06-01-2020, 08:39 AM | #941 |
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06-01-2020, 08:47 AM | #942 |
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What does that line mean tho ?
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06-01-2020, 09:36 AM | #943 | ||
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=T2hzzljxo7A It's a reference to the video above. I tried to tie it in with his thread where nobody knew who he was, while with my return, everyone's like "here's DLB, notorious for fucking around and being decent at battling". Conor McGregor's nickname is "Notorious" and he came back to MMA recently and was placed as a title contender off the bat. Jeremy Stephens' nickname is "Lil Heathen" and he's still the average, forgettable MMA fighter. Problem child was a tie in to the "heathen/Lil' Heathen" portion, as they are one in the same by definition of being uncivilized/unenlightened. Gist of it is Schism is not a threat and entirely forgettable as a person, while I still have an aura and skill people can't forget
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06-01-2020, 09:44 AM | #944 |
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I’m not upset at all I was just confused at you going to the trouble to put me in your sig and now you’ve explained it it was exactly how I said in your quote?
I’d way rather someone admitted they didn’t understand something than just write ‘nah’ or in your case make something up about too many gun bars |
06-01-2020, 09:55 AM | #945 |
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I'm not referring to this whole conversation about Steve's bar, but I agree with this sentiment in general. I hate when people just shrug it off and say "I don't understand this so it must be good". There are definitely a LOT of times when the fault is on the writer and not on the reader for writing something that's incoherent.
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06-01-2020, 09:56 AM | #946 |
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Need a translator, a linguistic expert and a magnifying glass for half the bars in this league
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06-01-2020, 09:57 AM | #947 |
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06-01-2020, 10:15 AM | #948 | ||
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Azealia/ I'll seal ya is forced wp and shit I've seen people attempt before. You used a David Bowie line but the first line was horrid and I believe I've seen it. Body weight is terrible, unless his alias was Weight at some point. Hammer clicks bar generic gun bar 2828393398. adversecity trash once the punch comes in. Your tennis sores/tenor saw/never raw lines are the txt equivalent of a run-on sentence and hurt my eyes trying to figure out what was going on. That whole bar was an abortion/miscarriage being displayed on my screen. I'd rather read a Let's Beef verse where they toss in ~~>{#{ type shit, because it's less painful to view. Advantage point would've been cool, but the wording was trash to get in as many, "hey guys, does it look like I know tennis?" references. Not too fresh either
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06-01-2020, 10:21 AM | #949 |
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how bout we hug it out and appreciate that we all have a common bond of sharing this nerdy little hobby where we manipulate language and write poems for each other
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06-01-2020, 12:35 PM | #951 | |
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Thanks for clarifying
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06-01-2020, 12:38 PM | #952 | |
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looooooool leaned me hard now do Barcotic’s verse plz
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06-01-2020, 12:58 PM | #953 | |
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lol that pussy gets no respect from me. why would I disrespect my CPU pulling that trash shit up when he ducking still & violated a few of the ten txt commandments
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You really worried about originality when the only quotable from the guy you voted for was a straight up bite from Coop vs me which you also voted on? Nah you’re just a hater and I have no idea why. I haven’t done this in like 12 years either and I wouldn’t if it weren’t for this situation right now. There aren’t many wp that haven’t been done before so if you put a fresh spin on it or it’s relevant who cares? Azealia I’ll seal ya is no more forced than any other wp on here and it’s from a news story from like a week ago. I don’t think anything I’m that verse is great but when you’re dropping “I am like this ufc guy while you are like this ufc guy” you can’t hate on shit |
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azelia/I’ll seal ya is superforced/wack tbc
no defending that |
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Yo you’re rhymes are no good b
I’m like Gilbert Burns you more like tyron Woodley Sorry just had to post this so I could quote it for my sig |
06-01-2020, 01:14 PM | #957 |
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the way Aaliyah dead is plane to sea like when that stupid bitch died
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Again it’s no more forced than any other wp but the context is totally irrelevant?
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06-01-2020, 01:23 PM | #959 |
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The way Aaliyah dead is plane to sea / the way I’ll leave you dead is plain to see
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06-01-2020, 01:23 PM | #960 |
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Wp is wp if you can get what’s implied first time you read it through that’s fine and it has a relevance to the subject / set up / punch. Text battling in general is embarrassing as fuck when you break it down like this but we’re all here doing this because like someone just said we’re all nerds that used to / still do love doing it
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