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Old 03-19-2019, 09:04 PM   #1
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His top notch wordplay and remarkable creativity has earned him a spot in the Hall of Fame.
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@Dominate I want you to obliterate this mongrel known as blue bayou. Show no mercy gouge the eyes rake his face. Scuff up his most expensive italian leather dress shoes and draw dicks on his ties. You are the dingo warrior! The kangaroo danger dude the koala pimp father.
@Blue Bayou kick him in the Brisbane! Dont let the mod squad down! Make him suffer worse then friends watching you golf! You got this destroy this bludger with his own Billy on the outback yea? Give this a dardy ending for a few coldies among us mates yea?

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The kangaroo danger dude, Dominate, is a mainstay for a reason. His style is just universally enjoyable. Dom's verses tend to have something for everyone and he's no stranger to wordplay and gunbars. He's the type of battler who can take 4 years off but still know exactly what's dope today.

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Blue has to be one of the nicest with wordplay I've ever seen. After too many years modding text leagues, Blue is one of few who can really surprise me with wordplay. He's an expert with misdirection and humor and is one of the few battlers you see talking about their audience. He's recently decided to develop a NC specific style and is giving it one hell of a test vs Dominate.


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i’ll wet ya noodle Res. You never gave me a beast impression
i only consider you Pho cuz you’re a Tiny Asian Herb i can eat in seconds
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Pho: a type of Vietnamese soup, typically made from beef stock and spices to which noodles and thinly sliced beef or chicken are added.
Blue Bayou…

^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines
Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse
Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes
I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals
Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math
The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste
I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp
& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus




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You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever
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Blue Bayou vs. Meks - 2007!!
No bitch'll ever look your way, stop lying or your in for a beating
Sure you cauterize… the wounds I gave ya, trying to stop the bleeding.

are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean…
.
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sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree
wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees
real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.
for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy
Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy
stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover
bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man
he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years
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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines
dece start
Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse
the personal is fire, i also pointed the same things out but dickriders just overlooked it or didn't care loool, cool bar
Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes
simple but cool
I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals
ok this concept even with the opener is just absurd. it's funny but this just stupid lmfao, obviously it works but wtf
Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math
fucking dope, ur best bar thus far
The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste
jesusssss christ, so sick
I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp
FUCKING DOPEEEEEEEEEE
& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus
cool, but underwhelming based on the 3 heaters i just read b4 it

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sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree
niceee
wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees
i hate sports bars but obviously it works and it's good
real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.
once again, ok.. it works and it's fine
for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy
sick wp and cool tie in, ur best bar thus far
Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy
this is cool but the personal is very untrue to my knowledge as the guy is literally a robot, but the bar is cool putting that aside
stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover
cool
bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man
is he actually a teacher? must be a personal so i'lll just assume it works. it's cool.
he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years
simple but it's cool imo

Honestly, a dope battle as expected. That being said, they both had almost no real actual misses so it just comes down to the wow factor for me. Dom had like 3 bars in a row near the middle/end of his verse that were just fucking absurddd and for that he just wins. Like I said, both verses were pure heat but dom just had more of those 10/10 bangers. Dope stuff and I could see peoples preferences having this battle go either way, that's just mine personally.

V/ Dom the robot.
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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines
nah not feelin
Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse
alright
Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes
decent
I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals
lol ok at best
Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math
this was nice
The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste
pretty cool here
I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp
at first I was like nah that’s played but after a second read I think it’s a nice flip
& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus
solid closer


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sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree
alright
wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees
lmao nice
real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.
decent, you’re OD’ing on aero wordplay again
for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy
pretty cool
Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy
nah
stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover
hmm ok
bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man
what? No
he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years
this is ok


Close battle here, dom started off slow for me but his last 4 were all good back to back. Blue was good too but had less bars that I really liked.


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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines

Ok opener

Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse

Decent, the execution was kinda light

Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes

This was nice, I like this

I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals

Lol funny

Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math

Fiya hit

The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste

Wooo, lol haymaker

I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp

Good flip I like this too

& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus

Nice closer


Good shit Dom

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sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree

Fiya opener

wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees

Nice

real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.

Ehh, decent at best for me

for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy

Good hit with this one

Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy

Ok at best. Kinda felt it was a light jab

stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover

This was nice

bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man

This was badly worded I think, I got where u was going just the wording kinda made it lack. Still ok tho

he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years

Nice finish on the closeout

Good shit Blue



Yo props to both on this dope ass read here. Ok Dom started off slow with his opener , but man as the verse read through he heated nothing, but up. That wordplay off catering made that bar lotb for me. Blue verse started off with heat, but through out Blue was in & out with the consistency. He had some good hits as well with the "God to the guy" bar being my fav. Overall nothin bad to say about either good ass read, I just got Dom here for being more consistent and his verse overall hit harsher then BB.

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Blue Bayou…

^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines

Ok jab, knowing you? this could've been harsher. But i like the tone of it regardless.


Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse

Blue just got Fact checked, I like the play on Culling/Cullinary. He just shit in your cheerios and left urine swirls in it, bitch.

Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes

Dang, this was right at the neck. Good tying it all together thats some slick stuff

I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals

LOL using blues gay jokes on him. There we go you styling on him bro.

Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math

this like my amino acid bar, i like nerdy stuff. This was cool, it didn't cave his head in. But it was clear land in my eyes

The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste

Fire K to ring/Catering awesome work

I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp

Fire, i liked this one alot. Its my favorite line in your verse

& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus

ADHD bar i like it, well done using right medicine for the diagnosis dr. Dingo warrior


Can Blue Bayou Whoop the Kangaroo Danger dude? We'll see

are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean…
.
.

sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree

Nice, well played you kick him in the face man.

wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees

Ok this was cool, slick how you approached it

real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.

I love that you did a boxing line. But this could've been way better.

for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy

I liked this one, think you could've made the punch harsher. Came of swag & flowish imo

Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy

This one i wasn't digging so much.

stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover

Cool, this one was a good shot. It feels like Verbal Charades with your plays sometimes haha.

bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man

Yikes sounds painful, this a nice lil personal.

he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years[/QUOTE]

Cool jab, nothing throat crushing. But i liked it well enough.

So Blue bayou gets what he deserves from rescinding his ON me for beers offer. God doesn't like it when you tease people who thirst for the nectar of life! Nah i joke i do think dom had the harder shots and less misses. These two need a rematch becase i enjoy them both as writers. I just think today was Dom's day he had better execution then Blue. These two will always be 50/50 in ym eyes just like blue vs resin. It just depends on who has the juices flowing.

v/ The Australian Alien, The kangaroo Danger dude
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I didn't like alliterating. Maybe I'm missing something there but other than a litter 8 its odd to me? Lol. Cullin erry was good wording. I liked mongolian landscapes. I wasn't feeling doohickeys too much but i'd not seen that before so it was kinda fresh to me. I didn't get numbers UP. Catering / K to ring was cool. Lady in The Tramp i've seen Alien do before, just not with muzzles. I didn't think much of the closer, it needed wording more harshly IMO

BB: Law Degree was worded dope, didnt get the Yankees line, Mickey G was just okay, deify i liked tbh, Crikey Guy i didnt get at all, popsockets I missed too tbh, break it off inside u was dope, funny iffy drops was cool

Good battle, some dope shit, some that completely went over my head on both sides, enjoyable reads from both though

I think I have BB taking it with like 1 bar more I enjoyed though. There's not a great deal in it between you. Good battle guys
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Blue Bayou…

^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines
Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse
-damn what a line
Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes
-ok
I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals
-lol kinda silly
Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math
-has this never been done wtf dope
The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste
-ok
I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp
-fire
& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus
-finisher was underwhelming



are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean…

sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree
-decent
wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees
-fire
real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.
-ok obscure
for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy
-cool
Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy
-i can't quote this rip you called him the crikey guy like he's not Steve fucking Irwin
stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover
-a lot going on here but ok
bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man
-bit of a stretch the finisher was disconnected it felt
he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years
-ok I like it.[/QUOTE]

Blue had a great verse but Dom really unloaded here it was like nothing but solid wordplays, beat him at their game you could say.

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alliteratin was ok
culling is good, wording was harsh
steppe was comedic
doohickeys is corny but funny
round up was simple but solid
k to ring was nastyy
lady and the tramp/ noodle bars i’ve heard before
same with ridalin

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law degree is a good start
aer’n judge was nice, liked it
mikey g, another aero mention tho, wasnt feelin
deity was nice, nasty wording
crikey guy lol it’s aight
cover was aight, ligh
student was okay
fucked with the closer


enjoyed this battle bros.. both had some heat in there.. catering and deity lines were dammnn good .. i got dom tho with just one more quote to separate it..

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Blue Bayou…

^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines

A litter ate in...a liter 8 him...a liter 8 in .... A little asian.... OH SNAP must had this saved from the aero battle

Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse

Cullin Erry was the greatest 3rd basemen in AA history. HYUGEN.

Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes

Mon goaling. I fuck w this. It's like a Jamaican goal keeper. Mon. There's no at the end of step...or extra p....and who's res...fire bar

I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals

This nigga Dom turned out to be Ariel from little mermaid? (Heh said nigga cuz I'm suth)

Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math

AND THEN U DO THE ALGEBRA...CUZ U IN THE SEA....W FLOUNDER...IN THE ALGAE BRA...fucking got a mermaid tale looking bull

The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste

This like that slap chop thing right? And that come head bill mays sells it SLAP CHOP AN ONION...SLAP CHOP UR MOTHERS ARM WHO GIVES A FUCK CHOP IT ALL....that's be perfect to bring to a catering job. Amazing flip.

I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp

More Disney stuff? Who touched u Dom ?

& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus

At first I was like ehhh....but then realized that blue is actually the Riddler in real life.....crucial personal




Blue Bayou







are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean…

He's probably pretty sure
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sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree

Nah dude...he's a teacher....r u fucking retarded?

wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees

Wtf is this!? Suth takes a knee during the national anthem....don't fucking talk about Yankees.

real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.

Yah trollin me huh....this was a Walt Disney theme battle?

for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy

Fuck u care if he gave u an A+ for he's a fucking Lawyer u moron

Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy

Suth specifically asked me to make sure u we're aware the two of you are no longer cool after this bar. Wtf.

stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover

ILL ANDROID UR CHARGER WITH THE CORD CASE ENLARGER BATTERY UR TOUCH SCREEN WITH AN ADAPTER AND STARTER. shut it the fuck up blue.

bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man

Nah yaknow this was actually CRAZY.... Probably alot of students actually enter Dom's body and break up with their respective partners... EXCEPT THAT HES A FUCKING DOCTOR U FUCKING MONGOLIAN LANDSCAPE

he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years

suth hated this. Like he was actually angry.


Well looks like suth had Dom pretty clearly here..... Well he pmd domnamicz .... I'm sure he meant Dom. HEH SHOULD BE FINE.

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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines

Good wordplay, wording is a bit off for you..
I seen a litter w/p by spit right before i read it the first time, this was cool tho

Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse

cull... creative but not a word most people use ha, it still hit tho w/ the personal..

Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes

This hit

I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals

Lol a bit corny but worked

Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math

Don't think ivev seen this, good one

The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste

Ok, catering was good wp but flip was alright nothing wild to me..

I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp

muzzle part made this good here

& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus

Ehh ok ender



are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean…

sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree

creative opener..

wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees

This was cool too.. took me a sec

real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.

Ok reference looked up but not true to me tbh.. ok

for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy

worded well... good nothing else to say here

Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy

Lol i liked the concept but broken part was iffy to me

stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover

Not a fan of this one

bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man

hmmm its alright a bit too specific.. inside u

he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years

ok, phlymo did this way back it's ok/decent

Blue started off good but seemed like he tried to reach for personal angles esp towards the end but he certainly had hitters.. first two.. deify etc.. Dom kept it consistent here even w/ the gunbars.. they were still direct & good tho usually I'll take a personal flipped creatively over it.. but Blue didn't really hit w/ me there imo not sure why i think the bars had alot going on but the concepts as a whole werent registering w/ me as damn..dope'.. Dom did that a lil better i thought this go round..

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