05-03-2020, 09:22 PM | #1 |
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Week 5: Sinacog Da Fuckin GAWD (0-3) vs. Slect (0-4) - SLECT WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due THURSDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends Sunday • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount. @Serpent Lord @Slect
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05-03-2020, 10:20 PM | #2 |
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05-03-2020, 11:23 PM | #3 |
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I'm Heaven's born, I'm the serpent lord from the German horn
Burning accord's of burning horns; I'll 'kill you' and you'll learn you're born.. I'm the perfect sword; I'm the serpent dragon from the wind dragon I killed ten daggers, and killed ten dragons with ten daggers I'm the wind dragon; I killed Chinese diplomats and aristocrats I'm the Siamese twin from the lightning wind; I'm 'burning sea' like Iscariots I'm the heaven's born wind dragon of RA: I'm the heaven's born dragon I'm the anguish of ten dragons; I killed you with ten daggers I'm the ten daggers of RA; I killed Chinese diplomats and aristocrats I'm the wind dragon of RA; I killed a demon with a obelisk I'm the demon swordsman; I killed accord's of anguish scorn I'm the dragon horns; I 'killed sea' like Adam's thorn.. |
05-08-2020, 04:31 AM | #4 |
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need ext, will post soon
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05-09-2020, 01:22 AM | #5 | |
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aka Dragon Rapper.
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I'm navigating over emcee's but mess with me, you'll get tagged. No need for us to cross the 7 seas to already know...Sinbad. Fuck ya devil tales. Demons trait 'n a true killer...U'll be checked & rattled. It's funny to me you killed 50 zillion demons but can't stand up to a netcee in a battle. here to bully & tease ya, leave ya & all ya features shook like a seizure with set-ups that are purely fantasized, I'm starting to think you're conditioned with Paramnesia I'll settle this with punches only. No need to murder ya with a weapon. Put ya in box, they'll know I'm clearing sin out, ...no catholic priest hosting virtual confessions beat me, bro? no, in the ring - U'll need more than ur freak show, geek poem cheat-codes. If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat. another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump U get mimicked as a beginner, no1 mimicks me cuz I'm one of the sickest spitters. Everyone will gather around & mockasin up cuz he's softer than indian slippers. Last edited by slecht; 05-09-2020 at 01:38 AM. |
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05-09-2020, 03:31 AM | #6 |
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Vote sinicog. Excellent work as usual.
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05-09-2020, 04:11 AM | #7 |
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Honestly sick of feeding the narrative of Sinacog being this Brian Scalebrine type figure, dude never tries to improve and is essentially a free win for anyone who puts forward even a microcosm of an effort forward. The only thing even remotely resembling a punch in his verse was the “killed sea like Adams thorn” but even then it was a force and one attempt per battle verse will never win you anything. So again, I’m tired of feeding the narrative on Sin
Slecht is a bit of a sleeper, he’s been a proven battler when not dealing with issues with deadlines and what not. This wasn’t his best verse by any means but it didn’t have to be. He had a few light jabs but they connected enough. If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat. another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump U get mimicked as a beginner, no1 mimicks me cuz I'm one of the sickest spitters. Everyone will gather around & mockasin up cuz he's softer than indian slippers. ^ that was my favorite segment So overall Slecht strolls his way to an easy win here but did you expect anything else? V~Slecht |
05-09-2020, 11:16 AM | #8 |
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I only read slecht’s opener and sinicog’s entire verse
That opener slayed me V/slecht |
05-09-2020, 01:46 PM | #9 |
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I'm navigating over emcee's but mess with me, you'll get tagged.
No need for us to cross the 7 seas to already know...Sinbad. lol decent Fuck ya devil tales. Demons trait 'n a true killer...U'll be checked & rattled. It's funny to me you killed 50 zillion demons but can't stand up to a netcee in a battle. nice here to bully & tease ya, leave ya & all ya features shook like a seizure with set-ups that are purely fantasized, I'm starting to think you're conditioned with Paramnesia don't get this one pal. My lack of vocabulary but not exactly a common word I don't think I'll settle this with punches only. No need to murder ya with a weapon. Put ya in box, they'll know I'm clearing sin out, ...no catholic priest hosting virtual confessions this was stretched as fuck and tbh felt overkill on sin plays, predictable beat me, bro? no, in the ring - U'll need more than ur freak show, geek poem cheat-codes. If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat. coo another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump fair hit U get mimicked as a beginner, no1 mimicks me cuz I'm one of the sickest spitters. Everyone will gather around & mockasin up cuz he's softer than indian slippers. meh I got it but wasn't savage enough for me Decent showing. You did what needed to be done. Nice |
05-09-2020, 01:56 PM | #10 |
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So serious vote here, the only lines that sin has that can possibly be interpreted as being a diss to his opponent his "I'll 'kill you' and you'll learn you're born.." which doesn't make any sense, and maybee "I 'killed sea' like Adam's thorn.." which would only make sense if Slecht has some alias with the name "Sea". Otherwise sinacog's verse was essentially just a non-sensical topical verse, so I can't really do much of a breakdown on it
Slecht I'm navigating over emcee's but mess with me, you'll get tagged. No need for us to cross the 7 seas to already know...Sinbad. Funny opener. The whole 7 seas idea wouldn't generally be considered as an extra layer but since Sinacog is known for weird cryptic lines like this, I think it enhanced your bar. Fuck ya devil tales. Demons trait 'n a true killer...U'll be checked & rattled. It's funny to me you killed 50 zillion demons but can't stand up to a netcee in a battle. This bar is a bit basic but it's funny. here to bully & tease ya, leave ya & all ya features shook like a seizure with set-ups that are purely fantasized, I'm starting to think you're conditioned with Paramnesia I think you couldve attacked this concept in a different way and it wouldve landed harder. I'll settle this with punches only. No need to murder ya with a weapon. Put ya in box, they'll know I'm clearing sin out, ...no catholic priest hosting virtual confessions "Sin" bars are already pretty played out, so you should definitely aim to be more out of the box with your thinking when trying to come up with bars like this beat me, bro? no, in the ring - U'll need more than ur freak show, geek poem cheat-codes. If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat. I like the general idea. Execution is okay, but it could've been a little smoother another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump Given the context from the quote, I thought this was a good bar U get mimicked as a beginner, no1 mimicks me cuz I'm one of the sickest spitters. Everyone will gather around & mockasin up cuz he's softer than indian slippers. Okay wordplay, I don't feel like the wording is funny enough to make me lol nor is it aggressive enough to land as a haymaker overall sinbad and asthma pump are the stand outs. mvgt - slecht |
05-10-2020, 05:44 PM | #11 |
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I'm navigating over emcee's but mess with me, you'll get tagged.
No need for us to cross the 7 seas to already know...Sinbad. beat me, bro? no, in the ring - U'll need more than ur freak show, geek poem cheat-codes. If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat. another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump vs Nothing Slect, work on matching your syllables in your rhymes. A few minor changes can make a huge diff. Sin, I have no advice for a troll account that likely only exists to vote for himself Mvgt Slect
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05-10-2020, 05:53 PM | #12 |
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To be for real I wasn't feeling either, but after I read Sinacogs stuff I thought there is no way that the other guy can't win.
No offense to Sinacog but that was like some weird ass topical verse or something... and it seems like there is a language barrier vote - slet for sure, I wasn't impressed by anything really but you know, live up to your competition or whatever.. he didn't need anything to win it. no offense sincog keep writing but damn.
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05-10-2020, 05:59 PM | #13 |
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Slect wins
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