Round 1: Spider-Man vs. Venom - SPIDER-MAN WINS

For Battling · 11-12-2018, 07:34 AM

Tournament Rules

1. YOU MUST VOTE ON ALL BATTLES INCLUDING YOUR OWN!!!

2. You will post your vote on your normal name, and explain your vote. Please let’s not be complete lazy bastards and drop dog shit votes, put some effort into that shit. When you vote on your own battle, try not to make it so obvious as to who you are - personally idc but it’s for your own benefit tbh.

3. Minimum line limit is 10 / Maximum is 16

4. ONLY ONE EXTENTION ALLOWED PER BATTLER! NO EXCEPTIONS! You will have ample amounts of time each week to post your verses, all battles will always be posted on time and on schedule, no excuses. So if you need an extension, PM a mod, don’t post in your thread.

5. Battles will be set on Sunday night or Monday morning. Verses will be due by Friday night. Voting will end on Sunday.

- NO BITING
- NO RECYCLING
- NO CHEATING
- NO SWAYING

Spider-Man

Venom

For Battling · 11-12-2018, 11:31 AM

SPIDER-MAN HAS CHECKED IN & SENT HIS VERSE

VENOM MUST NOW MATCH 10 LINES

For Battling · 11-12-2018, 05:45 PM

VENOM HAS CHECKED IN

For Battling · 11-17-2018, 05:05 AM

Spider-Man’s Verse:

This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking
Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely
Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame
Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs
Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy
He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me
Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun
Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk
I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch
Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage

For Battling · 11-17-2018, 05:08 AM

Venom’s Verse:

When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is
& THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid
It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack
Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack
When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire
The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire
Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile
You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile
Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy
So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy

sral · 11-17-2018, 05:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling

Spider-Man’s Verse:

This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking
Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely

didn’t get the Vin Diesel tie in tbh

Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame
Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs

it was cool but you don’t extract snake fangs though lol, you extract the venom? maybe I’m nitpicking there but that’s how it came off to me. decent idea, wording let it down slightly

Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy
He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me

straight jab

Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun
Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk

kinda swaggy but that’s it

I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch
Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage

okay closer

sral · 11-17-2018, 05:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling

Venom’s Verse:

When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is
& THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid

LOL cool I guess

It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack
Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack

okay

When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire
The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire

it was okay but lacked any real sting to the punch for me, it’s just a statement with the way you have it there, it needed more

Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile
You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile

jeopardy lines been done. again, it’s okay, not really relevant enough to the character imo to get love either. you’ve such an easy character to attack angles wise and yet went with this for some reason? it’s odd to me

Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy
So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy

again it needed more, felt flat

I got the first guy winning. better attack lines, more creative, better wording and concepts

For Battling · 11-17-2018, 11:10 PM

This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking
Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely
nah - maybe could have been good if vin diesel had anything to do with his character
Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame
Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs
alright
Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy
He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me
this was nice, good usage of the character
Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun
Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk
NO
I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch
Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage
alright cool

2 nice
1 ok
2 misses

Vs

When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is
& THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid
alright I liked it
It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack
Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack
nah lol
When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire
The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire
nice, good usage
Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile
You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile
ok not bad, had potential for more. I guess because thugs don’t play jeopardy
Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy
So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy
mick? I’m not following

2 nice
1 ok
2 misses

Really close battle here, could definitely go either way depending on voters. I feel as though spiderman did more with the gimmick concept and capitalized on dissing his opponents character. Venom did good as well, but felt more like a standard battle verse on some lines.

Vote Spider-Man

Flow · 11-18-2018, 03:54 AM

Close battle but I'm going against the grain and vote venom. I felt Spidey opened with two straight misses, maybe that's the reason for the edge to venom for me. In truth I felt they both had two misses but I felt venoms hits just got more reaction from me, like the pulling legs off I thought was pretty cool.

Anyway tight contest vote ven

John Dillinger · 11-18-2018, 07:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling

Spider-Man’s Verse:

This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking
Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely
Cool
Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame
Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs
Worded weird but I dig
Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy
He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me
Cool
Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun
Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk
I like it not as strong tho but clever
I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch
Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage
Had to look up but this was cool

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling

Venom’s Verse:

When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is
& THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid
Cool
It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack
Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack
Nah
When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire
The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire
Ok
Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile
You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile
I like this lol
Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy
So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy
Not feeling

Got Spiderman here

Qualm · 11-18-2018, 08:05 PM

Wasn’t crazy about either. Fav line from venom was the jeopardy line and it didn’t have much to do with Spider-Man. Really disliked Spider-Man’s Jordan bar but the rest was a lot more consistent overall.

V/ spidey

Plot · 11-18-2018, 09:19 PM

Only liked the Tom Hardy and Carnage lines from Spideys verse. Venom only had the opener and Tobey Maguire lines. So working from the misses, both had one total miss with the jordan/jeopady lines which were total filler. Spideys first 2 bars werent constructed well, the Vin/Ven and diesl/des'll wp was ok, but the Vin concept wasnt completed, then the Venom/fang thing kinda didnt make sense but was an ok concept. While Venoms eminem/spidey track wasnt too bad just not real hard, but his closer was a total miss for me.

So really close here but Spidey gets it by a hair

King Karaoke · 11-19-2018, 09:41 AM

Hi...

This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking
Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely
this was cool but i dont get why the vin diesel reference was used in the first place.
Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame
Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs
couldve been executed better
Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy
He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me
nah...
Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun
Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk
This was good...
I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch
Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage
Fire...

When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is
& THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid
Ok
It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack
Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack
Nah
When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire
The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire
Nah
Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile
You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile
Fire
Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy
So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy
Solid

I really liked you using "we" throughout the verse...

Vote SM because he had less misses really...

Bye...

For Battling · 11-19-2018, 10:28 AM

Spider-Man Wins 7-0

11-12-2018, 07:34 AM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Round 1: Spider-Man vs. Venom - SPIDER-MAN WINS Tournament Rules 1. YOU MUST VOTE ON ALL BATTLES INCLUDING YOUR OWN!!! 2. You will post your vote on your normal name, and explain your vote. Please let’s not be complete lazy bastards and drop dog shit votes, put some effort into that shit. When you vote on your own battle, try not to make it so obvious as to who you are - personally idc but it’s for your own benefit tbh. 3. Minimum line limit is 10 / Maximum is 16 4. ONLY ONE EXTENTION ALLOWED PER BATTLER! NO EXCEPTIONS! You will have ample amounts of time each week to post your verses, all battles will always be posted on time and on schedule, no excuses. So if you need an extension, PM a mod, don’t post in your thread. 5. Battles will be set on Sunday night or Monday morning. Verses will be due by Friday night. Voting will end on Sunday. - NO BITING - NO RECYCLING - NO CHEATING - NO SWAYING Spider-Man Venom

11-19-2018, 09:41 AM	#13
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353693	Hi... This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely this was cool but i dont get why the vin diesel reference was used in the first place. Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs couldve been executed better Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me nah... Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk This was good... I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage Fire... When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is & THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid Ok It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack Nah When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire Nah Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile Fire Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy Solid I really liked you using "we" throughout the verse... Vote SM because he had less misses really... Bye... __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke

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11-12-2018, 11:31 AM	#2
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	SPIDER-MAN HAS CHECKED IN & SENT HIS VERSE VENOM MUST NOW MATCH 10 LINES

11-12-2018, 05:45 PM	#3
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	VENOM HAS CHECKED IN

11-17-2018, 05:05 AM	#4
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Spider-Man’s Verse: This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage

11-17-2018, 05:08 AM	#5
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Venom’s Verse: When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is & THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy

11-17-2018, 11:10 PM	#8
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely nah - maybe could have been good if vin diesel had anything to do with his character Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs alright Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me this was nice, good usage of the character Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk NO I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage alright cool 2 nice 1 ok 2 misses Vs When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is & THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid alright I liked it It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack nah lol When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire nice, good usage Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile ok not bad, had potential for more. I guess because thugs don’t play jeopardy Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy mick? I’m not following 2 nice 1 ok 2 misses Really close battle here, could definitely go either way depending on voters. I feel as though spiderman did more with the gimmick concept and capitalized on dissing his opponents character. Venom did good as well, but felt more like a standard battle verse on some lines. Vote Spider-Man

11-18-2018, 08:05 PM	#11
Qualm on posting probation Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 256 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 1879372	Wasn’t crazy about either. Fav line from venom was the jeopardy line and it didn’t have much to do with Spider-Man. Really disliked Spider-Man’s Jordan bar but the rest was a lot more consistent overall. V/ spidey

11-18-2018, 09:19 PM	#12
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Only liked the Tom Hardy and Carnage lines from Spideys verse. Venom only had the opener and Tobey Maguire lines. So working from the misses, both had one total miss with the jordan/jeopady lines which were total filler. Spideys first 2 bars werent constructed well, the Vin/Ven and diesl/des'll wp was ok, but the Vin concept wasnt completed, then the Venom/fang thing kinda didnt make sense but was an ok concept. While Venoms eminem/spidey track wasnt too bad just not real hard, but his closer was a total miss for me. So really close here but Spidey gets it by a hair

11-19-2018, 10:28 AM	#14
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Spider-Man Wins 7-0