02-27-2018, 10:51 PM | #1 |
White Earl
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FTW
I mean..
Whys a old G like Gen gotta suffer though, ive always had a hunger jones I just never really had a place to call a fuckin home.. It was never hard to go to school and learn some new shit Its just hard to give a fuck, when you go home to some bullshit Alcoholic father, an experiment to a step mom Who cared more about her own rep, less about my head problems Bounced around early, on the move since a scrap To much anxiety to fit in groups, how stupid is at I hit my adult age, and i hit the bricks to I been on my own ever since i learned to ditch school Now im tryina a do right, tryina start a new life Fightin with the good and bad angels, tryina choose sides Cuttin this short.. Geno
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02-28-2018, 11:12 AM | #2 |
death to amen
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2trip done opened a door for a style atm lol
that head problems shit was real tho. n the ditched school. I fucks wit that |
02-28-2018, 04:39 PM | #3 |
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Really liked the flow in this. Also, some relatable content (to a certain degree) which I'm really appreciative of. The beginning and mid section were the highlights to me but I definitely liked the slightly positive/optimistic tone you ended this on as well. Wish it was longer, though.
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03-04-2018, 09:33 PM | #4 |
rhyme capsule.
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geno, you're dope, i think your pengame is nice and you've got skills when it comes to spitting a verse, even if you're white (jk). i feel like, when i read your writing, though, i've read the same sort of verse from you a dozen times before. i'm always playing with language when i write so maybe it's unfair of me to criticize your admittedly polished style, but no shade thrown - just saying it how i see it. if a writer develops something of an obvious formula and continues to write in that style, it doesn't excite me.
all that said, this was tight and i vibed with it (more than i'd care to admit). good shit. |
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