Week 7: Enbombz (0-0) vs. Mac (0-1) - ENBOMBZ WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@Mac
@Enbombz

[Mac]

thanks blue

check-in

[Enbombz]

check

[Enbombz]

Your Boring to write for n it’s not cool with me b
The most memorable thing you’ve done, is when Blue forgot you completely
Mac droppin quotable’s? Not likely I’ll warn ya,
Macklemore likely stick on one his albums and cry in the corner
When you're out ya hoe getting fucked n making skrilla for Bj's
Feels like a replay, second beat down this week for trynna split up a Threeway
That bitch bully you n sleep with ya mates
Closest you get to going against the grain is scraping their seed off her face
Grotty poor bummy fuck, so sad n pathetic
I'd put down a grandeur idea of that is running water + gas n electric
Go on make ya excuses, you ain't 'bout it you cuck
Funny You're clutching at straws...with no grip of the reality of how much you suck
How'd you even get a vote? I'm just asking cos all that shit was poor
As far as dividing opinions...Now we enjoy text a fraction of what we did before
From reading it feels like you text have never got along
I don't even enjoy reducing people to tears, but to repeat.. You're in the bottom one

[Mac]

don't take this personal softy, y'all should take off your hats
cuz ill leave bombz so salty pic him filling a whole season chat
and don't go around being bossy, we understand your frustation
the only rep u'll get is under your username.... and that shit has inflation
this crook trying to change all of sudden, dude u are fucking grim
if he doesnt fuck with Minor assaults anymore its cuz they keep em away from him
it's sad his life's disturbing, has it ever been rewarding?
if enbombz ever setting records.. it involves mugshots and CCTV recordings
this dogs always barking, pussy you dont wanna catch me moody
how I'll toss Bombs all over the place u'd think I'm producing a Michael Bay movie
your girl's a beauty, whenever she's with me it gets really hot
so much foreplay with her it became the kind of porn u'd watch for the plot
this faggot screams frustation, wannabe big Shot can't keep it subtle
i'll knock out this cunts life aaall way backwards call him benjamin button
n I won't be delicate, you'll probably end paralytic at the very least
then, the only full time job you'll ever get is keeping ur wheelchairs greased

r.i.p not joog

[FGR]

Originally Posted by Enbombz

Your Boring to write for n it’s not cool with me b
The most memorable thing you’ve done, is when Blue forgot you completely
filler..no real hit
Mac droppin quotable’s? Not likely I’ll warn ya,
Macklemore likely stick on one his albums and cry in the corner
cool nameplay but how u used it fell flat
When you're out ya hoe getting fucked n making skrilla for Bj's
Feels like a replay, second beat down this week for trynna split up a Threeway
I don't get what's going on here??
That bitch bully you n sleep with ya mates
Closest you get to going against the grain is scraping their seed off her face
nah
Grotty poor bummy fuck, so sad n pathetic
I'd put down a grandeur idea of that is running water + gas n electric
cool wordplay didn't hit that hard tho.. u could of done alot more
Go on make ya excuses, you ain't 'bout it you cuck
Funny You're clutching at straws...with no grip of the reality of how much you suck
this was ok I guess
How'd you even get a vote? I'm just asking cos all that shit was poor
As far as dividing opinions...Now we enjoy text a fraction of what we did before
ok
From reading it feels like you text have never got along
I don't even enjoy reducing people to tears, but to repeat.. You're in the bottom one
nah this shit is hella used..tears tiers

Vs

Originally Posted by Mac

don't take this personal softy, y'all should take off your hats
cuz ill leave bombz so salty pic him filling a whole season chat
nah
and don't go around being bossy, we understand your frustation
the only rep u'll get is under your username.... and that shit has inflation
meh
this crook trying to change all of sudden, dude u are fucking grim
if he doesnt fuck with Minor assaults anymore its cuz they keep em away from him
ok..your better attempt so far.. been done but okay still
it's sad his life's disturbing, has it ever been rewarding?
if enbombz ever setting records.. it involves mugshots and CCTV recordings
seems filler ish
this dogs always barking, pussy you dont wanna catch me moody
how I'll toss Bombs all over the place u'd think I'm producing a Michael Bay movie
okay hit.. wasn't to creative or hard but it's a light jab
your girl's a beauty, whenever she's with me it gets really hot
so much foreplay with her it became the kind of porn u'd watch for the plot
lol funny but didn't hit hard
this faggot screams frustation, wannabe big Shot can't keep it subtle
i'll knock out this cunts life aaall way backwards call him benjamin button
another mild jab..not bad
n I won't be delicate, you'll probably end paralytic at the very least
then, the only full time job you'll ever get is keeping ur wheelchairs greased
wasn't to hard.. light hit again

Ok...no hate at all here fellas but alot of this was week... ENBOMB had a cool nameplay and a cool wordplay but it wasn't delivered to pack alot of sting... Mac had attempts but they weren't strong or creative enough.. u gotta think outside the box more..instead of dropping a 16...work harder on making a hotter 10... Overall I gotta give this to enbombs for stronger attempts...but Mac wasn't to far off from winning this.. VOTE ENBOMBZ

[Coop]

Enbombz

Your Boring to write for n it’s not cool with me b
The most memorable thing you’ve done, is when Blue forgot you completely
Soft opener
Mac droppin quotable’s? Not likely I’ll warn ya,
Macklemore likely stick on one his albums and cry in the corner
Simple/filler-ish
When you're out ya hoe getting fucked n making skrilla for Bj's
Feels like a replay, second beat down this week for trynna split up a Threeway
Set up hits harder than the punch.
That bitch bully you n sleep with ya mates
Closest you get to going against the grain is scraping their seed off her face
Ehhh
Grotty poor bummy fuck, so sad n pathetic
I'd put down a grandeur idea of that is running water + gas n electric
Lazy
Go on make ya excuses, you ain't 'bout it you cuck
Funny You're clutching at straws...with no grip of the reality of how much you suck
Not feelin it
How'd you even get a vote? I'm just asking cos all that shit was poor
As far as dividing opinions...Now we enjoy text a fraction of what we did before
Best bar
From reading it feels like you text have never got along
I don't even enjoy reducing people to tears, but to repeat.. You're in the bottom one
Worded differently this would've been a hit.

Man I didn't like much until near the end. Your setups are mostly lazy and rarely relate to the punch. Too many statements that barely diss the guy, passing off as punches.

4/10


VS


Mac

don't take this personal softy, y'all should take off your hats
cuz ill leave bombz so salty pic him filling a whole season chat
Huh?
and don't go around being bossy, we understand your frustation
the only rep u'll get is under your username.... and that shit has inflation
Didn't hit
this crook trying to change all of sudden, dude u are fucking grim
if he doesnt fuck with Minor assaults anymore its cuz they keep em away from him
above avg filler
it's sad his life's disturbing, has it ever been rewarding?
if enbombz ever setting records.. it involves mugshots and CCTV recordings
Ehhhh
this dogs always barking, pussy you dont wanna catch me moody
how I'll toss Bombs all over the place u'd think I'm producing a Michael Bay movie
Cool, but weak as a diss
your girl's a beauty, whenever she's with me it gets really hot
so much foreplay with her it became the kind of porn u'd watch for the plot
Meh. Those exist?
this faggot screams frustation, wannabe big Shot can't keep it subtle
i'll knock out this cunts life aaall way backwards call him benjamin button
Not a diss and didn't rhyme
n I won't be delicate, you'll probably end paralytic at the very least
then, the only full time job you'll ever get is keeping ur wheelchairs greased
Weak

2/10


Not feelin much here either. Sheesh.





Dividing opinions >


Vote: Enbombz

[Answer]

Your Boring to write for n it’s not cool with me b
The most memorable thing you’ve done, is when Blue forgot you completely

kinda funny but too straightforward for me, could've picked a more clever angle for this, I think.

Mac droppin quotable’s? Not likely I’ll warn ya,
Macklemore likely stick on one his albums and cry in the corner

Solid

When you're out ya hoe getting fucked n making skrilla for Bj's
Feels like a replay, second beat down this week for trynna split up a Threeway

I like the idea, 3way/3some bars are just kinda cliche and I didnt feel like this was unique enough to warrant the angle

That bitch bully you n sleep with ya mates
Closest you get to going against the grain is scraping their seed off her face

This seems to imply she has a beard idk Im not feeling it

Grotty poor bummy fuck, so sad n pathetic
I'd put down a grandeur idea of that is running water + gas n electric

ok

Go on make ya excuses, you ain't 'bout it you cuck
Funny You're clutching at straws...with no grip of the reality of how much you suck

nah im not feeling this one

How'd you even get a vote? I'm just asking cos all that shit was poor
As far as dividing opinions...Now we enjoy text a fraction of what we did before

the idea is dope, execution wasn't fully coherent

From reading it feels like you text have never got along
I don't even enjoy reducing people to tears, but to repeat.. You're in the bottom one

nah this is a played concept




don't take this personal softy, y'all should take off your hats
cuz ill leave bombz so salty pic him filling a whole season chat

apart from the salt/season idea i dont know what the role of bombz is supposed to be in this wp, this is a miss for me

and don't go around being bossy, we understand your frustation
the only rep u'll get is under your username.... and that shit has inflation

Nah, this is a miss for me

this crook trying to change all of sudden, dude u are fucking grim
if he doesnt fuck with Minor assaults anymore its cuz they keep em away from him

cool idea, i think the execution couldve been done better

it's sad his life's disturbing, has it ever been rewarding?
if enbombz ever setting records.. it involves mugshots and CCTV recordings

nah not feeling it

this dogs always barking, pussy you dont wanna catch me moody
how I'll toss Bombs all over the place u'd think I'm producing a Michael Bay movie

eh, i feel like michael bay bars arent the freshest and I think you could've done a more creative nameplay than this

your girl's a beauty, whenever she's with me it gets really hot
so much foreplay with her it became the kind of porn u'd watch for the plot

nah im not digging this, the punchline's too literal to the setup

this faggot screams frustation, wannabe big Shot can't keep it subtle
i'll knock out this cunts life aaall way backwards call him benjamin button

nah this is a pretty old concept that's been done a lot in the past

n I won't be delicate, you'll probably end paralytic at the very least
then, the only full time job you'll ever get is keeping ur wheelchairs greased

nah this felt like a weak closer



either macklemore or minor assault as lotb but i feel like overall enbombz was more consistent throughout and had less misses.


mvgt - enbombz

[UPN Zuch]

I liked the seed bar from enbombz and the plot line from Mac. I felt nothing else in this battle. I believe the seed line is the better of the two.

Vote- Enbombz

[Adverse]

I'm not going to spend a lot of time breaking this down because truth be told i wasn't feeling most of it. Thought Bombz bad an alright angle in his opener, and was on to something with that macklemore play but ultimately didn't execute it well enough. I thought he had some potential on some bars but was just really rough in execution.

On the other side Mac had about the same narrative, I only really dug the Michael Bay line and that wasn't a haymaker by any means. You guys both need some work on execution and wording on punches but had some decent ideas. Keep grinding guys.

Going to vote for Enbombz here, was a little less rough around the edges. Good battle

V/Bombz