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Old 05-25-2020, 06:33 PM   #1
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Old 05-26-2020, 12:13 AM   #2
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Old 05-27-2020, 02:12 AM   #5
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Enbombz aka Rutter Knows Best aka Sour Joog bka Body Snatchers tag team duo .....



you’ve never made a boom on the scene nor a name we’ve heard before
you’ll see Bombs get buried alive like military equipment w/ no concern of war
that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing
defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose
cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose
you haven’t Snatched a Body since you registered- that’s more then just facts
a finals loss in the MBK tourney, only thing you kept ya brother from was an award on his stats
you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play
have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day
keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks
so I did my research, Rutter Knows Best from back in your vet days
test my lyricalassault & we’ll see bullets stuck in a rut like they’ve being doing that for decades
I’ve seen your battles the concepts are drawn out an taking a knee to the neck
those bars aren’t just winded their currently making George Floyd take the deepest of breaths
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Old 05-27-2020, 11:17 AM   #6
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Yo no lie I'm older then you & didn't grow up with bread so if my mom or anyone bought me shit when I first moved out id be thankful as fuck.
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Gun bars are lame to me, but if that’s what the crowd wants. Time to please the crowd.

Whining bout votes, you ain’t gifted! Just riled in the worst way
You’ll be lucky to get anything... reliving every one of ya childhood birthdays
Who you even faced worth a mention here? Stop it don’t lie
Give a @Defiant answer...next questions how the fuck you lost to him twice
Can’t even Stick to ya guns..when ya products in doubt
Typical pack mentality, just another sheep how you follow the crowd
Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret
Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head
Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain
Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train.
Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder
I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers
Boy the lamest of the vets, safe to say I’ll drop you dead
Messing with engraves, I’ll spell it out to you with a blade across ya chest
You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit
If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse

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Old 05-27-2020, 12:17 PM   #7
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you’ve never made a boom on the scene nor a name we’ve heard before
you’ll see Bombs get buried alive like military equipment w/ no concern of war
Decent opener
that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing
Even better
defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose
cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose
Decent, good start so far
you haven’t Snatched a Body since you registered- that’s more then just facts
a finals loss in the MBK tourney, only thing you kept ya brother from was an award on his stats
Doesnt resonate
you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play
have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day
Back on track, nice
keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks
Wtf fire
so I did my research, Rutter Knows Best from back in your vet days
test my lyricalassault & we’ll see bullets stuck in a rut like they’ve being doing that for decades
Points for cleverness, but the wording didn't hit for me
I’ve seen your battles the concepts are drawn out an taking a knee to the neck
those bars aren’t just winded their currently making George Floyd take the deepest of breaths
Decent closer

Damn ok muhfucka you might be aiiiiight

It looks like you put some amount of effort into this one, good. Movie snacks was the best bar, Cluster Bomb & Bomb shelter were nice, and the opener and closer hit. Solid fucking verse

8/10


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Enbombz


Whining bout votes, you ain’t gifted! Just riled in the worst way
You’ll be lucky to get anything... reliving every one of ya childhood birthdays
Not bad
Who you even faced worth a mention here? Stop it don’t lie
Give a @Defiant answer...next questions how the fuck you lost to him twice
Not a fan of the "you lost to ___" bars, when that concept is the focal point of the punch
Can’t even Stick to ya guns..when ya products in doubt
Typical pack mentality, just another sheep how you follow the crowd
Decent
Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret
Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head
Nice
Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain
Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train.
Nicer
Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder
I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers
Above avg filler
Boy the lamest of the vets, safe to say I’ll drop you dead
Messing with engraves, I’ll spell it out to you with a blade across ya chest
Similar to previous bar
You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit
If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse
Fuck you, I have a bar with ' a rise' in it in my verse and now ppl are gonna think I was influenced by your shit. This was a decent closer

I'm fucking confused.

Niggas went Super Saiyan compared to their earlier verses.

Snowpiercer and tombstone were nice, and I only counted three misses. I probably would've picked your favorite outta the amazon / engraves bars and left one out, or placed it elsewhere in the verse.


7/10

First impression, I felt PG's verse went a bit harder, but lemme go bar for bar


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keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks
you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play
have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day
that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing

VS

EB

Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain
Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train.
Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret
Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head

Zombie = Buried, Floyd > Birthday, Sheep



Entertaining battle.


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Old 05-27-2020, 04:29 PM   #8
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keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks

defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose
cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose
^if worded better would've been lotb



Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder
I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers
^dope line.


v/ graves for being more consistent.
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Old 05-27-2020, 06:54 PM   #9
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bomb was a lil too simple but ok
cluster was good
3rd straight nameplay, not feelin this one
mbk was ehh, statement ish
cans/shelter lines been done alot before but it’a still ok
lol sour worms was corny, but i fucked with it
nah wasnt feelin rut
closer was ok

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childplay worked with the quote, cool
defiant line was more of a statement
sheep line was nice, coulda been real heavy with some nasty wording
grave tombstone was too simple
snowpiercer was a bannnger
amazin concept coulda been nice, wording issues
engraves was aight
closer was decent


enjoyed the read, both got some solid concepts.. came down to how many more lines i liked and i think enbombz had 2 of the best 3 lines in here

v bomb
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Old 05-28-2020, 02:38 AM   #10
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PG

Cluster bomb was nice
Bomb shelter I fucked with, although simple
Sour worms was dope

The rest either average / not feeling

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Childhood birthdays had potential, it was nearly there
Defiant, the idea I fuck with but ‘stop it don’t lie’ / ‘lost to him twice’ bit of a stretch in rhyming for me
Snowpiercer is dope

Fuck. Close one. Could go either way imo. Both had some decent lines. I felt Bombz kinda had better ideas in places... less name-plays for example.. however, his misses were worse (really wasn’t feeling sheep or tombstone) while PG was a little more consistent so that’s where I’m leaning.

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that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing
keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks


vs.

Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain
Bitch like snowpiecer (typo made this confusing), even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train.

You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit
If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse

v - Enbombz. In a battle of mostly nameplays, this was a close battle between the two. I felt En got it slightly, even though the quotables were nearly the same. Packed damn near had LOTB, but the wording for his Sour Worms bar was so iffy and long, I almost didn't quote it, which is why I italicized it. Instead, En had the LOTB with the snowpiercer bar, which outside of the typo, I thought was hilarious. He should do more of those, rather than the "do _ to _ like _" or "I'll ___________" stuff. Packed's extremely long bars took a bit out of the punch for me, as many were stretched to contain unnecessary words. I didn't feel a lot of it, but with the right wording and condensing, he could be good.
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you’ve never made a boom on the scene nor a name we’ve heard before
you’ll see Bombs get buried alive like military equipment w/ no concern of war
I get it but it doesn’t really work? ‘Like a land mine or something would’ve worked better
that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing
This is nice, didn’t notice it was a name flip at first but yeah
defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose
cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose
Decent personal
you haven’t Snatched a Body since you registered- that’s more then just facts
a finals loss in the MBK tourney, only thing you kept ya brother from was an award on his stats
Bars getting stretched here could be way more efficient
you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play
have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day
Nice
keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks
Nice again
so I did my research, Rutter Knows Best from back in your vet days
test my lyricalassault & we’ll see bullets stuck in a rut like they’ve being doing that for decades
Nice
I’ve seen your battles the concepts are drawn out an taking a knee to the neck
those bars aren’t just winded their currently making George Floyd take the deepest of breaths
Don’t like this the expression is long winded




Whining bout votes, you ain’t gifted! Just riled in the worst way
You’ll be lucky to get anything... reliving every one of ya childhood birthdays
Decent angle and personal
Who you even faced worth a mention here? Stop it don’t lie
Give a @Defiant answer...next questions how the fuck you lost to him twice
This is ok
Can’t even Stick to ya guns..when ya products in doubt
Typical pack mentality, just another sheep how you follow the crowd
This feels either played or obvious unless I’m missing a personal or something
Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret
Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head
Feels rushed and forced
Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain
Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train.
Dope
Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder
I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers
nice name play but amazon workers aren’t known for opening packages are they? Could’ve hit harder
Boy the lamest of the vets, safe to say I’ll drop you dead
Messing with engraves, I’ll spell it out to you with a blade across ya chest
Nice name flips
You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit
If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse
Dope Ender


Another close one with some good personals and name flips from both. I think bomb just edged it in terms of highlights and his wording was better to me. Good stuff from both.

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Enbombz aka Rutter Knows Best aka Sour Joog bka Body Snatchers tag team duo .....



you’ve never made a boom on the scene nor a name we’ve heard before
you’ll see Bombs get buried alive like military equipment w/ no concern of war
NOT FEELING THIS
that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing
LOL OK
defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose
cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose
OBSCURE, A LOT OF BOMB PLAYS
you haven’t Snatched a Body since you registered- that’s more then just facts
a finals loss in the MBK tourney, only thing you kept ya brother from was an award on his stats
I LIKE THIS
you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play
have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day
PROBABLY PLAYED, STILL COOL
keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks
FIRE
so I did my research, Rutter Knows Best from back in your vet days
test my lyricalassault & we’ll see bullets stuck in a rut like they’ve being doing that for decades
GOOD DISS
I’ve seen your battles the concepts are drawn out an taking a knee to the neck
those bars aren’t just winded their currently making George Floyd take the deepest of breaths
CURRENT BUT COULDVE BEEN BETTER
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Whining bout votes, you ain’t gifted! Just riled in the worst way
You’ll be lucky to get anything... reliving every one of ya childhood birthdays
FUNNY COULD BE HARDER
Who you even faced worth a mention here? Stop it don’t lie
Give a @Defiant answer...next questions how the fuck you lost to him twice
NOT FEELING THIS
Can’t even Stick to ya guns..when ya products in doubt
Typical pack mentality, just another sheep how you follow the crowd
I FKS W THIS
Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret
Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head
THIS TOO
Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain
Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train.
THIS NICE
Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder
I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers
SIMPLE BUT HIT
Boy the lamest of the vets, safe to say I’ll drop you dead
Messing with engraves, I’ll spell it out to you with a blade across ya chest
COOL
You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit
If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse
NAH LHF
cluster bomb, mbk, sour worms, lyrical assault vs pack mentality, snowpiercer, engraves, amazon workers

v/PG...Tough call, Sour worms & Lyrical assault edged it for me
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you’ve never made a boom on the scene nor a name we’ve heard before
you’ll see Bombs get buried alive like military equipment w/ no concern of war
No
that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing
Nice
defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose
cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose
Ok
you haven’t Snatched a Body since you registered- that’s more then just facts
a finals loss in the MBK tourney, only thing you kept ya brother from was an award on his stats
No
you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play
have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day
Fire
keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks
Fire again but *than movie snacks ;)
so I did my research, Rutter Knows Best from back in your vet days
test my lyricalassault & we’ll see bullets stuck in a rut like they’ve being doing that for decades
Relying too much on nameplays now by using a 3rd alias
I’ve seen your battles the concepts are drawn out an taking a knee to the neck
those bars aren’t just winded their currently making George Floyd take the deepest of breaths
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Whining bout votes, you ain’t gifted! Just riled in the worst way
You’ll be lucky to get anything... reliving every one of ya childhood birthdays
Below average but not a complete miss
Who you even faced worth a mention here? Stop it don’t lie
Give a Defiant answer...next questions how the fuck you lost to him twice
Mediocre 'name tossed in there' type bar but again, not a complete miss
Can’t even Stick to ya guns..when ya products in doubt
Typical pack mentality, just another sheep how you follow the crowd
Dope
Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret
Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head
No
Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain
Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train.
Good
Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder
I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers
Fire
Boy the lamest of the vets, safe to say I’ll drop you dead
Messing with engraves, I’ll spell it out to you with a blade across ya chest
Both of your names used, nice
You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit
If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse
Whack, should have went a different direction with it. Zombie apoc was corny
Clooose asf and could go either way. Had to read both verses 3x and look beyond just hits to misses to make a definitive decision, which means it was a good battle

Both had 2 air balls
PG had 3 ok-ish bars, Enbombz had 2
PG had 3 standouts, Enbombz had 4
Yet PG had the better quality bars

But then, Enbombz did have better personals while still pulling off some great concepts while PG went with 90% nameplays

Going with Enbombz for impact
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Old 06-01-2020, 06:56 AM   #15
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I got 4-2, Graves with the edge. Didnt like movie snacks. Doomsday was lotb.uztt. cluster bomb was cool. Lyricalassault was dope. Emb had intro and closwe

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5-4 PG atm

Please vote if you haven't already

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Too many name plays from both imo. Close battle

LOTB was Snowpiercer. Liked box cutter to Packs but I don’t like when names are shortened. Engraves was okay.

Vs

Sour worms was cool so was Cluster Bombs. Lines are a little wordy. Takes too long to get to the punch. Stuck in a rut was cool but wordy.

Could go either way as votes have shown but I think EnBombz executed his verse a little better. Less choppy and more concise. PG will improve as he shakes the rust.

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Originally Posted by Packed Graves View Post
Enbombz aka Rutter Knows Best aka Sour Joog bka Body Snatchers tag team duo .....



you’ve never made a boom on the scene nor a name we’ve heard before
you’ll see Bombs get buried alive like military equipment w/ no concern of war
....I like your wording here
that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing
...ok..when you string the name plays back to back try to make them very different or unique
defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose
cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose
....that’s a drug I’m not familiar with
you haven’t Snatched a Body since you registered- that’s more then just facts
a finals loss in the MBK tourney, only thing you kept ya brother from was an award on his stats
...cool
you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play
have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day
...best name play . Should of only did this one
keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks
.....that’s nice
so I did my research, Rutter Knows Best from back in your vet days
test my lyricalassault & we’ll see bullets stuck in a rut like they’ve being doing that for decades
....wording here was meh
I’ve seen your battles the concepts are drawn out an taking a knee to the neck
those bars aren’t just winded their currently making George Floyd take the deepest of breaths
..lol u can’t say that then hashtag justice for George lol
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Whining bout votes, you ain’t gifted! Just riled in the worst way
You’ll be lucky to get anything... reliving every one of ya childhood birthdays
....lol ok
Who you even faced worth a mention here? Stop it don’t lie
Give a @Defiant answer...next questions how the fuck you lost to him twice
....eh
Can’t even Stick to ya guns..when ya products in doubt
Typical pack mentality, just another sheep how you follow the crowd
.....nah
Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret
Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head
..:lol fire
Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain
Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train.
....you fucked the wording up but this was tight
Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder
I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers
...aight ..
Boy the lamest of the vets, safe to say I’ll drop you dead
Messing with engraves, I’ll spell it out to you with a blade across ya chest
....wording again off but creativity on point
You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit
If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse
....seems obvious but the wording was cool



Graves OD on the name plays where bombz had a more rounded and creative attack



I also favor creativity so I’m leaning to enbombz here


Enjoyed the read
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Good battle guys. Sometimes they end this close this has been open long enough

Enbombz wins 6-5
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