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Dominate: The kangaroo danger dude, Dominate, is a mainstay for a reason. His style is just universally enjoyable. Dom's verses tend to have something for everyone and he's no stranger to wordplay and gunbars. He's the type of battler who can take 4 years off but still know exactly what's dope today. Strengths Wording Concepts Harshness Blue Bayou: Blue has to be one of the nicest with wordplay I've ever seen. After too many years modding text leagues, Blue is one of few who can really surprise me with wordplay. He's an expert with misdirection and humor and is one of the few battlers you see talking about their audience. He's recently decided to develop a NC specific style and is giving it one hell of a test vs Dominate. Strengths Wordplay Wording Intelligence |
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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy? Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus Blue Bayou Quote:
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are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean… . . sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years |
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03-20-2019, 03:35 AM | #3 |
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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines dece start Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse the personal is fire, i also pointed the same things out but dickriders just overlooked it or didn't care loool, cool bar Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes simple but cool I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals ok this concept even with the opener is just absurd. it's funny but this just stupid lmfao, obviously it works but wtf Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math fucking dope, ur best bar thus far The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste jesusssss christ, so sick I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp FUCKING DOPEEEEEEEEEE & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus cool, but underwhelming based on the 3 heaters i just read b4 it .. sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree niceee wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees i hate sports bars but obviously it works and it's good real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. once again, ok.. it works and it's fine for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy sick wp and cool tie in, ur best bar thus far Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy this is cool but the personal is very untrue to my knowledge as the guy is literally a robot, but the bar is cool putting that aside stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover cool bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man is he actually a teacher? must be a personal so i'lll just assume it works. it's cool. he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years simple but it's cool imo Honestly, a dope battle as expected. That being said, they both had almost no real actual misses so it just comes down to the wow factor for me. Dom had like 3 bars in a row near the middle/end of his verse that were just fucking absurddd and for that he just wins. Like I said, both verses were pure heat but dom just had more of those 10/10 bangers. Dope stuff and I could see peoples preferences having this battle go either way, that's just mine personally. V/ Dom the robot. |
03-20-2019, 08:29 AM | #4 |
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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines nah not feelin Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse alright Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes decent I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals lol ok at best Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math this was nice The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste pretty cool here I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp at first I was like nah that’s played but after a second read I think it’s a nice flip & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus solid closer Vs sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree alright wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees lmao nice real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. decent, you’re OD’ing on aero wordplay again for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy pretty cool Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy nah stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover hmm ok bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man what? No he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years this is ok Close battle here, dom started off slow for me but his last 4 were all good back to back. Blue was good too but had less bars that I really liked. Vote Doninate |
03-20-2019, 01:50 PM | #5 |
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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines Ok opener Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse Decent, the execution was kinda light Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes This was nice, I like this I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals Lol funny Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math Fiya hit The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste Wooo, lol haymaker I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp Good flip I like this too & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus Nice closer Good shit Dom ------- sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree Fiya opener wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees Nice real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. Ehh, decent at best for me for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy Good hit with this one Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy Ok at best. Kinda felt it was a light jab stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover This was nice bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man This was badly worded I think, I got where u was going just the wording kinda made it lack. Still ok tho he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years Nice finish on the closeout Good shit Blue Yo props to both on this dope ass read here. Ok Dom started off slow with his opener , but man as the verse read through he heated nothing, but up. That wordplay off catering made that bar lotb for me. Blue verse started off with heat, but through out Blue was in & out with the consistency. He had some good hits as well with the "God to the guy" bar being my fav. Overall nothin bad to say about either good ass read, I just got Dom here for being more consistent and his verse overall hit harsher then BB. V-Dom
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Blue Bayou… ^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy? Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines Ok jab, knowing you? this could've been harsher. But i like the tone of it regardless. Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse Blue just got Fact checked, I like the play on Culling/Cullinary. He just shit in your cheerios and left urine swirls in it, bitch. Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes Dang, this was right at the neck. Good tying it all together thats some slick stuff I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals LOL using blues gay jokes on him. There we go you styling on him bro. Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math this like my amino acid bar, i like nerdy stuff. This was cool, it didn't cave his head in. But it was clear land in my eyes The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste Fire K to ring/Catering awesome work I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp Fire, i liked this one alot. Its my favorite line in your verse & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus ADHD bar i like it, well done using right medicine for the diagnosis dr. Dingo warrior Can Blue Bayou Whoop the Kangaroo Danger dude? We'll see are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean… . . sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree Nice, well played you kick him in the face man. wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees Ok this was cool, slick how you approached it real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. I love that you did a boxing line. But this could've been way better. for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy I liked this one, think you could've made the punch harsher. Came of swag & flowish imo Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy This one i wasn't digging so much. stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover Cool, this one was a good shot. It feels like Verbal Charades with your plays sometimes haha. bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man Yikes sounds painful, this a nice lil personal. he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years[/QUOTE] Cool jab, nothing throat crushing. But i liked it well enough. So Blue bayou gets what he deserves from rescinding his ON me for beers offer. God doesn't like it when you tease people who thirst for the nectar of life! Nah i joke i do think dom had the harder shots and less misses. These two need a rematch becase i enjoy them both as writers. I just think today was Dom's day he had better execution then Blue. These two will always be 50/50 in ym eyes just like blue vs resin. It just depends on who has the juices flowing. v/ The Australian Alien, The kangaroo Danger dude
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I didn't like alliterating. Maybe I'm missing something there but other than a litter 8 its odd to me? Lol. Cullin erry was good wording. I liked mongolian landscapes. I wasn't feeling doohickeys too much but i'd not seen that before so it was kinda fresh to me. I didn't get numbers UP. Catering / K to ring was cool. Lady in The Tramp i've seen Alien do before, just not with muzzles. I didn't think much of the closer, it needed wording more harshly IMO
BB: Law Degree was worded dope, didnt get the Yankees line, Mickey G was just okay, deify i liked tbh, Crikey Guy i didnt get at all, popsockets I missed too tbh, break it off inside u was dope, funny iffy drops was cool Good battle, some dope shit, some that completely went over my head on both sides, enjoyable reads from both though I think I have BB taking it with like 1 bar more I enjoyed though. There's not a great deal in it between you. Good battle guys
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03-24-2019, 11:53 PM | #8 |
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Blue Bayou…
^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy? Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse -damn what a line Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes -ok I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals -lol kinda silly Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math -has this never been done wtf dope The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste -ok I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp -fire & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus -finisher was underwhelming are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean… sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree -decent wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees -fire real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. -ok obscure for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy -cool Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy -i can't quote this rip you called him the crikey guy like he's not Steve fucking Irwin stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover -a lot going on here but ok bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man -bit of a stretch the finisher was disconnected it felt he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years -ok I like it.[/QUOTE] Blue had a great verse but Dom really unloaded here it was like nothing but solid wordplays, beat him at their game you could say. Dom |
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alliteratin was ok
culling is good, wording was harsh steppe was comedic doohickeys is corny but funny round up was simple but solid k to ring was nastyy lady and the tramp/ noodle bars i’ve heard before same with ridalin vs law degree is a good start aer’n judge was nice, liked it mikey g, another aero mention tho, wasnt feelin deity was nice, nasty wording crikey guy lol it’s aight cover was aight, ligh student was okay fucked with the closer enjoyed this battle bros.. both had some heat in there.. catering and deity lines were dammnn good .. i got dom tho with just one more quote to separate it.. v dom
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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines Good wordplay, wording is a bit off for you.. I seen a litter w/p by spit right before i read it the first time, this was cool tho Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse cull... creative but not a word most people use ha, it still hit tho w/ the personal.. Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes This hit I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals Lol a bit corny but worked Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math Don't think ivev seen this, good one The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste Ok, catering was good wp but flip was alright nothing wild to me.. I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp muzzle part made this good here & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus Ehh ok ender are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean… sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree creative opener.. wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees This was cool too.. took me a sec real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. Ok reference looked up but not true to me tbh.. ok for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy worded well... good nothing else to say here Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy Lol i liked the concept but broken part was iffy to me stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover Not a fan of this one bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man hmmm its alright a bit too specific.. inside u he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years ok, phlymo did this way back it's ok/decent Blue started off good but seemed like he tried to reach for personal angles esp towards the end but he certainly had hitters.. first two.. deify etc.. Dom kept it consistent here even w/ the gunbars.. they were still direct & good tho usually I'll take a personal flipped creatively over it.. but Blue didn't really hit w/ me there imo not sure why i think the bars had alot going on but the concepts as a whole werent registering w/ me as damn..dope'.. Dom did that a lil better i thought this go round.. vote DOM
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