league like this up, so I'll cut my losses).

I'll post by thursday from now on.

[e11even]

I had to do a last minute rewrite after a family outing. I'm in though.

[Diode]

@Certain can you please let me edit this one line

but he'll never find vengeance being relentless to a man that's plateaued

remove the but?

also the line preceding it should say it's instead of it' (obv)

didnt want to take a chance my clock was a min diff from the server

[Certain]

Done.

[Frank]

You're the man^

[Diode]

Originally Posted by Frank

You're the man^

this

[Adonis]

Originally Posted by Vividlyvague

I had to do a last minute rewrite after a family outing. I'm in though.

I don't like the new AV, makes me feel like I'm talking to Mr. J

[e11even]

If it's of any consolation, I'm actually in the process of changing it. But every one means something so I'm meticulous about my profile changes. Sorta.