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Old 05-25-2020, 06:35 PM   #1
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• Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends MONDAY ideally
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Old 05-25-2020, 06:45 PM   #2
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I'm cool with tmrw or thurs. I'll drop same day you do
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Im assuming he ain’t showing?
That name must be regrettable - don’t know who you used to be
But muthafucka I’m imPeckable, da fuck something from ‘coop’ gon do to me?!
So Fuck you and your Plastic Scene the chrome is home but you missing one
So when me Animate show up at his place you gonna see a Chicken Run
He thinks gun bars are unhard but that don’t mean shit to me
Browning on Both Sides when I light him up like Rotisserie
He dropped a mag but what a drag. Dude could suck the fun out a balloon
And he prolly ducked when he heard Royce drop that gun bar in Boom
Negative shit from this irrelevant bitch, you nearly made me hate the art
No show verse last week the only time your lines will make a chart
And since I moved in with his mother I came to see this loser’s roots
But she said it’s time I flew the coop.... so ima shoot him off the roof
I’ll Butcher your Paltry verses, I’m not one to mess with man
So ill exit the match with a feather in my cap just like I’m a Redskins fan

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Old 05-27-2020, 07:46 PM   #6
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Psss... I figured it out:

evaD ain't a legend in disguise. ALL his "ill" lines wouldn't fill ONE haiku
We've been lied to: his Onlyfans are the men he's subscribed to
Got an ugly bride, too. She'll do anything to get rid of this lame
Leave Dave & Buster legs wide open? ..only takes a drink & some video games
Dave has problems getting a rise & can't actually afford the pill cost
But he thinks he'll get hard if his verses are tits up, ass cheeks, & feel soft
Gave his bitch ass a pity vote & that shit he wrote? Witty? Nope... STILL lost
I'd give em a knife to slit his throat, but he aint sharp-witted enough to peel floss
I know your dyslexic ass loves anagrams, but you still can't see the truth
How long till he realizes his girl's text: "U emailing V?" is "im leaVing U!"
Ur a fuckin shame. Ppl call you "whats his name?" not cuz it's reversed, instead:
it's cuz your lines only show a flash of life, like I put a shotgun to ya verse's head


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Old 05-28-2020, 11:27 AM   #7
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Negative shit from this irrelevant bitch, you nearly made me hate the art
No show verse last week the only time your lines will make a chart


^ with better wording, this could've been dope. I think for your verse, it lacked sufficiently in better wording and interesting concepts, but I'll say you can refine this style as it doesn't stretch bars. If you read up on older battles in the archives, you'll improve, but as of now, I'd say you have no quotables from that verse. Great attempt though

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Leave Dave & Buster legs wide open? ..only takes a drink & some video games


Between this and the anagram bar, you nearly had a quotable as well. Both bars suffer from some crappy wording or weird shit like "U emailing V?", but it was a better overall attempt in my eyes. I think you fared off better in the battle, but the wording being precise is what will take you to the top. Onlyfans, Dave and Buster, etc. show how creative you can be, but doing things like rhyming "to" twice to end a punch is what hurts it overall. If you also remove some of the filler, like "I put a shotgun to your verse's head"-esque bars, it'd be a smoother overall read.

v- Coop for being more consistent in his attempts, although, I found no quotables to be existent in either verse. I found his verse to be the better of the two
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Old 05-28-2020, 12:13 PM   #8
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Ive got the rotisserie bar (which I thought was lotb)
and the chart bar vs. nothing.
V- Dave backwards.
Coop I dont get your refs for the onlyfans and Dave & buster bars..
and after that you feel off hard, the text bar was awful I got no idea what
that was about. thats what I think
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Negative shit from this irrelevant bitch, you nearly made me hate the art
No show verse last week the only time your lines will make a chart

vs.

evaD ain't a legend in disguise. ALL his "ill" lines wouldn't fill ONE haiku
We've been lied to: his Onlyfans are the men he's subscribed to
Got an ugly bride, too. She'll do anything to get rid of this lame
Leave Dave & Buster legs wide open? ..only takes a drink & some video games

v/ coop all around better verse more standout punches and better structure.
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Old 05-28-2020, 01:05 PM   #10
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That name must be regrettable - don’t know who you used to be
But muthafucka I’m imPeckable, da fuck something from ‘coop’ gon do to me?!
... I kinda like this .
So Fuck you and your Plastic Scene the chrome is home but you missing one
So when me Animate show up at his place you gonna see a Chicken Run
.... cool wp here. Don’t work really two ways but good enough and a nice tie in the the name
He thinks gun bars are unhard but that don’t mean shit to me
Browning on Both Sides when I light him up like Rotisserie
... lol cool
He dropped a mag but what a drag. Dude could suck the fun out a balloon
And he prolly ducked when he heard Royce drop that gun bar in Boom
... nah but thanks for reminding me about that song
Negative shit from this irrelevant bitch, you nearly made me hate the art
No show verse last week the only time your lines will make a chart
....nah not at all sir
And since I moved in with his mother I came to see this loser’s roots
But she said it’s time I flew the coop.... so ima shoot him off the roof
....no. This seems like low hanging fruit bro
I’ll Butcher your Paltry verses, I’m not one to mess with man
So ill exit the match with a feather in my cap just like I’m a Redskins fan...cool
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Psss... I figured it out:

evaD ain't a legend in disguise. ALL his "ill" lines wouldn't fill ONE haiku
We've been lied to: his Onlyfans are the men he's subscribed to
....that’s tight I like this
Got an ugly bride, too. She'll do anything to get rid of this lame
Leave Dave & Buster legs wide open? ..only takes a drink & some video games
.....nice. Wording kinda off but I like
Dave has problems getting a rise & can't actually afford the pill cost
But he thinks he'll get hard if his verses are tits up, ass cheeks, & feel soft
.... nah bro not at all
Gave his bitch ass a pity vote & that shit he wrote? Witty? Nope... STILL lost
I'd give em a knife to slit his throat, but he aint sharp-witted enough to peel floss
.....not feeling this
I know your dyslexic ass loves anagrams, but you still can't see the truth
How long till he realizes his girl's text: "U emailing V?" is "im leaVing U!"
....lmao this is really bad
Ur a fuckin shame. Ppl call you "whats his name?" not cuz it's reversed, instead:
it's cuz your lines only show a flash of life, like I put a shotgun to ya verse's head
.... good concept didn’t execute it


Call the fight, ref


Coop had the worst and best lines of this barre


Dave was consistent.. but had some ehh shit



I gotta go wit the best line here and that’s cops opener


Vote coo


This was close tho
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Old 05-29-2020, 02:38 PM   #11
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That name must be regrettable - don’t know who you used to be
But muthafucka I’m imPeckable, da fuck something from ‘coop’ gon do to me?!
LOL ALR
So Fuck you and your Plastic Scene the chrome is home but you missing one
So when me Animate show up at his place you gonna see a Chicken Run
NOT FEELING THIS
He thinks gun bars are unhard but that don’t mean shit to me
Browning on Both Sides when I light him up like Rotisserie
TOO SIMPLE
He dropped a mag but what a drag. Dude could suck the fun out a balloon
And he prolly ducked when he heard Royce drop that gun bar in Boom
NOT FAMILIAR
Negative shit from this irrelevant bitch, you nearly made me hate the art
No show verse last week the only time your lines will make a chart
I LIKE THIS
And since I moved in with his mother I came to see this loser’s roots
But she said it’s time I flew the coop.... so ima shoot him off the roof
DONT LIKE THIS
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So ill exit the match with a feather in my cap just like I’m a Redskins fan
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Psss... I figured it out:

evaD ain't a legend in disguise. ALL his "ill" lines wouldn't fill ONE haiku
We've been lied to: his Onlyfans are the men he's subscribed to
THIS WAS FUNNY
Got an ugly bride, too. She'll do anything to get rid of this lame
Leave Dave & Buster legs wide open? ..only takes a drink & some video games
OK OK
Dave has problems getting a rise & can't actually afford the pill cost
But he thinks he'll get hard if his verses are tits up, ass cheeks, & feel soft
NOT FEELING THIS
Gave his bitch ass a pity vote & that shit he wrote? Witty? Nope... STILL lost
I'd give em a knife to slit his throat, but he aint sharp-witted enough to peel floss
DIDNT LIKE HOW IT ENDED
I know your dyslexic ass loves anagrams, but you still can't see the truth
How long till he realizes his girl's text: "U emailing V?" is "im leaVing U!"
NAH MAN
Ur a fuckin shame. Ppl call you "whats his name?" not cuz it's reversed, instead:
it's cuz your lines only show a flash of life, like I put a shotgun to ya verse's head
LIGHT CLOSER

Call the fight, ref
Opener, chart, redskins vs Onlyfans, dave buster

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What does ALR mean @Ryno?
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Dave - 1st and second bar weren’t terrible not great flips. Wrong side of average
Rotisserie was clean, okay/decent
Royce- reference was lost on me, I get the angle but loses effect
Chart felt like filler
Flew the coup was an okay name play, wasn’t a fan of the flip execution
Feather was kinda clever, but again I didn’t think you did much with it. Wasn’t hard, harsh or funny.
4 chicken/bird angles was a bit much for me. Rotisserie was good though.

Coop-

Only fans was an okay angle idea. Felt it was worded badly/confusing.
Dave n buster. Was cool
Pills okay angle- execution was soft though
I don’t know what yougoing for with the floss bar
Dyslexic bar didn’t work for me, felt fillerish
Closer wasn’t good.

Idk could be me but I only like the buster bar . That was above average. The rest I didn’t enjoy particularly.

I had one bar from each I like. Like rotisserie more than buster though. As for the leftover 2 weak jabs to 1 aswell so I got Dave here. V/Dave
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4-3. Browning was cool. Didnt like redskin line.

.chicken run and 0
Flew the coop were cool.

Mvgt to coop tho. First two were nice. Dyslexic and closer were cool
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That name must be regrettable - don’t know who you used to be
But muthafucka I’m imPeckable, da fuck something from ‘coop’ gon do to me?!

Kinda funny but also kinda corny

So Fuck you and your Plastic Scene the chrome is home but you missing one
So when me Animate show up at his place you gonna see a Chicken Run

wp is okay but the execution has some issues

He thinks gun bars are unhard but that don’t mean shit to me
Browning on Both Sides when I light him up like Rotisserie

Dope

He dropped a mag but what a drag. Dude could suck the fun out a balloon
And he prolly ducked when he heard Royce drop that gun bar in Boom

ok, im a big royce fan so I know the song well, but this is a really specific concept that's risky to take and I dont think it was strong enough to be worth the gamble since it's pretty much just verbatim the same thing royce said

Negative shit from this irrelevant bitch, you nearly made me hate the art
No show verse last week the only time your lines will make a chart

solid

And since I moved in with his mother I came to see this loser’s roots
But she said it’s time I flew the coop.... so ima shoot him off the roof

Idea is cool, not a huge fan of the wording

I’ll Butcher your Paltry verses, I’m not one to mess with man
So ill exit the match with a feather in my cap just like I’m a Redskins fan

Solid, again wording could be harsher




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We've been lied to: his Onlyfans are the men he's subscribed to

ok opener, I've already seen the concept done a few times and this didnt really take a new angle to it

Got an ugly bride, too. She'll do anything to get rid of this lame
Leave Dave & Buster legs wide open? ..only takes a drink & some video games

ok

Dave has problems getting a rise & can't actually afford the pill cost
But he thinks he'll get hard if his verses are tits up, ass cheeks, & feel soft

nah not feeling this at all

Gave his bitch ass a pity vote & that shit he wrote? Witty? Nope... STILL lost
I'd give em a knife to slit his throat, but he aint sharp-witted enough to peel floss

nah too simple

I know your dyslexic ass loves anagrams, but you still can't see the truth
How long till he realizes his girl's text: "U emailing V?" is "im leaVing U!"

meh its okay, I've never been a fan of anagram bars. What is "V" even supposed to be in this?

Ur a fuckin shame. Ppl call you "whats his name?" not cuz it's reversed, instead:
it's cuz your lines only show a flash of life, like I put a shotgun to ya verse's head

ok, again more on the simple side




overall, dave had 2 more lines than coop which is a slight advantage, but he dropped first so it's on coop to match. I think overall browning was lotb and dave was more consistent, less misses and his concepts were stronger.

mvgt dave
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This was a cool little battle. I think Dave won it. His verse was a little wittier to me and had the two lines of the battle (rotisserie and his closer). Coop’s opener was simple and effective, but I think it fell off after that... Dave won.
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I’ve got Dave. Smoother, more concise. Liked the Browning line. And Animate/Chicken run. I think if you stick around and manage the teething problems you’ll be up to speed fairly quick. It’s a fine line between corny and funny. I think the opener was too corny to hit. Flew the coop was low hanging fruit. Redskins was a bit better. I’d tend to drop maybe one nameplay max a verse — so it’s probably better to choose your best and use that rather than over saturating. Coop, I liked only fans. I also thought Dave and Buster was cool. After that the verse fell off imo. The ass/tits etc line was too corny. Email line was really bad. The others fell short in their execution in terms of the connections and harshness. This probably comes down to style preference, I liked Dave a little more. Vote Dave.
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I’m not in the league so I don’t think I can vote? I just wanted to say that you’re both super handsome guys. Good genes.
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The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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