05-18-2020, 12:10 PM | #1 |
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Week 7: Forkz (0-0) vs. Adverse (3-2)— ADVERSE WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines. @Aura @Adverse
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05-18-2020, 01:12 PM | #2 |
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Think I had Aura earlier this season? It’s fine we can run it back
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05-18-2020, 01:15 PM | #3 | |
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05-18-2020, 01:17 PM | #4 |
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05-21-2020, 12:56 AM | #5 |
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05-21-2020, 10:33 PM | #6 |
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05-21-2020, 10:56 PM | #7 |
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I'll post tomorrow probably go 10. G'luck
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05-23-2020, 10:48 PM | #9 |
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[Dinner Time]
Have you seein' stars widda hands, b. No Astronaut I'll leave your Views so mixed up that Biden won't know if you're black or not I'm BROLIC, you 'gon die. You at the gym is just to look at manly chests I got the Ad vantage point - 'n I ain't talm bout where he can see Chad the best Shame how your last love ended. She needed me cuz you were a whiny twat Every time I opened the door to eat, that pussy was waving like the Chinese spot Daiiiiiily. Best believe she went to make rounds I wasn't the only one, that box had retarded numbers like Answers battle breakdowns Now? We know your wifey is a beard. Low tier one. She's rabid, mate Your wedding kiss was on some GOOBA shit, just a rat on a faggots face |
05-23-2020, 11:08 PM | #10 |
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Have some respect, flappin his gums dudes manners a mess
Watch your pitch, fork before you get one of them stabbed through your chest Got the hammer on deck, shots to your belly and melon tear the fella to pieces Gunplay leave fork twisted without me ever touching em - that’s telekinesis I’ma gut this dude, You dying when the blades out Wrap fork in a sheet with this knife like I’m dining at a steak house And it didn’t take much to tell you’re garbage, b So confident that I’ll win you could have this bar for free Always been a quick decision maker, so if you’re walking through the ghetto And I see a fork in the road, I’ll go straight without hesitation, stompin on the pedal! |
05-23-2020, 11:18 PM | #11 |
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Forkz I literally liked nothing in your verse and your name is fucking retarded.
Your best bar Adverse, good stuff here, the second half was sweet and the steakhouse was a clear LOTB. Good stuff. Vote - Ad
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05-24-2020, 04:03 AM | #12 | ||
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05-24-2020, 12:38 PM | #13 |
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Have you seein' stars widda hands, b. No Astronaut I'll leave your Views so mixed up that Biden won't know if you're black or not Got a chuckle outta me I'm BROLIC, you 'gon die. You at the gym is just to look at manly chests I got the Ad vantage point - 'n I ain't talm bout where he can see Chad the best Not a fan of the "... and i aint talkin bout ___" bars. You had something here, just needed a lot of rewording Shame how your last love ended. She needed me cuz you were a whiny twat Every time I opened the door to eat, that pussy was waving like the Chinese spot Not feelin it Daiiiiiily. Best believe she went to make rounds I wasn't the only one, that box had retarded numbers like Answers battle breakdowns Filler Now? We know your wifey is a beard. Low tier one. She's rabid, mate Your wedding kiss was on some GOOBA shit, just a rat on a faggots face Not terrible 3/10 VS Have some respect, flappin his gums dudes manners a mess Watch your pitch, fork before you get one of them stabbed through your chest Nice Got the hammer on deck, shots to your belly and melon tear the fella to pieces Gunplay leave fork twisted without me ever touching em - that’s telekinesis Might be the only gun bar I've ever liked I’ma gut this dude, You dying when the blades out Wrap fork in a sheet with this knife like I’m dining at a steak house Not bad And it didn’t take much to tell you’re garbage, b So confident that I’ll win you could have this bar for free Filler Always been a quick decision maker, so if you’re walking through the ghetto And I see a fork in the road, I’ll go straight without hesitation, stompin on the pedal! Ok Not bad. One of the few people here who actually use setups properly. 3 straight, and 4/5 NPs ain't great but they were all quality. 8/10 Pretty comfortable win here. Vote: Adverse |
05-24-2020, 01:03 PM | #14 |
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Not gonna lie adverse has this on his first bar
Fork had some cool ideas tho the 69 line and the battle breakdowns bars had good potential I think adverse was on a slightly higher level here Good read
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05-24-2020, 01:08 PM | #15 |
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ad vantage point and closer were solid ideas, just needed better execution
vs first 6 lines i fucked with alot of nameplays but it worked, i mean what else are u gonna do against someone named Forkz lol.. good shit vote Adverse
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05-25-2020, 01:05 AM | #16 |
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Have you seein' stars widda hands, b. No Astronaut
I'll leave your Views so mixed up that Biden won't know if you're black or not Daiiiiiily. Best believe she went to make rounds I wasn't the only one, that box had retarded numbers like Answers battle breakdowns VS Have some respect, flappin his gums dudes manners a mess Watch your pitch, fork before you get one of them stabbed through your chest Got the hammer on deck, shots to your belly and melon tear the fella to pieces Gunplay leave fork twisted without me ever touching em - that’s telekinesis Fork needs some work.. you got the idea u just need to get more aggressive n creative..attack ur opponent..the bars I quoted didn't necessarily hit but they had potential.. keep working on your writtens bro.. adverse came cool.. better then the last verse I seen from him.. def burned out on the nameplays.. got boring do something else.. I did like the fork in the road line tho but so many fork plays dulled it.. Vote adverse
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